Khwabo Ki Manzilein.. Last part on pg 57 - Page 9

part-13

Saare dosto ki misunderstanding clear to ho gayi per koi aur bhi hai jo apni galati ki wajah se ab bhi guilty feel kar raha hai..yes its our dr.Ipshita jo

sachchayi janne ke baad kaafi upset hai ...

[Ipshita apne room mein hai..kaafi upset hai..]

Ipshita to herself: mujhe sachchayi jaane bina Major Rajveer se aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi... mujhe unse ja kar maafi maangni chahiye...

[Ipshita Raj ke room jaati hai aur darwaze per rukti hai...phir kuch hichkichahat se door knock karti hai...]

Raj darwaza kholta hai...

Rajveer: aap? [gives a surprised look]

Ipshita: ji..darasal hum aapse kuch kehna chahte hai...

Rajveer [foldings his hands] ji kahiye ….

Ipshita: i'm sorry

Rajveer [just stares at her for a moment]..kisliye??

Ipshita: humne bina sachchayi jane aapko bahot kuch keh diya... hume aapse aise behave nahi karna chahiye tha.. per hum karte bhi kya..cadet Jaisingh jis haal mien hospital laayi gayi thi..aur phir woh baar baar aap hi ka naam le rahi thi, aur phir guards ne bhi humse yehi kaha ki unhone aapko aur cadet Jaisingh ko ground pe dekh tha..to hume laga ki

Raj: ki cadet Jaisingh ko maine punish kiya..

Ipshita: ji..per hum galat the, cadet Jaisingh ne hume sab kuch bata diya ....hum aapko galat samajh baithe, aapne khud use waha se bhej diya aur humne ap hi ko.. n e ways..hum bas yaha aapse maafi maangne aaye..i'm really very sorry...

Rajveer: ok...

Ipshita: iska matlab aap humse naraz nahi hai...

Raj [picks a book in his hand and pretends to be reading it] doctor ipshita naraz apno se hua jata hai aur hum to abhi tak ekdusre ko thik se jante bhi nahi hai……apki bate mere liye be maine thi so naraz hone ka sawal hi nahi uthta…

Ipshita: hume laga ki sachchayi janne ke baad aapse maafi mangna hamara farz hai, isiliye hum yaha aaye per...

Raj [turns towards her] I appreciate tht… but abi mujhe kuch kam hai [pointing towards door]so can u plz….

Ipshita bas Raj ko dekhti hai phir kaafi upset hokar waha se chali jati hai.... Raj bhi apne room se nikalkar kahi jata hai...

Ipshita apne room se kuch books leti hai aur phir staff room ki taraf jaati hai... woh staff room ke bahar hi hoti hai ..to woh Vaishnavi, Pritha aur Devyani ki baatein sunti hai.. woh wahi darwaze per hi ruk jaati hai

Vaishnavi : per bhabhi itna kuch hone ke baad bhi Raj ne ek lafz tak nahi kaha..

Devyani: Vaishnavi..tum to Raj ko jaanti hi ho, use kabhi bhi kisi ko bhi safayi dena pasand nahi hai…..

Pritha: yeh Raj sir bhi na..pata nahi kis mitti ke bane hai…

[Suraj aur Kunal kuch kaam mein busy rehte hai..]

Suraj: Raj?ab kya hua?

Vaishnavi: nahi bahiya koi badi baat to nahi..per.. [aur woh Suraj ko Ipshita aur Raj ki baate bata deti hai]

Suraj: oh to ye bat hai but don't worry mujhe nahi lagta ke raj Ipshita se naraz hai…. kyouki wo bhi janta hai ki Ipshita bas cadet ki halat ko le ke concern thi….

Kunal: bhaiya bilkul thik keh rahe hai, aur waise bhi ab to cadet Jaisingh thik hai na..aur Raj bhi thik hai, to un baato ko discus karne ka kya fayda..

Pritha: job hi ho lekin use bina sach jaane Raj sir se iss tarha se baat nahi karni chahiye thi..

Karan: o meri jhasi ki rani bas kar jaha mauka dekha nahi ke larna shuru kar deti ho

[sabhi Ipshita aur Raj ke baare mein discuss kar rahe hote hai bina yeh jaane ki Ipshita darwaze per khadi yeh sab sun rahi hai, woh waha se khamoshi se chali jati hai...Suraj use jate dekh leta hai]

Suraj use rokte hue bahar jata hai..

Suraj: ex-cuse me..dr.oberoi..

Ipshita palatti hai..

Suraj: mm.. hum sab to bas..

Ipshita: its ok sir... hume aap sabhi se koi shikayat nahi hai...

Suraj: agar aisa hi hai to tum ander kyun nahi aayi..

Ipshita: woh hamare lecture ka waqt ho gaya isiliye...

Suraj: r u sure koi aur baat nahi hai?

Ipshita: ji sir..koi aur bat nahi hai..

Suraj: tumhara chehra to kuch aur hi keh raha hai..phir bhi agar tum kehti ho main tumhara yakeen kar leta hu..

Ipshita: hum chale sir?

Suraj: ha ...

Ipshita leaves....

Suraj to himself: achi larki hai.. [smiles and walks back towards staff room ]

Ipshita enters the classroom....

Cadets all together: gud morning mam.

Ipshita: gud morning cadets... please sit down... let me introduce my self first...i'm Dr.Iphita Oberoi... and I am here to teach u medical aids this subject will be combinedly covered by me and dr. Vaishnavi chopra she will be here in some time. Till then let me tell u tht I will cover up theoretical portion while doc Vaishnavi will do the practical part here u will be tought all the first aids and initiatives u shuld take in case of war injury

[as usual Ashi, Rohan , Anu aur Yuvi bore hone lagte hai and they start mummering]

Rohan: oh god! bas yeh hi baki reh gaya tha... are hum yaha soldiers banne aaye hai ya doctors?

Yuvi: isse to achcha hota hum doctors hi bann jate... atleast yaha ki punishments se to bachte….

Anu: but yaar she is so pretty and look at her dress….

Abhi: ssshhhh!!!! chup

Ipshita: well cadets main jaanti hu ki aapko hamara u medical aid sikhana kuch ajeeb lage..aap kahenge ki yeh sab to hume school mein hi sikha hai..per cadets

military mein bhi medical aid plays an vital role...jung me spahi ko kai tarah ki situations ka samna karna parta hai usme se sabse bura wo hota hai jab koi sipahi jung me ghayal ho jaye…. us waqt hume jarurat hoti hai aise insane ki jo kuch der tak use bachake rakh sake kam se kam tab tak jab tak ki use hospital na pahucha diya jaye ya koimedical aid na a jaye…. aur yahi hum yaha sikhenge..

Rohan: koi ise plz batayega ki hum yaha soldiers hi banne aaye hai doctors nahi.. [and they both laugh]

[Ipshita sees Rohan mummering]

Ipshita: yes cadet..you [poiting towards Rohan] hum yeh achchi tarha se jante hai ki aap yaha soldier hi banne aye hai, per shayad ap ye nahi jante hai ki kisi bhi soldier ke liye goli chalane se bhi jyada mushkil wo pal hota hai jab wo apne sathi ko apne samne marta hua dekhta hai aur wo kuch nahi kar pata….. us waqt use ye lagta hai ki kaash kaash mai kuch kar pata… kaash mai kisi tarah iski sanso ko rok pata… aur is situation me ye bat koi maine nahi rakhti ki ape k soldier hai ya doctor… kyouki apka guilt apko ye sochne ka mauka nahi deta…kabhi nahi deta… aur ye yad apko kabhi jine nahi deti hai

Tabhi vaishnavi enters in the class room and all pacifies all student and they continue with the class…which went off quite well as no body made any fuss after tht…

Next class:

all students were gathered in the training ground…waiting for Major Samarth Chopra to come.. Today they had their first class of weapons where they were to learn shooting...so every one was very excited. 30 mins passed but there was no sign of Major Samarth… with passing time and hardness of sun frustration was overtaking their excitement…

Anu: Pata nahi ye senior Hitler kaha chala gaya … upar se dhup bhi itni tez hai

Yuvi: Dukh to bahut ho raha hai but I think I agree with u… buddy yaha dhup se to….

Ashi: Hey bhaggu!!! Here comes dumbo part 2… Samarth sir o Samarth sir where r u pls come see our ice princess is melting under sun..

[all other cadets starts laughing]

Yuvi: Oh shut up wako and keep your silly jokes to yourself

Dhwani: Chill guys…

Ashi: Mujhe samjhne ke wajaye tum is psycho ko kyou nahi samjhate ke we are in army academy not in oxford university tht they will giv us air conditioned class rooms…

Yuvi: Keep ur brains to yourself we really don't need tht….

Rohan: stop it guys…Major can be here any moment and if he sees us like this then no one can save us… and in any case Yuvi I agree with Ashi… we r in army we must get used to of these kinds of suffering

Ashi: at last!!! Meri bat in bird brains ke samajh me to ai…

Rohan: keep ur mouth shut Jaisingh….yes I agree to wht u said but Yuvi was also right the sun is really hard

Ashi: oho baby… why don't u both buy sunscreen for urself so that ur skin don't burn in sun…

Yuvi: hey you….

They started fighting wid each other Ashi wid Yuvi and Anu wid Rohan while Abhi and Dhwani were trying to stop the…all other cadets were enjoying and were cheering each one of then… just then they heard sum voice..

"Stop it and form a line cadets" they all knew that voice... the person was none other than Major Samarth Chopra so they stopped at once and arranged themselves in well organised line

Samarth: wht was all this commotion for??? If u remember on first day of my class I told u all that I can't bear any kind of indiscipline…but I think u didn't got my words that day…fine I have a very good way to make u understand…. I was here to tell u all that we I have some work so we will start our class late today and was going to give u a break… but bow I have better plan…. You all will be standing here with ur hands up till I finish off my work come here and start ur training…and mind it this will take least 30 mins…so c u then…and yes if I c a single hand down then I will extend ur punishment for next 30 mins….so take ur positions now…

He was about to leave when he saw Pritha coming.

Pritha: sorry to disturb u sir but I have orders to take Cadet Rohan Mehra with me...

Samarth: ya sure u can take him but after my class

Pritha: am sorry sir but I need to take him right now…

Samarth: Captain Pritha I have punished them he cant go like this

Pritha: I am sorry sir but its Colonel's order and I have to follow it….

Samarth: ok fine…cadet Mehra u can go….and for rest of u punishment continues…

Saying this Samarth leaves and after few seconds Pritha also leaves with Rohan leaving behind irritated and sulking cadets.

In Colonel's room:

We can see Colonel Bikramjeet Sinha sitting on his chair with some one sittig on chair opposite to him…face of the person is not visible… rohan enters in the cabin

Rohan: may I come in sir??

Colonel: oh yes come in cadet.... [pointing to person sitting infront of him] some one has come to c u

As Colonel finishes his sentence the person turns hi face towards rohan… rohan got shocked seeing him….

Rohan: dad ap… yaha?

Mr. Mehra: kyou bhai kya mai apne bete se milne nahi a sakta??

Colonel: cadte tumhare dad itni dur se tum se milne aye hai wo bhi defence ministry se special permission ke sath… tum inhe staff room me le jao waha koi bhi nahi hoga so u can talk in peace… you have 30 mins before your next class so go and enjoy with your dad

Mr. Mehra: thankyou sir..chale rohan???

Rohan: ha….. ya sure…

Rohan heads his dad to staff room… now lets c whats going on in training ground…

Anu: ab mujhse ye nahi hota…yar ye Major to hume bat bat pe punish kar deta hai…

Dhwani: ha humlog uski gud books me jo a gaye hai…

Abhi: ye sab aplogi ki wajah se…. har waqt kuch na kuch karte rehte ho aplog ye usi ka nateeja hai… kya jarurat thi yaha ground pe larne ki..

Ashi: prabhu shri Abhinav ji maharaj humse bhul ho gai hume maf kardo next time se hum us senior Hitler ko time plz bolke room me jake larenge…

Abhi: Ashi plz

Ashi: hey bhaggu!!! Ab maine kya kiya…waise bhi itni problems hai upar se tumhara bhashan…

Yuvi: ha aur un sab problems ki jad ho tum miss anvesha jai singh. Na tum apna useless brain use karti aur na hi wo Major hume punish karta

Ashi: look who is talking….. agar tum aur tumhara dost… tum dono agar apna bara sa mu band rakhte to aisa kuch nahi hota…

Anu: are kahe ka dost wo to nikal gaya hume yaha phasa ke…

Yuvi: oh shut up

Ashi: ya timbo chup ho jao warna humare ice princess ko gussa a jayega aur wo melt ho jayega phir yaha flood a jayegi aur hum sab dub jayenge..

Dhwani: just shut up… tumlogo ki wajah se hum abhi yaha aise khare hai…lagta hai phir bhi tumhara man nahi bhara…. Ab agar ek lafs(word) bhi mu se nikala na to Samarth sir tuhe bad me punish karenge usse pehle mai tumhe mar dalungi…so absolute mum…

Yuvi,Ashi,anu,abhi: aye aye captain[all starts laughing]

In the staff room… it was all vacant as all teachers has gone to take their classes…but some one was there in the locker room.. but lets leave him there coz wht concerns us now is rohan and his dadJ so rohan enters in the staff room with his dad

Rohan: yes dad tell me

Mr.Mehra: kaise ho tum??

Rohan: ap yaha defence minister se permission le ke mujhse ye poochne to nahi aye honge ki mai kaisa hu… so just come to the point dad

Mr. Mehra: ok then I will cum to the point…mai yaha tumhe lene ayah u…chalo mere sath

Rohan:nahi dad mai yaha army officer banne aya hu aur wo bane bina yaha se nahi jaunga

Mr. Mehra: oh shut up …industrialist Ashish Mehra ka beta ek mamuli army officer…ye pagalpan choro aur chalo mere sath

Rohan: sorry dad but main nahi jaunga…..mujhe apke business me koi int nahi hai…mujhe army join karni hai…

Mr. Mehra: tum tum army join karoge… tum army officers banoge….tum…rohan ye bachpana choro… army me jane ke liye kabiliyat ki jarurat hoti hai rohan… hard work dedication commitment and sabse upar himmat ki jarurat hoti hai…hai tumme ye sab khubiya… nahi rohan tumme sirf ek khubi hai aur wo ye hai ki tum mere bete ho.. Ashish Mehra ke bete.. are zindagi ke aisho aaram ki lat pari hui hai tumhe tum kya army officer banoge… tum kabhi army officer nahi ban sakte rohan kabhi nahi… u no why coz ur r useless tum apne bal bute par kuch nahi kar sakte…i'm sure ki tumhe yaha admission bhi mere hi naam ki wajah se mila hoga..kyun?

[Mr.Mehra was about to say something more…but tabhi koi locker room se nikal ke staff room me ata hai jise dekh ke wo ekdum shocked ho jate hai…and chup bhi…udhar rohan ki akhen num ho jati hai mr. Mehra ki bate uske dil me teer ki tarah chub rahi thi….. unke achanak chup ho jane se use bhi ajeeb lagta hai so wo peeche murke dekhta hai ki wht made his dad stop speaking… so he turns around and finds raj standing there]

Mr.Mehra: oh Mr. Rathod ap yaha? Wht a pleasant surprise…ap yaha kya kar rahe hai

Rajveer: same here Mr. Mehra. mai yaha inka teacher hu…

Mr. Mehra: oh then I guess my son is in safe hands.

Rajveer: absolutely…but Mr Mehra let me tell u … apka beta bahut hi honhar hai… I don't doubt ke one day he will be one of the best cadtes of our academy..

Mr. Mehra: I think ab mujhe chalna chahiye… so rohan bye… and yad rakhna I am always there for you… aur mujhe ye bhi yakeen hai kit um wapas jarur aoge…

Rajveer: bye Mr. Mehra..

Mr.Mehra: bye

Saying this he goes from there leaving a shocked confused and hurt rohan in the academy… use samajh nahi a raha tha ki wo kya kare… ek taraf uske man me sawal uth rahe the… to duri taraf use Mr.Mehra ki bato se takleef ho rahi thi….unki batein abhi tak uske kano me gunj rahi thi…tabhi raj keeps his hand on rohan's shoulder

Rajveer: are u ok ?

Rohan: am fine sir… am fine…sir meri class ka time ho gaya hai

Saying this he goes from there leaving rajveer worried for him and thinking what to do…

Now it was time for class...all students were still standing with their hands up...when Major Samarth came…

Samarth: so good to see u all in discipline… I think that's enough for today…back to normal[all cadets lower their hands and stands in attention] so cadtes lets start our class now… today we will do target practice for tht each one of u will be provided with dummy guns…ap logo ko bas use fire karna hai…any doubts??

Cadtes: no sir.

Samarth: good… so come one bye one and aim at tht target..

Sare cadets eke k karke ate hai aur target practise karte hai wahi dusri taraf Raj ko Rohan ki chinta hone lagti hai.. use pata tha ki rohan apne dad ki bato se kafi hurt hua hai…so he decides to go to the training ground…he was standing at some distance keeping eye on cadets…now it was Ashi's turn…she hits the bull's eye in her first attempt…Dhwani abhi yuvi and anu also manages to get thru quite well…so now it was rohan's turn but b4 tht Samarth speaks up.

Samarth: good job guys…cadet jaisingh u really impressed me….so who's left now…oh ya cadet Mehra… so would u plz come forward

Rohan: yes sir..

Rohan takes the gun from Samarth and was abt to hit the target jab uske dad ki bate uske kano me gunjne lagti hai

" tum kuch nahi kar sakte…tum apne bute pe kuch nahi karsakte…u r useless rohan… u r useless"

Samarth: cadet shoot

Rohan: yes sir

He teries to shoot when again uske dad ki awaz use sunai deti hai

"tum kabhi army officer nahi ban sakte ro han….kabhi nahi…tumhe lautna hoga… u r useless rohan u r useless"

Rohan couldn't take it any more wo apne kano pe hat rakhta hai and shouts "no this is not true…ye sach nahi hai" and falls down on his knees

soo here's the part hope u all like it and yes dont forget to comment we will b waiting for it
luv u all
farveen and varallikka

varallika , faru the part was very nice.. i liked it very much.... 👏
please continue soon.... 😃

hi guys

hey was that part really so bad tht none of u commented on it...tell us if its like tht so that we can improve it in future

wonderful part. It was just awesome. I really loved this part. Great going pls continue n continue soon. Sorry for not commenting earlier was a bit busy.

VARALLIKA . waiting for the next part. Ur story is just toooo goood.

Originally posted by: golu_1677

VARALLIKA . waiting for the next part. Ur story is just toooo goood.

sure will try to post it as soon as possible

gr888 gng VARALIKA very intrestinggggg LOVD IT!!!!!


IS THIS UR FIRST FF OR U HAVE WRITTEN FEW ALREADY????? 😳



Saraa

CONT SOOOOON I AM WAITING TO READ ON!!!




Saraa

hi saara
thx 4 replying...no its not my first ff i have written one crap earlier...but not on this large scale... this one is my biggest project all thx to farheen...