Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
choree are missing riya
case is so complicated
cont soon
and do pm me
I have snd u buddy rqust
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome concept ...
written beautifully...
This case seems very complicated

plz pm me
Edited by ninii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! First of all thank you for doing an ArIya FF and sticking to the main storyline as in the show :) I was so happy and you have done such a wonderful job with the prologue as well as the first chapter. You sure have me hooked onto this one.
I love how you established within the prologue the setting and the two lives led by Riya and Arjun. And the first chapter was just awesome I didnt want it to end :D I liked how Shree was mentioned still missing Riya and how Chotu comforted him. Can't wait to see how they react once they learn of Riya's existence. And finally can't wait to see how you bring Arjun and Riya together. Well the fact that you have Riya working undercover at the pub and who seems to be on the lookout for the same murderer as Arjun kinda points to them meeting through this case only. Looking forward to your next update and am so gonna stalk you! :P

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was amazing!! Very well written 👍🏼

Interesting concept and great start loved it :)

Continue soon! 😊
Edited by MaaneetDeewangi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

awesome update
choree are missing riya
case is so complicated
cont soon
and do pm me
I have snd u buddy rqust


Thanks for commenting!

Chapter 2 will be up this evening, 6:00 P.M. Indian standard time.

Will accept your buddy request😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ninii

Awsome concept ...
written beautifully...
This case seems very complicated

plz pm me



Originally posted by: MaaneetDeewangi

This was amazing!! Very well written 👍🏼


Interesting concept and great start loved it :)

Continue soon! 😊



Thanks guys! Wait for chapter two, it will be posted today😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: benaz

Hey! First of all thank you for doing an ArIya FF and sticking to the main storyline as in the show :) I was so happy and you have done such a wonderful job with the prologue as well as the first chapter. You sure have me hooked onto this one.

I love how you established within the prologue the setting and the two lives led by Riya and Arjun. And the first chapter was just awesome I didnt want it to end :D I liked how Shree was mentioned still missing Riya and how Chotu comforted him. Can't wait to see how they react once they learn of Riya's existence. And finally can't wait to see how you bring Arjun and Riya together. Well the fact that you have Riya working undercover at the pub and who seems to be on the lookout for the same murderer as Arjun kinda points to them meeting through this case only. Looking forward to your next update and am so gonna stalk you! :P


First of all, thanks for such a detailed response to my story.

And yes, I am sticking to the show as it is after Riya was shown dead.

I think that one of the most essential aspects of the show- the friendship between the team members, esp Chottu and Shree, Rathore and Arjun has been largely ignored, except in an episode or two.

And that is only one of the things I hope to explore in this story.

And yes, there will be a lot of romance in store for Arjun and Riya. Things will be drastically changing once the ETF knows that Riya is alive😛 Their reaction is going to be dhamakedaar:)

Keep stalking the thread, Chapter 2 will be up soon!!!
Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AUTHOR'S NOTE-


Chapter 2 is coming up soon.

Today, 6:00 p.m., Indian Standard Time.

PRECAP- Riya is at a place and the ETF also unexpectedly arrives there.

What will happen next?

Stay tuned;)
Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res mar mujhe first aana hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
precap is very interesting...!!
waiting for the chapter😳

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