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CH:3- Maa Chandi Ki Avatar
Aftr a sleep less and choas filled night finlly sharon got sum tme to sleep...she clses her eyes and was abt to fall asleep ..but suddnly her phn strtd ringng ..and it was swayam..she pickd the call...
swayam(shoutng):sharonnn
sharon:yup ..i can hear..am not deaf..don't scream...
swayam:ya ..i knw dat..but please save me frm ur BFF yaar..she is gonna killng me..and why the hell you people keep crckt bats in ur house?..any ways.. please opn the door of ur room ..
sharon:wat? ur at my home?
swayam:yupe..now no more qustn please opn de door ..she is back of me...
sharon :okay... okay 1 min...
sharon opn the door and see that kriyam runing all ovr de house...and she went in between swayam & kriya...and was tryng to stop kriya..
sharon:sweetu dear wat u dng ...he is ur bro not ur enemy..why are u tryng to hit him with this?
kriya:oh shar ..pls hat ja..i have to teach a lessn to him so dat he doesn't repeat such mistkes...(tryng to hit swayam)
swayam: please save me sharon...(chckng her 4r top to bottom..sharon was wearng a shrt dress) BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk too hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
sharon:thanks..
kriyai(who was notce all this):oye.. hello mr.swayam shekawath...how many tmes i have told u not to flrt wid my best frnd?u r gng to get two xtra for this...(trys to hit him but sharon stops her)
sharon:hey sweetu chill yaar..it okay na...lev it ..
kriya:arey shar u knw na?how much i was worried abt dis stupd yestrdy...wat if sum thng happns to him..wat shld i answr mom &dady?
sharon:sweetu chill drlng ..are u gng to kill him r wat?
kriya: aja tho ye gaya meri hat mey...(swayam runs frm dere..and kriya runs behnd him shutng..)
here rey is distrub by all dis..irrtd rey cmes to sharon room and seeing all this he says..
rey: wat de hell guys?wats gng on here? will sum one xpln?(swayam runs behnd rey&hides)
swayam:wo acvtlly ..my sis is full on angry on me abt yestrdy fght...now she wants to teach me a lessn yaar..pls save me frm her ..
rey:hey swayam tu apni behan si dartha hey?wat dis man?
swayam:u don't abt her yaar..agar gussa aya tho maa chandi hojathi hey meri behan...
rey:(to himself)muje patha hey ki wo shrt temprd hey..muje nahi tho aur kisko patha hoga meri kriyu ke baremey..to swayam :oh really ..i don't knw yaar..
kriya:hello xcuse me agar tumari dicuss hoga tho hatogey ..i need to talk to my bro..
swayam to rey :no yaar..she is gng to hit me hard...pls kuch kari na..(rey cng his crckt bat in kriya's hand..)
rey:hey kriya gve my crckt bat back to me...if not i don't knw wat i'll do..gve my bat back to me...(kriya gve a evil smle andnoded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..
rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)
kriya:haha..rey stop it pls.. stop it rey...haha
rey:then gve my bat back to me...
kriya:nooo..
rey:then am not gng to stop..
sharon 2 swayam:they are lukng cute na? it had been a vry lng tme since i have seen them like this..
swayam(lost in sharon's beauti):ya ture ...agreed...
(sharo looks at swayam&swayam looks at sharon...swaron share LLHH momnt...in dis ticklng prcss acdntly de bat in kriya's hand hits rey's head...hearng the rey shutng swaron come to there sense..)
kriya:oh god ..rey are you okay.? am sorry really sry...i didn't mean to do that..am sry..(cupid his face and strtd blow in de place wer de bat hitd..both share a LLHH..soon rey coms in his snse)
rey (tryng to remve her hands off his face):no its okay..am fine..
kriya(tears strtd making way frm her eyes):no rey am really sorry..
rey:no its okay...
sharon to her self:why sweetu is feelng so sad as if she had cmmtd the biggst mistke evr? what ever..(she truns 2 swayam):swayam kya tu pls neche jakara ice leavogey ?
swayam:ya sure...(swayam went frm dere)
sharon:hey sweetu chill..bro is alrght ..(swayam was back wid ice&putd deice head on de plce wer rey got hurtd..)
rey:ouchhh..hey swayam its paing yaar...
swayam:okay sorry sorry...BTW thanks dude at last becos of u my sis forgot evrythng...
rey(gves a smle):no prb..
kriya: no..not so soon bhai ... ur not gng to escpe so esly...(gvs an evl smle.)
swayam strtd rung &kriya ran behnd him..cng dis sharey lukd at each othr and smld...
precap:
swaron in lost jungle..
swayam:y do u hate me so much miss.signhania...?
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rey:akey (eyes)band karu tho vahi dheki thi hey ..kolu tho vahi dhekithi hey...
kriyansh dancng on dil se rey...
kriya :sorry rey ...am sorry..i want you back in my life but i can't get you back...but rey ..wat wuld you do if ur in my plce?if you wer askd to choose one thng b/w frndshp &love wat wuld you choose?
i knw i have brkn ur heart...but i don't have othr optns rey...i knw ur still angry on me.. but am really helpless rey...please try to understnd me...(and she strtd rung frm dere)
do new entrs bi honewaley hey rajat shekawath..and reetu signhania so stay tund...😃
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ch4:Dil Se Rey..
next day early mrng in de clg...
rey was in the RH.he was jst cng de kriya's face in his eyes...all de mermies flashd in his mind...de 1st tme dey danced togthr...der 1st date..
der 1st fall ..and de mnt wen he propsd her...at de momnt wen he got de propse thng in his mind..he spokd to himslf:akey (eyes)band karu tho vahi dheki thi hey ..kolu tho vahi dhekithi hey...why kriya why ?why did do dis 2 me?i luv u so much but u didn't luv me back why?
i hate u kriya ...de wrd u said r still ringng in my ears...(he brk dwn in to tears...)
here kriya coming towrds RH..she is thnkng abt rey...der 1st meetng...der 1st date ...der 1st camp...& der 1 st kiss(she was blushng thnk abt it ) but soon her eyes were filld wid tears..wen rembrd how she had brkn his heart...
kriya to herslf:sry rey ...am sry..i want u back in my lyf but i can't get u back...but rey ..wat wuld u do if ur in my plce?if u wer askd to choose 1 thng b/w frndshp &luv wat wuld u choose?
i knw i have brkn ur heart...but i don't have othr optns rey...i knw ur still angry on me.. rey can't we atleast be frnds?ðŸ˜
jst thn he heard some sound frm the rh..and entrd rh and saw rey dancng,,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xfuqkg6pbNU
rey:(hldng the stole ): tho kriya yeha sach me yeha ayethi ??it can't be my imgne becoz i have her stole with me..now why did she come her?what she wants now?
kriya in gals lock room..
kriya(realsng her stole was missng):why did u go in ?why did u lev ur stole der?ab rey ko patha chala tho?...
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(swaron wer in der botany class...dey both r science studnts..& kriyansh are arts stutnds..)
botany techr:so stutnd ..am gng to gve a prjct today ..dats is to collct diffrnt typs of flwr..wch are vry rare...for dis u people r gng to wrk in team...
so am gng tell who is de parntr of whom..so ..riya(swaron's classmate)wid rahul(swaron's class mate)..neha wid vicky..simmi wid nilesh..&sharon wid swayam...
aftr lstn to de teachr ..
sharon to herslf:oh god..wat de hell ..swayam and my pantr?i don't knw how ma gng to cmplt my prct ..i don't knw any thng abt him...hope dat its gng to be fine ...
swayam to himslf:oh so sharon is my prjct patnr..hm i thnk i will njy wrkng wid her as sis alway say abt her dat she is a gud grl ..swet grl..etc etc..will c how it will be wrkng wid her..
botny techr gve dem maps as wer 2 fnd dat flwrs..2 evr one&left de class ..
swayam:so sharon lets us strt de fnd the flowrs frm today? okay?
sharon:yupe okay..will strt in de evng okay...
swayam:yupe fine..
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in de evng..swaron in de car gng to get de flwr..for der prjct..
swayam:so wat is de flwrs wch we have to find?
sharon:Rafflesia arnoldii,Silene tomentosa,Blue Bell Tunicate, Lotus berthelotii,Purple Foxglove..dats it..
swayam:okay wer do we fnd dis flwrs?culd u pls read de map?
sharon:ya sure...
swyam:okay wer shld we go now?
sharon:de maps says we have to go to de rght..
swayam:rght? ..i don't thnk so..it let us to out of de twn..
sharon(in angry):hey do as i say..it is lyk dat only in de map...u say as if am wrng.. now take de rght
swayam:chil ..chill ...okay okay..
soon dey wer in a plce wer der was no one der ..dey wer in jungle...
swayam:wer shld we go?
sharon:hmm am cnfusd..de map says take left but der is no left trun here...(she gets to knw dat she was holdng de map up side dwn..)oh shit ..
swayam:wat ?wat happnd?any thng wrng..
sharon:sry swayam..i have done a mistke...
swayam: wat?
sharon:i was holdng de map upside dwn...
swayam:WTH sharon? oh god wat to do now? i don't wer we r now...
sharon(checkng her bag):oh shit...
swayam:now wat happnd?
sharon :i frgot my phn at home...
swayam:oh god..we r lost here and ur worried abt phn?
sharon :arey idt i was thnk ki if i had phn i wuld call my bro..&tell our prbml..
swayam:not a bad idea...u can call frm my phn..take it (gvng her his phn)
sharon:oh god not now...
swayam: wat happnd?
sharon:no sgnls..we can't make a call..
swayam:don't worried we r safe untill we r in de car...
but dey de car tire was punctrd...both got dwn 4rm de car and strtd walkng in jungle...
whle walkng ...
sharon(angry):dis is all becos of u?
swayam:oye..hello wat do u mean becos me?(cnfusd)
sharon:ya ..y did u hear to my wrd..if u didn't hear to me ..jst did wat u knw..we wuld not suffr here...
swayam:hey wats wrng wid u ..i don't undrstnd? 1st u only say to follw u ..thn u only ask y did u follow...wat ur prblm miss.signhania?..
sharon: mr.shekawath.. now i have to spend a whole nght in dis jungle wid u..dats my prblm ..
swayam:don't worry ...am not a man eatr or an wild animl..dat i'll eat u...y do u hate me so much miss.signhania...?
sharon(gves him angry luk):wat evr..i jst don't want to cme wid u.. i'll take my way ..u take ur way..
swayam:as u wish ..
both lev in diffrnt dirctns..sharon hears sum one shoutng...
swayam:ahhh .. sharonnn
sharon:oh god ...is dat swayam? ..oh god..he shld not get hurtd..
(she strtd rung in de drctn in wch swayam went..)
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out side the clg ..
kriya :hey bhagwan abi mer car ko karb honatha kya?ab me ghar kise javu?
jst then rey was gng in his car saw kriya stdng near her car and stop...
rey(lowng his car widow glass..):hey kya huva?
kriya:wo mei car karb hogayahey...
rey:hey come in ..me tumey lift dedunga..
kriya :okay
she sat in his car der was pindrop slnt in the car ...none of them talk in the car...and soon they rechd their apartmnt kriya thankd rey and went to her flat and rey did the same...kriya press the calling bell and the door is opnd by a guys who is at the age of 19 years on whom any gals gocrzy...kriya was schk to see him there..
kriya:chotu?????tu yeha? what a suprze (she said hugng him)
raj:wo kya hey na meri shcooling katam hogayahey tho soch apaki hi clg jn karalu that why am here...(he said hugng her back)
kriya:thats grt ...apani total life time me tera phele acha decsn yehi hey..
raj:haha..vry funny..
kriya :i was jst kidding chotu..vese bro nahi aya?
raj:nahi ..unka intazr horahey...
kriya:ach tek i was gng to frshd up ..
and kriya went into her room and raj sat in the sofa watching tv...and here in sharey flat..rey entrd in and sat on his sofa removng his shoes..jst then his phn strtd ringng.. he saw the dailr name and smile creepd on his face...
rey:hello choti..kisi hey?ach kab?kal?okay fine me airprt ajavunga tuje pick up karaney..chal cia..take care love u ...(both hang the call)..wow choti aaney wali hey.
precap:
reetu ki entry
raj goes to pick reetu frm airprt and raj-reetu ki nok-jhok...
swaron 1st hug ...
rey claimng dwn kriya...kriya in rey's arms...
i knw bohat borng chaptr tha ..sry for dat...but nxt part will be gud one...slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...and for pm's add me...
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chapter 2:I WILL BE LOVING YOU REY

kriyansh were still in the same postn...still lost in each othr..but got distrub by the sund made by the kids...both came into sense..but are still in the same postn...
rey : kriyu ..i mean kriya ur okay?
kriya:ya am fne...
he help her to get strghtnd..jst den sharon came ...
sharon:bro tu ghar jara hena?sweetu ko bi leja...tekey
rey :okay ..i'll..chalo kriya lets go...
kriya :ya okay..bye shar ..gud n8 drlng...
sharon :gud n8 dear ..take care of ur bhai & urself too...
kriya:i'll dear...(both of dem hug...&rey aslo hug sharon)
sharon:bye bro ..bye sweetu ..
kriyansh:bye...
kriyansh were out side the huse..seeing swayam's cndtn kriya culdn't cntrl herslf ..and she strtd cryng ..rey culdn't see her cryng ..went near her &hugd her..she aslo hugd him back..
rey(still hugng her):hey come on tumari bhai ko kuchi nahi huva..he is okay na..don't cry kriyu...i can't see you like this...
kriya(brkng de hug& cryng):i was thnk ki what wuld happn if i didn't get any call frm the party...he nvr lstn to me i said him 1000 tme not be so implusv...but he nvr lstn ...whatshld i do with dis guy?...usey esi halthi me nahi dheki sakitha hu...
rey :hey chill ..don't worry..look at me ..meri cnditn dheko kasi hey?am i cryng ..no rght ?am lukng like joker rght?
kriya(gvng a smle):no ..u don't..evn in dis cndtn you look cute...
rey: really? me tumey cute lag rahahu? (befre she culd ans he cut her off)any ways...its too late lets go home...
kriya:yupe k..
kreyam went to there aprmnt..rey help kriya in takng swayam to dere flat...& plcd him on de bed in swayam's room...
rey(checkng his pockts): oh shit...i left my flat key at chachi's huse...oh god wat to do now?
kriya:hey rey its okay ..don't worry..shar wahi hey na she will get de key wen she is cmng trwm...
rey :ya but till den wer shld i be??withouth flat keys i can't go into flat rght?
kriya:hey rey u can be in my flat ..as mom &dady are out of statn u can be in our flat till shar cmes...
rey :are u sure?
kriya:yupe ..ya..u can be in de geust room...
rey :okay...
kriya:what r u gng do now?
rey : i jst want to take a shwr...culd pls tell me wherr is de wash room?
kriya:ya sure...cme i'll show u ..
(kriya take rey to geust room &shows him de wash room and levs...rey took shwr ...as he doesn't have an xtra shrt ..he thught to ask kriya to gve him swayam's shrt...at prsnt he is shrtless)
rey:hey kriya..culd u pls gve me one of de swayam's shrt?
kriya( who was with swayam removng his shoes off..hears rey ):ya sure rey one min am cmng...
kriya took one of swayam's shrt and was abt to go de room wer rey was...&rey was cmng out to take de shrt..dey both bang into each othr..both fall 2 de grund..kriya on de grund&rey on de top of her and shared a LLHH momnt...aftr sum tme both cme into der sense...
rey got up & helpd kriya to get up..kriya's eyes widend by cng rey as he was shrtless...rey took one step forwrd..kriya moved backwrd...dis prcss cntnd till she hit de wall..
rey :for god sake will u pls stop movng back?
kriya :hmmm.ya...wo actvlly...thanks rey.. thanks for evry thng u have done today...u have helpd me alot..
rey:no thanks kriya...
kriya:u r same as u wer in de past...
rey (in rude tone) :oh pls...i don't want to talk abt de past..it jst gvs me pain wen i rembr it...😡
by then kriya's eye became wet...
rey:u have hurt me a lot kriya..a lot..(took de shrt frm her hand&left into de room bangng de door in angry)..
kriya to herslf:i nevr want to hurt u rey...but what clud i do i have no optn left...sry rey ...i luv rey & i will be luvng u always...if posbl pls 4rgve me rey...
so here de chap ends...
PRECAP:
swayam:BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk dam hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
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rey:hey kriya gve my crckt bat back to me...if not i don't knw what i'll do..gve my bat back to me...(kriya gave an evil smile and noded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)
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hello readers ..i knw am late but kya karu i was not well so thodi late hogi...shorry still not feeling bettr but for u people update it ..hope u people will like it ...i didn't do any proof reading so ignore typos...
CH5:THE HUG
sharon ran in de dirctn in which swayam went...finally she saw him lying on the ground with his head bleeding ..as he got hurt on the same place where it was injured before...
she tried 2 wake him up..she place his head on her lap..remvd his band aid on dat wound and washed the wound with water...& put anthr band aid..(sharon always carries frst aid box with her..u see😆)she sprkld sum watr on his face..he had woken up...
sharon:ur okay?
swayam:yup am okay ..
sharon:i don't understand how come did u get hurtd? are u kid can't u jst take care of urself?oh god don't knw how sweetu tolerates u..
swayam:i jst was..befor he culd answr back sharon has stopped him and said
sharon:now i don't need any explntn..frm now we will go togthgr okay?
swayam:huh? phele kehathiho ki tumey meri sat nahi ana peri kud kehathiho ki we will go togthr ?
sharon:god jst stop speaking this rubsh and follow me did u get it?
swayam :okay ..i wonder tu kisi bi sunthiho kya?
sharon:what?
swayam:kuch nahi ..chalo
as it had become night they decided to stay there that night..there were cold wind were blowing... sharon was shvrng..swayam gve his jackt 2 her..she took it widout cmplng as she was feelng chilld..
sudnly they heard sum roars of lion...sharon got scrd and hugd swayam as tght as she can...for the 1st tme they both felt sum thng diffrnt ..sum thng spl..kuch kuch hotha hey types...
sharon's fear was vanshd as she was feelng dat she was in de wrlds safest plce...dey sat dwn still holdng each othr..
swayam(brkng de hug):ur okay?
sharon:ya am okay..i was scarred hearing dat sound..
swayam:i knw u grls alway wil be feared abt such thngs...
sharon(not payng attn 2 his wrd ..lost in him):ya..(rembrs wat he said &wid full on attutd &angry pushing him back)wat ?wTH ..hello wat do mean ha?u don't knw any thng abt me?got it? u wer say as if u boys nevr get scrd of anythng..
swayam(balancing himself):oh kk chill..chill .it luks lyk if i don't agree u r gng to kill me..okay fine ..we boy do get scrd okay..
sharon:hmmm...
aftr sum tme sharon fell asleep on swayam's shldrs...her hairs wer fallng her face...he slw lock her hair behnd her ear...she was jst lukng like an angel...
swayam talked to him self:kitini cute..innocent ...i wish if u wuld be as innocent as ur now..it wuld be grt...but still u luk vry cute whle sleep..gud n8...
soon he too had fall into deep sleep..his hands was on her waist...her hand wer arund his neck...dey both lukng really cute ...
nxt mrng at kriyam aparmnt..kriya and raj was tnsd abt dere bhai..they doesn't knw wer he is...they have no clue abt there bro...kriya was cryng and raj was trying to console her ..her nose has already became red...she didnt sleep the whole night ..she was wry abt his bhai...she was angry ..sad..worried .
kriya to herself:hey universe ji pata nahi bhai kaha hey ..but pls where evr he may be...pls keep him safe ..please unverse ji.
raj:god knows bhai kaha hey ye bhai bi na..aur di ki tho haltha bohat bura hey i think only one person can handle her now.."REY" yes rey i will call him..
AT sharey's apartment rey is really worrid abt his sistr ...as she was miss 4r last night ..and he shld go to receive his baby sis too
rey to himslef: oh god shar..wer r u dear?am really worry?u didn't take phn aslo ...pls come home soon me &mumy r worid abt u ...dear..oh god i hope ki meri behan kahi bi ho tok ho...dats it..and muje choti ko leney airport bhi janahey...
jst thn raj calls to rey and rey pick it...
raj:hmm rey
rey:yup
raj:raj here..
rey:hie raj when did u come?
raj:hie rey ..yestrdy ..can u pls come to our flat?
rey:kyu?kya huva?
raj:wo rey di rat si rorahi hey and she didn't even slept last night ...so i thnk only u can handle her pls come na..
rey:what ?kriya rat bar nahi soyi hey? am come me abi arahu..
raj:okay thanks rey..
rey:but can u do me a favour?
raj:yup tell me..i will
rey:kya tu airport ja sak they ho to recve my sisy?
raj:okay ..fine..
rey :okay then i am coming
raj left to airport and rey went to kriyam's flat...kriya opns de door &he comes insde..
rey: are you okay ?kya huva why are you cryng so much?
kriya jst hug rey as tght as much she can...and was still sobbing badly..rey hugd her back...
rey(brkng de hug):kriyu wat happnd..?
kriya:no rey nthng is okay ...bro didn't come 2 home snce last n8..
rey:ur bro too?(cnfusd)😕
kriya:wat do u mean by u bro too? who else went missing?
rey :my sis is also miss since last night..
kriya :wat?shar is miss?and u didn't me til now...?(now angry at him)
rey:kriyu its not de tme to be angry okay?let thnk wer did dis both go..
kriya:hey rey kahi ayasa tho nahi ki wo dono sath me kogaye?
rey:may be .hosakitha hey..hey do u have any shar's classmats numbr?
kriya:yupe..meri paas simmi ki numbr hey..ek sec(gve him her numbr&he calls her...)
simmi:hello ..who dis?
rey:hello me sahron ki bhai rey hu..
simmi:ohtum bolo kuch kam hey kya?
rey:acutvly wo shar kal raat se ghar nahi ayeha..do have any abt wer is she?
simmi :no ..sry but shayad swayam ko pata hoga..becos dey both r prtns in botny prjct..
rey :oh ..kk thank 4r de info bye..
simmi :any tme..bye
both hang the phn
kriya:what happn?what did she say?
rey: wo keharahithi ki swayam aur sharon dono kisi projct me partnrs..so may be dey both r 2gthr...
kriya:ya may be..but jst hope ki wo dono tek oh..dats it..
rey:ya..jst hope..now feel sum relf as swayam is wid my sis..i thnk she will not face any probmls..
kriya:i think that shld be my dialog kyu ki shar is gng to take care of my bro...
both laugh at once and strt to share an LLHH...
PRECAP:
reetu ki entry
raj-reetu ki nok-jhok..
kriyansh ki past ki kuch secret will be revealed...
here it end i knw its not so good...i feel really weak for me wrtng this was a big deal ..hope u people undrstnd..next time pakka achi update dungi...slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...
luv,
renu
NEW ENTRIES:

Rajat shekawath:
called as raj.he is youngr brother of kriyam.he is comng back to india aftr 6 years..he gng to join st.louis .gals go crzy ovr him..smart handsum,,frndly ,prnkstr,sport star.vry brd minded and bindass attutd wala hey..don't have any laksh in his life...he is also an awsum dancer..vry caring abt his family..more than a brother he is an best friend to kriya..she shares evrthng abt her live with him...he knws evrthng about kriyansh..always loves and suprts his sibblngs he is gng to helpin getting kriyansh and swaron closer...in love with reetu his schoolmate ..loves her a lot but did't express his feelng to her..loves to fight with her always...he is 19 years old

reetu signhania:
she is the sister of youngr sharey.coming back to india aftr 6 years.she is also gng join st.louis..she is three years yngr than sharey..cares and loves her family a lot...vry shrt temprd..vry close to rey shares vry thng with him..she is topper of her schl..has a soft coner for rajat..loves him but she herslf is unware abut this fact..always fight with him..vry respnble and maturd..an really awsum dancertoo..vry kind at heart ..bohat ziddhi...knws evrthng abt kriyansh...sharey loves her a lot ...gng to help in getting kriyansh and swaron closr..she is also 19 year old
tho here are the cs of the new entries.i hope u like dis charctr too..these two are postve chrctrs only...this new jodi is gng to get our kriyansh and swaron closer and there is gng to be an love stry of his two too..so there gng to lots of fun ahead ..and ah thodi bohat romnce too...so stay stuned too knw more..igrnce typos..
love'
renu
BANNER:
so prstng my ff banner to all...i knw it is not so good becoz ye mera phele try hey ...before dis i have nvr trd anythng in edtng ..so guys pls do tell me how is the banner?and do rate it as i have to knw how well i can edt ...😃

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