Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

res mar mujhe first aana hai


^^ Toh aa jayiye na?

Lekin update page 16 peh hai. Toh aap yahan RES kar lijiye;)



Originally posted by: devildiva21

precap is very interesting...!!

waiting for the chapter😳


It will be up at 6 o'clock today😃
Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
me first

unres

this one is for us.
lots of hug to you🤗

it was awesome, blossom, fantastic, fabulous, amazing, cool, super-duper, blockbuster , mindblowing ant yet mysterious update dear.

love the way you portrayed riya here I liked the it. She felt like was just another case. She still connected with them.

riya find out the criminal but she left because etf reached there. i thought they were meet but cant.

loved etf moments.

sasha moments also nice.

i thought www3 began but aisa kuch nahi hua.

but kuch nahi hua.

aww.. shirza moments was awesome.

ariya feels that they were close but couldnt find.

after vampu i give you mystery queen tag.

precap is awesome.

continue soon.

waiting for the update.

and thanx for pm.
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amri174

^^ Toh aa jayiye na?


Lekin update page 16 peh hai. Toh aap yahan RES kar lijiye;)


aa gaye first main
yipeee🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago

First of all thanks for a long update.

Loved the way u potray Riya's character. She is confident, bold n intelligent.

Wow she is their best agent n that's why her team got this case. Interesting.

She is giving solid competition to Arjun or may I say she is one step ahead of him.

Loved her POV about her team members n Choree imagined her as ghost.

OMG she got the culprit but at the last moment ETF arrived.

She reminded me of Angelina Jolie.

Awww wht a telepathy!!!!!! Riya nai yaad kiya aur Arjun hazir.

Wow Rathod blasted on his team n Arjun is the one who mellowed him down by his reasoning. Unbelievable.

Loved Aisha's POV about Rathod.

Shriza moments r sweet.

Case is getting more n more interesting.

Loved Arjun's sharp observing skills.

OMG he felt the presence of Riya there but sushed that thought away.

Precap looks exciting.

Eagerly waiting for their face-to face meet.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Precap really intresting... but i know dey wont meet Riya may see them but they wont... any ways waiting for nxt chapter...PM Me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

Precap really intresting... but i know dey wont meet Riya may see them but they wont... any ways waiting for nxt chapter...PM Me


Read the second chapter to find out if your suspicions are true, dear😆

I have a surprise for you there.

Originally posted by: ..Annie..

very nice update :)
the case seems super interesting
i feel really bad for the 3 girls who got murdered
arjun's observing skills are pretty awesome
shree'e POV about riya was just beautiful
awww how feet chotu and shree really miss riya so much
i really love this riya
looking forward to read more of this story
please continue soon

sorry for the late comment

Love
Annie


Thanks a lot for commenting, sweetie!

And yes, the Riya of this story will be a far cry from the meek Riya of the ETF.

Check out chapters 2a and b😳
Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amez update loveit plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG this was mind blowing
loved the way you potrayed about arjun and riya's sensation of eachother it was so wonderful and magical
ayehsa's crush for rathore and liza shree moment were awesome
the mission the case it's all so intoxicating
thanx for pm and will be waiting for ur next update

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