Khwabo Ki Manzilein.. Last part on pg 57 - Page 6

omg that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooood i was hoooked for ages!!!! the flashbak scene was so emotional 😭 but all in all it was a fab part!!!!!!! 👏

hey varallika & farheen dear....a very very very damn goodd...coollll..wondeful part...me tho seriously fida over your story.. i fully liked the part & enjoyed it very much... your story is getting very intresting as the story is progressing...... kee up the good work.......👏
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the flashback was very touching.... me felt very bad for vish.. 😭 but i feel she is very lucky as she has got raj with her..... un dono ki dosti is veryyy goodddddddddd.......😃 tho ab humare Major Saab
Rajveer , Ipshita ko dekhkar clean bold ho gaye... wah wah wah... ab mazaa aayega.... 😉
please next part jaldi se post kar dena... me will be waiting eagerly.... 😃

Ur story is wonderful. Loved this part. 👏

wen are u posting the next part. Ur story is just wonderful . Eagerly waiting for the next part

hi golu thanks a tonnnn for liking our story that much.... i assure u tht we will post our story really soon... actually na mujhe wapas ghar ana tha is hafte isi me part nahi likh paye so thora late ho gaya... hope u wont mind.... i promise u i iwll post it by friday...so just keep reading and sending us comments

khwabo ki manzilein:-11

hey frnds,

we are bak once again wid another part of kkm…

frnds today we wud like to thank all the readers of kkm..thank u so very much for all ur sweet, encouraging comments..thanks a lot!

We wud like to dedicate our story to all our readers…especially khyati, rabi, surya, suman di, zee, vandana, mehrun, golu_1677, rachandeep, jyothi_cool,

[sumone enters the staff room, while Raj is standing near the door of the staff room]

Recap:

Dr.devyani, dr. vaishnavi academy pohochte hai..per teesre doctor ka aane ka sabhi ko intezar hota hai….suraj baaki officers yani karan, kunal, radhika, pritha ko rajveer aur vaishnavi ke past ke bare mein batate hai jise jaankar sabhi hairaan ho jate hai….. aakhir mein the most awaited one..dr ipshita oberoi academy pohocti hai jise dekh hamare major rajveer bas unhe dekht

Person: excuse me…

Raj [turns around] yes…

Person: I'm looking out for Dr.Devyani

Raj: oh, just a minute, [towards Devyani] bhabhi..zara yaha aana…

Devyani: ha bolo

Person: are u Dr.Devyani?

Devyani: yes….but sorry maine aapko pehchaana nahi…

Person [smiles] aap hume nahi jaante…[helds out her hand] hi, I'm Dr.Ipshita Oberoi…{aamna shariff}

Raj Ipshita ko dekhta hi rehta hai…bilkul hairaan ho jata hai...

Devyani: oh hi,please cum in, we've been expecting u, kaafi waqt laga diya aapne yaha pohochne mein...

Ipshita: darhesal delhi se hamari flight late ho gayi to isiliye aane mein thoda waqt lag gaya.

Devyani: koi baat nahi.

Ipshita: aap hume bata sakti hai ki principal ka office kis taraf hai?

Vaishnavi: main wahi ja rahi hu, aap chaho to hum saath mein chal sakte hai.

Ipshita: certainly.

Vaishnavi [helds out her hand] hi, i'm Dr.Vaishnavi

Ipshita: Dr.Ipshita oberoi.

Vaishnavi: chale

Ipshita [smiles] ha chaliye...

[Rajveer ab tak wahi darwaze per khada hai]

Vaishnavi: Raj,,ab haato bhi...

Rajveer: oh, sorry...

[Vaishnavi and Ipshita leaves]

Devyani: hey Raj kaha kho gaye?

Rajveer: kuch nahi bhabhi..achcha main ab chalta hu meri clas ka waqt ho raha hai baad mein milta hu.

[hamari nayi doctor to aa gayi ab zara yeh bhi dekhte hai ki hamare honhaar cadets kya kar rahe hai]

Anu: hey Ashi tum kya keh rahi ho meri to kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai, aur hume iss waqt to class rooms hona chahiye, tum mujhe major Rajveer ke room ke bahar kyun layi ho?

Ashi: ah! maate woh kya hai naa kuch hi der mein woh major hiyler yaha aanewala hai aur hum apne room ki chaabi dega phir hum dono uska room saaf karne wale hai.

Anu: wat?

Rohan: oh lord! kya tum kuch der liye chup nahi reh sakti Anu...

Anu: pehle tum mujhe batao ki hum kya kar rahe hai?

Ashi: Anu jaisa main kehti hu tum bas waisa karo ok? tum yaha hitler ke room ke bahar ruko aur hum teeno zara ander jaake aate hai.

Anu: ander? kyun?

Ashi: hey bhaggu! woh kya hai Anu, mujhe logo ke room mein chori se jhakna pasand hai, yeh meri bachpan ki adat hai

Anu [just gives a confused look] per Ashi..

Yuvi: please Anu bas chup raho..aur yaha khadi raho, agar koi aaye to bata dena

Anu: tum sab kya kar rahe ho meri to kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Rohan: aur ayega bhi nahi kyunki uske liye dimaag ki zaroorat hoti hai jiski tumhare pas hone ki umeed bhi nahi ki ja sakti hai

Yuvi: stop it guys..pls...tum dono baad mein jhagad lena..Ashi sabse pehle hume room ke ander jane ke liye kuch karna hoga

Ashi: maine uski bhi tayyari kar li hai

[Ashi kisi cutter jaisi cheez se room kholti hai, teeno ander jaate hai, darwaza bandh karte hai, Anu unka bahar intezaar karti hai]

Anu [knocks the door] hey jaldi karo na,ab to lunch time ho raha hai, major kisi bhi waqt yaha a sakte hai.

[but no reply, kuch der baad jaldbaazi mein bahar ate hai , room phir lock kar dete hai]

Rohan: phew! hard time..

Ashi: ha..per finally all set...

Anu:kuch jyada serious to nahi kiya hai na?

Yuvi: just wait and watch dear.

Anu: mm ok..

now its time for lunch… sare cadets pure din ki training se thak kar mess me jate hai lunch ke liye…

Yuvi: thank god lunch time a gaya

Ashi: chalo atleast is jail me khana to dete hai…. Bhuk ke mare meri to jan ja rahi hai

Anu: khushbu to bahut achi a rahi hai

abhi: khushbu hi nahi khana bhi acha hai… subah desai sir bol rahe the ki aj non-veg bana hai…

Rohan: wooo!! So wht are we waiting for lets go in

Dhwani: ya guys chalo…. Isse pehle ki khana khatam ho jaye

All rush to the mess dying wid hunger…but jaise hi wo ander jate hai they see their teachers sitting there… unko dekhte hi logo ki sari bhuk sari excitement khatam ho jati hai…

Ashi: hey bhaggu… hume kha ke man nahi bhara to ye devils humara khana bhi khane a gaye..

Anu: Ashi kahi tumne kuch aisa waisa to nahi kiya na

Ashi: shut up dumbo!!

Rohan: ek hi time inse azadi milti hai but ye log yah abhi a gaye…

Abhi: ab yaha khare rehne se kuch nahi hoga cholo ander jate hai….

They all go in…. but koi bhi kuch bhi nahi kehta hai…. Sare log apna lunch le kar table pe baithte hai….. jaise hi wo log apni seates lete hai…suRaj stands up….

SuRaj: attention cadets…[all cadets turn to him] ap log soch rahe honge ki aj humlog yaha

kaise? Right??

Cadtes: right..

SuRaj: so cadets aj aplogo ki table manners ki class hai….so aj aplog humare sath lunch karenge….mujhe pata hai ki aplogo ko ye sari cheese ati hai… but yaha army me in cheezo ki bahut ahmiyat hoti hai…so aj hum isi ki practice hogi….so lets start

Samarth: just a min cadets…. Major suRaj ne apko ye to bata diya ki yaha kya hoga… but ye nahi bataya ke yaha kya nahi hona hai….wo mai aplogo ko batata hu….so cadets yaha kisi bhi tarah ki indiscipline nahi hogi….. jara si bhi awaz aur ap is hall se bahar…so hope ki aplog samajh gaye honge….to ab shuru karte hai……

Sare log apna lunch fork and knife se start karte hai?? . two teachers were sitting on each table to keep chk on students. Ashi had Raj and Ipshita on her table. She was sitting wid all 5 other star cadets….every thing was going on fine…. But tabhi Rohan extends his hand to take water and intentionally pushes Ashi… Ashi ke hath se fork gir jata hai and falls on plate which causes sound….

Rajveer: leave the table…

Ashi: but sir???

Rajveer: Cadet Anvesha Jaising…. I said leave the room ….now

Ipshita: but major…. Isse galti se

Rajveer: doctor, army me galati ki koi jagah nahi hoti hai….. yaha ek galati insan ki jaan le sakti hai

Ipshita: lekin…

Rajveer: rules are rules doctor….[to Ashi] ap abhi tak yahi hai….

Ashi leaves the hall full with anger and hunger?????….while other cadets continue their lunch…

in the staff room:-

Vaishnavi: bhabhi aapne Raj ko kahi dekha kya?

[Raj enters the staffroom and stands quitely behind Vaishnavi]

Devyani [smiles] ha...

Vaishnavi:kaha, aur itna muskura kyun rahe ho?

Devyani: kyunki Raj tumhare peeche khada hai...

[Vaishnavi palatti hai, aur Raj ko khada dekhti hai]

Vaishnavi: ab yeh sab ho gaya ho to kya hum thoda kaam karle?

Raj[with a cute naughty smile] ha ha chalo...

Devyani: are Vaishnavi zara suno..

Vaishnavi: ji bhabhi..

Devyani: tum bas in forms pe sign kardogi, mujhe inhe fax karna hai,zara urgent hai.

Vaishnavi: ok, Raj tum chalo main yeh khatm karke aati hu..

Raj : ok..

[Raj leaves]

Devyani: yeh rahe papers in per ab bas tumhare aur Dr.Ipshita ke sign baaki hai...

[Vaishnavi signs the papers and hands over to Devyani]

Vaishnavi: yeh lijiye, sign kar diye hai..

Devyani: ok..thanks..

Vaishnavi: achcha main chalti hu... ok..

[Vaishnavi goes to Raj's room]

Vaishnavi: Raj...

Raj: ha ander aa jao..are maine woh papers kaha rakh diye, ha shayad iss drawer mein rakhe the, hey Vaishnavi zara lites to on karo

[Vaishnavi jaise hi lites on karti hai sare bulps aur tubelites burst ho jati hai, Raj ne woh drawer khula rakha tha aur usmein se ek snake bahar aate hai, woh

Raj ko kaatne hi wala hota hai ki Vaishnavi use dekh leti hai aur Raj ko waha se hata deti hai,per woh snake Raj ke haath ko chukar jaata hai ]

Vaishnavi: tum thik to ho na Raj...

[Raj holds his hand, jahapar snake ne bite kiya tha]

Raj: yes am fine…

[usi waqt waha Samarth aa jata hai aur bahar se lite ka main switch off kar deta hai]

Samarth: yeh sab hua kaise? aur yeh snake ?

Vaishnavi: pata nahi, maine jaise hi lite on karne ke liye switch on kiya saari tubelites aur bulbs burst ho gaye…and then ye sap

[Samarth ki nazar waha darwaaze ke bahar giri ek notebook pe padti hai, woh use uthata hai]

Samarth: cadet anwesha jaisingh....

Vaishnavi: kya?

Samarth: per main sab samajh gaya....yeh sab ek first year cadet ki harkat hai...Vaishnavi tum Raj ka dhyan rakho , inhe main dekhta hu

[saying this Samarth goes out of room Vaishnavi feels ki Raj ko kaafi tez fever hota hai, she makes him lie down. wo uske sir pe pani wali patti rakhti hai tabhi Devyani comes]

Devyani: Vaishnavi, yeh Raj ko kya hua? Wo Samarth keh raha tha ki… are ise to kaafi tez bukhaar lagta hai...

[udhar Samarth Ashi ki iss harkat se kaafi gussa hota hai...aur woh first year class mein jata hai]

Samarth: excuse me...

[kunal ki class chal rahi hoti hai]

kunal: yes sir,, kahiye..

Samarth: i want cadet anwesha jaisingh ...

Anu: oh god! kahi ise sabkuch pata to nahi chala na...

Rohan: sshhh!!

Samarth: cadet anwesha, i want u out now....

[Ashi stands up and leaves the class]

Samarth: so cadet jaisingh, aapko kya lagta hai ki aap yaha academy mein apni manmaani karenge aur koi aapko koi kuch nahi kahega?

Ashi: sir..

Samarth: i haven't finished yet... so aapka yeh idea kaha se aaya? apne teachers ki jaan se khelne ka itna badhiya idea to aaphi ka hoga...am i right cadet jaisingh......do u even realize ki apki is harkat se major Rajveer ki jan ja sakti thi….

[Ashi's quite]

Samarth: n e ways...cadet jaisingh main bas itna hi janna chahta hu ki kya yeh notebook

aapki hai? [shows her the book]

Ashi [softly] ..yes sir

Samarth: louder cadet, maine suna nahi...

Ashi [screams out loud] yes sir.

Samarth: dats better, apne apni manmaani bahot karli, per let me remind u ki yeh ek military academy hai koi civilians college nahi, jaha aapki yeh sab harkate bardasht ki jayegi.

ab aapne jo mahaan kaam kiya hai uska inaam to aapko milega hi.

Ashi: sir..

Samarth: yes, aapko akele kal suRaj nikalne se pehle academy ki boundary wall pe fencing lagani hai...

Ashi: but sir...

Samarth: ha, per darna nahi kyunki yaha koi saap nahi hoga, jaisa ki major Rajveer ke room mein tha...

Ashi: wat? major Rajveer ke room mein snake ????

Samarth: oh, aur aapko iss bare mein kuch bhi pata nahi hoga..hai na?

Ashi: yes sir, mujhe nahi pata ki..

Samarth: oh shut up and start ur punishment now...yaad rahe kal suRaj nikalne se pehle puri academy ki boundary wall pe mujhe yeh fencing dikhni chahiye, aur

ittefaq se kal tumhare class mein pehla lecture mera hi hai, and i want u in class in time... hope u got that..

Ashi: yes sir...

Samarth: dats better..now get going cadet jaisingh...

[Samarth leaves]

Ashi to herself: hey bhaggu, ab yeh senior hitler kya keh gaya? uss junior hitler ke room mein saap kaha se aaya? aur ab mujhe akele yeh fencing karni padegi...

[Ashi kaafi frustrate ho jati hai per use punishment to puri karni hi hai to woh apna kaam start karti hai]

in Rajveer's room

[its late night...Raj ko hosh ho jata hai per ab bhi thoda fever hota hai..Vaishnavi, Dr.Devyani, karan wahi hote hai]

Vaishnavi: [Vaishnavi uske pulses chek karti hai], bhabhi lagta hai Raj ka fever kam ho raha hai...

karan: per bhabhi ise u achanak bukhaar kaise hua

Devyani: darhesal woh saap Raj ko chukar chala gaya, shayad thoda zeherila saap tha isiliye Raj ko ekdumse bukhaar chad gaya, but ab ye thik hai

kunal: meri to samajh nahi aa raha hai ki yeh saap aaya kaha se?

Raj: kunal ..ab chodo bhi...

Devyani: ha ..ab woh sab baatein chodo aur ise aaraam karne do

karan: hey yeh kya Raj, aaj raat to hum chess khelne wale the na? aur tum to u so rahe ho...

Raj: are ab main thik hu, chaho to abhi khel sakte hai..

Vaishnavi: koi zaroorat nahi hai, tum chup chap yaha aaraam karo.

Devyani: ha Raj tumhe aram ki zaroorat hai, waise kal tak tum puri tarah se thik ho jayoge, per abhi only rest...

karan: chalo ab hum bhi chalte hai, gudnite Raj..tk care

kunal: gundite Raj

Raj: gudnite...

Devyani: achcha Vaishnavi ab tum bhi aram kar aao..

Vaishnavi: nahi bhabhi main yaha thik hu..

Raj: Vaishnavi ab main thik hu, tum jao araam karlo.

Vaishnavi: just shut up and lie down… mai tumhare liye khana lekar ati hu

[Vaishnavi and Devyani leaves]

[its late night Vaishnavi wahi sofe pe so rahi hoti hai but Raj ko neend nahi aati hai isiliye woh uthkar bahar coridor mein jata hai, jaha achanak uski nazar ground pe jati hai..waha use koi dikhayi deta hai..use lagta hai ki shayad koi cadet bahar jaane ki koshish kar raha hai isiliye woh ground pe jata hai..per jab waha jaakar dekhta hai bas hairaan ho jata hai]

Raj:cadet jaisingh? aap is waqt yaha kya kar rahe ho? aur yeh aapke haatho ko kya hua? yeh khoon kaisa?

Ashi:sir mujhe major Samarth ne punish kiya hai...

Raj: wat?

Ashi:sir unhone mujhe suRaj nikal ne pehle sari academy ki boundary wall pe fencing lagane ko kaha hai..

Raj: wat?...i dont beleive..Samarth ne tumhe itne harshly punish kiya hai...

[Ashi yeh sunkar hairaan hoti hai]

Raj: cadet tumhari punishment khatm ho chuki hai.. dismiss

Ashi:but sir..major Samarth

Raj: its an order,u can leave..

Ashi: sir..i'm sorry sir

Raj:sorry..for wat?

Ashi: sir aaj aapke room mein jo kuch bhi hua, woh maine hi kiya tha...

Raj:to wo sap tumne…

Ashi: no sir…sap humne nahi rakha tha…. Humne to bas wo lights ke connection me garbar ki thi sap kaha se aya hume nahi pata….

Raj: really

Ashi: sir mai jo karti hu sabke samne katri hu apni galati chupane ki adapt mujhme nahi hai…maine jo kiya wo apko bata diya… ab ap uspe yakeen kare na kare apki marzi

Raj: cadet rat bahut ho chuki hai… u can go now

Ashi: thank u sir..per sir wo senior hitler..i mean major Samarth.

.

Raj: [smiles] senior hitler ha..interesting..…. i'll take care of him u dont worry…..

Ashi: thank u so very much sir..

Raj: its ok

[Raj leaves, aur Ashi hospital wing ki aor jati hai per raste mein hi behosh ho jati hai, kuch guards Ashi ko hospital wing le jate hai..jaha Dr.Ipshita hoti hai]

Ipshita: are kya hua inhe?

guard: pata nahi mam, lagta hai major Rajveer ne ise punish kiya tha, kuch der pehle cadet aur major ground pe the..ho sakta hai unhone hi punish kiya ho.

Ipshita: thik hai, hum dekhte hai, aap jayiye..

guard: ok mam.

[Ashi ke haatho se khoon nikal raha hota hai,per woh behoshi mein bhi kuch kehti hai]

Ashi:saap...major Rajveer.....maine kuch nahi kiya...

Ipshita: major Rajveer? iska matlab major Rajveer ne hi inhe iss berehmi se punish kiya hai...kaise insaan hai yeh...

[Raj walk karte apne roomme baitha hota hai tabhi doctor Ipshita comes to his room]

Ipshita: oh to aap yaha hai..waha uss masoom ko itni berehmi se punish karke aap yaha chain se kaise baith sakte hai?

[Raj is just surprised as to wat Ipshita is talking]

Ipshita:hum maante hai ki cadet jaisingh se zaroor koi galati hui hogi per iska yeh to matlab nahi ki aap ek first year cadet ko aise punish kare ki wo behosh ho jaye?

itna hi nahi woh dar ke mare behoshi mein bhi aapka naam le rahi hai...uske haatho se khoon beh raha hai aaj agar cadet jaisingh ko kuch bhi hota to iske jimmedar aap akele ko nahi balki iss puri academy ko theraya jata...

[Raj is just quite..he doesnt utter a word]

Ipshita: hume laga ki bhale hi aap sipahi hai per aap ek insaan bhi hai jise dusro ki taklifo ka ehsaas bhi hota hoga.... per ab lagta hai ki humne yaha aakar hi galati ki,

i'm sorry.... aap please aaraam se so jayiye aur uss cadet ko apne haal per chod dijiye phir chahe woh jiye yaa mare, aapko shayad hi isse koi fark padega...

[Ipshita Raj ko itna sab sunakar waha se gusse mein chali jati hai, aur Raj wahi khamosh khada rehta hai]

varallika , farheen both of you are totally awesome ..you both make a very good combition of writers... your story tooooo coollll.......nah nah.. not just tooo coolllllllll but i would say it is super coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll...... it is ek dum mast..zabardast... brilliant.... jhakaas.... bindass.... oh..i tho totally love it..& as the story is progressing me loving it even more....you both keep up the good work... 👏
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hmm..tho pehle humare Major Saab Ipshita ko dekhkar kho gaye..yeh tho bohat hi achchi baat hain... 😳
Ashi sharaat karke , us cheez ki saza bhughat rahi hain joh usne nahi ki...bechari.... 😭
lekin ab joh Raj ne usse dismiss kar diya.. that was really sweet of him... 😳
ab rahi baat humari heroine sahiba Ipshita ki.. mujhe us par bada ghussa aa raha hain bina sachchayi jane woh Rajveer par bhadak uthi...that's so bad of her.......... 😡 aur apne Major ne chup chaap sab kuch suna...he is such a darling..sweetooo...😳
please Ipshita ko jaldi se apni ghalthi ka ehsaas karwao..aur Raj aur Ipshita ki dosti bhi karao woh bhi jaldi se... 😉
please post the next part soon..me will be waiting for it eagerly... 😛

Wod another wonderful part. Me just loving it. 😛

omg what a great part!!!!! bichara rajveer 😭 got shouted at by ipshita when he told ashi to go 😭 uff samarth ne kya strict punishment di hai hehehe senior and junior hitler great part keep it up 👏

hi rachandeep thx once again 4 liking our story...raj an ip ye dono ka to chalta haiyar...subah raj chillaya to sham ko ip bhi to uspe chillai na wo bhi bewajah...kahir chalo...age aage dekho hota hai kya