Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Reserved!

Want to read this in a peaceful mind! 😆

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Aabish_02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

awesome update
very well written and perfect
arjun sensed riya presence
precap is interesting
waiting for nxt update

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Suryatapa sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Fantastic update love it very much ETF nahi jan pae ki Riya zinda hai Arjun thought of Riya when he get the similar smell of Riya's sent Waiting for the next update Precap seems very interesting Thanks for the pm

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EkNoKiNashedi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

okk...how on earth i missed this one??? am i insane???

ah, never mund, better late than never is my mantra and i am always late...

wow...ok, after reading only this parts, i imagine riya is not dead bt undercover with NBI, right? well blame my lazinss disnt read first chapters LOL

okkk..so she is out there in club z to catch someone? she almost caught him, but damn ! ETF came in scene...well well, i enjoyed office scenes...i expected samjun ww3 bt it didnt happen LOL...and also liza shree moment...nice...

and then they were in club, and arjun feeling riya's presence...wow!!! attraction or love, he still feel her, miss her. she meant to him something, maybe its guilt...bt i will say its attarction, the hiddedn love which didnt come out.

okkks, so ETF almost met Riya, and precap is awesome...something fissy abt death is it? i will wait for thier expression...

ps can u send me pm next time???

pps update soon

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sravz23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

u r an awesome writer.this ff is captivating.

plzzz do write more.👏😊⭐️

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Vampu we guessed it right re Hi5!!! Yipee...

Super duper part...

So they are one step closer to the killer...

Riya left the killer??? Well that was need of the time... but the way she recognised Arjun... just she can do it...

Ri was part of ETF for her mission as NIB agent??

RR convo was good... Arjun replying to Rathore in calm way... great...

loved those moments in ETF... Aisha's thought abt Rathore

Small but nice moment of Shirza...

Arjun felt her presence near him... if he had trusted his instinct now may b he could hv met him... but looks like that have to wait...

Case is getting more interesting...

Precap is intresting so now they find Riya's death fishy but why all of sudden?? Continue soon...

Edited by Leki - 12 years ago

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Superb updates
Love shree n chotu
Riya is great
Awesome precap
Continue soon plz

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benaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Hey! Omg thank you thank you for the lengthiest update ever. I had such a great time reading this. On the one hand I didn't want it to finish and on the other when I saw there was a 2nd part as well which was as lengthy as the first I kinda jumped!

Totally enjoyed the first part not only because it was so detailed but also because of the way you portrayed Riya. Indeed here she is so strong as an individual and carries off her job almost single-handedly though there are her two co-agents.In the midst the touch of comedy when Riya thought of Shree-Chotu's reaction was nice hehe can't wait to see how once reunited they all interact. It is also one aspect of the show I miss their masti and funny comebacks together. I also liked how Riya reacted to the situation and took care of it. This was very nicely described.

Loll I can't wait to see how you handle Ayesha and Rathore this should be fun to read :D and maybe something there with Shree and Lisa? hehe looking forward to their relationship. Arjun-Rathore's friendship should also be something I'm waiting for and how you tackle them. The fact that Rathore didn't scream back at Rawte was a surprising element with everyone expecting the obvious. And finally Arjun's reaction to Riya's presence on the scene was awesome as if he could literally feel her there

Well the precap seems interesting with Shree digging for the truth hope it comes out soon and they manage to find Riya

I didn't really miss Arjun in this update because your focus on Riya was the highlight and I'm sure we gonna get more of Ariya soon.

So I think this is the lengthiest comment I have ever drafted and soorry for taking up too much space.

Eagerly waiting for Saturday now!

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Ye yeiepee !
So leki and nakshatra too guessed that! Good guys! Hi5
Aww this one is for us🤗
was eagerly waiting for this piece!
So your self-satisfaction did work dear! It was awesome! You are very right in your own words . Not a bit of imperfection. It was like a true spy thriller explaing every bit of the case and connected sources👏.

So as a secret agent the way you portrayed riya here I liked the most. She felt like was just another case but it was never like this i guess. She still connected with them.

Yeah it is true, clubs like Club are the haeaven for the people like this and also all the destroyers and trouble makers are here! 😡

and the deatiled view of that club was fantastic work!
And the way riya adjusted herself with the surrounding , escaping from the CCTV camera, describing her as a very brilliant and skilled.
As well as her team work is good.

Oh so she never wanted to cross her path with ETf! That sounds interesting!

Wow she knew the killer and she was just minutes away from him and ACP arjun rawte made her sense hormonal weak☺️
so she could recgnize him. Uff she left the culprit, in a way she didi good job as it would again relate her with ETF!😉

god rathod is like this always, but the surrising thing was getting no reaction of arjun 😉.
Interesting. And instead showing his own anger he calmed him down. Great job rawte and he too made is teammates surprise 😆

hmm crush of rathod, ayesha *chuparustam*. 😆
oh just loved the teams hardworking and the efforts they solemly giving to the case. Still this media is making thing worse😡

wow thanks to the NCB officer , who gave the link!
It seems there is more apart from this serial murders along with club Z.

Theam planning was good and loved the aring nature of all. And and and , how can I forgot the ACP rawte. Ah, such a small trace of fragrance made him think about her. It is more than guilt , you should think Rawte😉.

Oh god! Just hate the way teens spoiling their live for the addiction!😡.
This story of your is also spitting light on the issues of society. *hats off* .

In a whole I enjoyed every bit of this part. And waiting for more of this!

Precap is interesting! So shree found something unusual. 😉
great!
Lovely update❤️

@ leki-
no PMs for me also 😡😡