New Arshi SS: The Unknown Mind Imp Note Pg.22 (12/08/2014) [On Hold]

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pree2605

@pree2605

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

amazinggg...
wowww akash... i nvr knew even akash cn tlk...today he proved he is asr ka brother...
thnxx fr pm..
update soon

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Very nice start...
I loved it.

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

keep it up akash
keep this sprit
nice starting
waiting fr next
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add ne in ur new account
thank u

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88sandy

@88sandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

nyc update...lovd the way akash was in ths chaptr...totally junior ASR...

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Really really nice n interesting update.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Thank you so much for sending me a PM to your story, currently I have been looking on this forum for stories related to the forced contract marriage/Arnav's redemption and yours fits perfectly.

The story so far is brilliant and amazing,

Poor Khushi is being ignored by most of the Raizada family and Arnav is also being his normal cruel and taunting self.

I'm loving Payal and Akash, so far they are the stars of the story.

They both have discovered something is wrong between Arnav and Khushi, especially there sudden marriage.

Can't wait for them to do there own investigation and find out the truth and hopefully tell Arnav who has turned a blind eye.

A Small request please make Arnav follow a big redemption and make him feel so guilty especially after what he has put Khushi through.

The pre cap looks awesome can't wait for the confrontation, hope Khushi speaks the truth. Also the Akash and Arnav conversation will be interesting to read.

Loved the updates they were a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago