pyaar ya dosti?(KR&SS FF)chap 6 updatd

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hello peeps...dis is renu here...so am here to make an FF ...hope u people lyk my cncpt..dis FF is nowhere related to the show...so here is a CS of my ff

Character Sketch :

reyansh signhania:
called as rey...he is the dream boy of evry grl...he is stylsh..intllgent ..smart..handsum..wat not...he luvs his twin sistr more than him self...and is vry possve for her..pampers her a lot vry strng headed..is an awsum dncr...dance is his 1st love and ofcurse he is de GS of de clg.. never fails to help his friends...an idea's factor..his idea never fails...he has a past wch inculds kriya...and swayam is his best buddy ...at prsnt he is 22 year old& in de last year of der clg...

swayam shekawath:
he is de lovr boy of de clg...most famus person of the clg ...he luvs parties... he always wants to live an carefree life ..capble of doing anythng and evrythng ..a quck leaner.. the most lovly frnd any one can have.. ..he is an awsum sngr...he is de CS of de clg... he has a twin sistr ... he luvsand cares for her alot .. ah thoda bohat possve bi hey.& he is de best buddy of rey... at prsnt he is 22 year old & ya last year of der clg...

sharon signhania:
caring .. bubbly at the same time maturd... she luvs her parent & twin bro to de core of her heart... trust them the most and her BFF is kriya wid whom she share evrythng... is very revrd ..she doesnt belve in luv ...she is de ACS of de clg... she has an awsum voice..and is an awsum singer ..at prsnt she is in de last of de clg &she is also 22 years old...

kriya shekawath:
she is a sweet girl..but a little bit shrt tmprd ..she is frndly wid evry one...she cares alot for her twin brother...and her BFF is sharon..dey both r best frnds rght 4rm dere child hood...she doesn't hide any thng from her xpct one thng wch she is still hidng 4rm her.. she is de AGS of de clg... she is aslo a fab dancer... she has a past wch includs rey...at prsnt is in de last year of de clg &22 years old..
four lifes ..2 love journey's...will dey evr reach de luv destny ?out of them two of them have a past..&two of them are total strngr to each othr ..wat did de destny plan for these four?will de best frnd's frndshp will break because of this love bondings?
so here i go with cs of my stry ...igrnce spellng and grmmrcl mistkes..pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...and criticism and suggestn are always welcome..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CH1: THE PARTY FIGHT
"wat de hell...bro ney peri se fight kiya?"shutd kriya in angry...😡"i told him not to do so but he never listn to me...okay i'll cme and get him home &thanks for infrmng "
(she hang de phn)...
(that night swayam went to a clg frnd's party where some one cmmntd abt kriya ..hearng them he became angry..ofcurse yaar possve indan bhai jo hey... so strtd fightng with them...in de fight he got injurd ...and fell to de grund ..sum one in de party cald kriya from swayam phone and infrmd her that her bro got injurd whle fightng with sum people...)
she made an phone call to sharon who her best frnd...
sharon:hey sweetu wat happn esi tme pe kyu call kiya?any prob?bolo dear..
kriya(cryng):shar...bhai got injurd whle fightng in de party...mom aur dady bi out of twn hey...muje kuchi samaj me nahi arahahey..wat to do...

sharon: sweetu clam dwn kuchi nahi hoga..jst chill...ur bro will be okay..are u wid him rght now?
kriya:no shar..me ab tak vaha nahi gihe ..wo kisiney muje cal karakey bathayata aur ab muje samaj me nahi araha hey ki how to get der..kyu ki ghar me ghadi nahi hey..kya tu aasakathi hey?

Sharon:no dear..tu janithi hey na me aapani chachi ghar me hu chacha aur chachi out of statn gayehe hey so I have luk aftr der kids.hey tu rey ko lejana..wo ghar per hi hey..he can help u..
kriya:rey ko ?nahi shar..me tumara bhai ko nahi lega sakithi..
Sharon:oh god but y taanu? U can take him jst cal him ask him once
kriya:shar I said no..I don't want to gve him any trble
Sharon:oh god..tekey I will come.but pehile tum meri chachi ghar awo rey ko lekey okay?me phn raki thi hu u jst cal him okay?muje bohat kam hey k cu dear..
kriya:per shar..(bfr she culd say sum thng sharon hangd de phn..)
kriya :oh god ab muje rey ko call karana hey.karu ya na karu ..don't knw he wil pick my call or not.Okay kriya thnk postively he will help u because he is bhai's best frnd na?okay now call him tell him ..
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She dald rey number..here rey is in deep sleep he gets disturb by her call see kriya's number ..picks the call
Rey(in half sleep):hello baat cutter... kyu meri jeena haram karahihey?u don't have any othr wrk?why don't let me sleep?do I don't have the rght to sleep.. ?
kriya:oye ..hello sleeping beauty get up .. I need ur help man get uppp..
Rey(still in half sleep) :Err...wat ?wat help do you need at this time?
kriya:wo bro is injurd..(she tell him all de stry&strts cryng)ghar me ghadi nahi hey I don't knw how to get der now..pls meri help karana..pls rey.
Rey(totally waking upand sit on the bed):hey kriyu.. I mean kriya don't worry ..pls mati rona i wil take u there.. 5 min me prkng area ajav (both kriyam&sharey famlies live in same aprmnt and are famly frnds)

kriya:thank u rey ..thank u so much I'l be der in 5 mins.
(both of dem hangd de call &got readycame dwn to parkng lot ..both sat in de car and rey strtd de car..)
kriya:rey shar ne hum dono ko tumari chachi ki ghar aney keli kaha hey..thn for there will go frm der..
Rey:okay..(rey notce dat kriya is still cryng.he held kriya's hand wch is on her lap.. )hey chill kuchi nahi hoga tumari bhai ko
kriya:hope so usey kuchi nahi ho.
Soon dey rechd sharey's chachi's huse..
Sharon:hey rey tu eni bachonoko dhekalena..me aur sweetu .swayam ko leaney jathey hey
Rey :no way sis..me eni rakashasho ka dayan nahi rakaney wala ..and top on to that this kids don't lyk me
Sharon:arey rey ..they r sleepng and so dey won't truble u ..u have to jst see that they don't get up.thats it..
kriya :pls rey..do it for me..
Rey :okay ..but come soon
kriya:aur rey apana car ki keys muje dena pls..
Rey(thrwng car keys): okay yelo
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krisha lev 4rm der & rech the party plce and sucssflly mangd to take swayam to de car.
kriya:hey shar tum bhai ki frst aid kardo ..me car strt karithi hu
Sharon:okay dear..
She cleand swayam's wunds&put band aid on his wunds
they wer back to sharey's chachi's huse..krisha went to the door and rang the bell..when the door was opend and the momnt they saw rey they both strtd laughng by seeing him in that cndtn ..🤣.there was food all ovr his body..&the kids were runs all ovr the huse...
rey:i told u i can't handle dis rakashas..they jst irrtd me..luk wat they have done...
sharon :chill bro ..they are kids..they don't know anythng...okay ..now am gng to cntrl dem...
sharon went to the kids and srtd talkng to dem ..mean while kriya kept her leg on sum food stuff and was abt to fall ...she clse her eyes in the fear of fallng.. .
but a pair of strng arms caught her...she opnd her eyes to see that rey had savd her frm fallng...and the next moment her eyes were lost in his chocolate brwn eyes..and he was also in same state...they both share an LLHH momnt...

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precap:
rey:u have hurtd me a lot kriya ..a lot..(he took de shrt 4rm her hand&left into de room bangng de doorbehnd him in angry)..
kriya to herslf:i nevr wanted to hurt u rey...but what clud i do?? i have no optns left...sry rey ...i luv rey and i will be luvng u always..

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CH6:THE TRUTH
mean while in de jungle...WITH SWARON:
sharon woke up only to find her self in swayam's arms...she pushed him..by dis swayam was also woked up...both of them were feeling dam awkward..both strated to look in different directions..there was a pin drp silnce b/w them..fnlly swayam had broke de silnce..
swayam:hmmm ..sharon.. i think we have to startd..
sharon:yupe ..okay..lets move..
both strtd walkng ..aftr some distance of walk they found the road..both wer vry happy...that they found de road..sharon was sitting on the mile stone..and swayam was askng the vechl for lift..but no one was willng to gve dem lift..
swayam:oh god..ek bi lift nahi derahahey..ab humey yehi road pi rehahoga kya?
sharon:oho.. swayam tumey lift mangana bi nahi athahey..oho wait ..i'll ask for lft..u sit dwn
swayam:try it out ..no one is gng to stop...
sharon:ya..dhekthey rehana...
swayam:we will see...
sharan:no you will see...
sharon goes to de road side..now swayam is sitting on de mile stne..sharon strtd askng lft ..soon one car stopd in frnt of dem...de car glass lowrd dwn..der was a guy insde de car..
sharon:hey ..acutvlly our car had brk dwn ..pls will gve us lft ?
guy:sure..but wer r u people gng?mumbai?
sharon:ya to mumbai..will pls gve us lft till mumbai?
guy :ya sure get in..
sharon goes near swayam & drags him to de car...swaron got into de car...swayam sat inde frnt seat & sharon sat in de back seat..
sharon (gvng her hand):hie ..am sharon..sharon signhania..aur ye..swayam ...swayam shekawath..mera classmate..
guy :hi ..am Karan ...Karan Malik
sharon:oh karan ..nce name..
karan:thank u miss beautiful..
soon dey both wer in to dere talks &by dis all swayam getng super si upar wala jealous...
HERE WITH RAJAT AND REETU:
a grl was walking in airport darning her luggage with her ,here raj was searching for reetu soon unknwly they both bang into each other and reetu was about to fall when raj saved her frm falling she closed her in fear but soon opend them and find her self in raj's arm ,she stood up with a jerk and shouted
grl:"tum?"
raj:ah me nahi tho tumey receive karaney SRK ayega kya reetu ?
reetu:tumesi bat karana hi bekara hey BTw bhai kaha hey?
raj:tumarey bhai busy hey that whyhe sent me here...
both startd walk towrds the exit
reetu:ethani mrng mrng kya wrk hey uney?
raj:oh god tum ek min bhi chup nahi rehasakthi?question pe qustn puchi rahithi hey..loud speaker
reetu(pulling him back):tumney muje loud speaker bola?
raj:ab LS ko Ls nahi tho aur kya bol they hey?
reetu:what ever loser kahika
there fight was gng on and on both got into the car and strt driving back home..
HERE WITH KRIYANSH:
kriyaansh were having coffee,kriya got call from her dady to do some urgent wrk ..
kriya:hmm rey wo i ned to go but i will be back in few mins..
rey:hey its okay..u carry on.
kriya:hey rey meri aney tak yehi rahana...
rey :okay cool
kriya okay then bye..
rey :bye
kriya took some file and left from there.aftr he has gone.he was getting bored rey strtd de have a luk at kriya's room...there wer pics of his sistr &kriya allover de room...jst then he saw a diary lying on the table ..he went near it ,took it
rey :i know reading others diary is not a good habit but what to do i don't have such good habits
he opend the diary and
"KRIYA SHEKAWATH"
was written on the frst page ,he turned to the next page and got the biggest shock of his life..there was his pic paste in the scnd page..

" MY FRIST CRUSH ..MY LOVE ..MY HERO ..MY PRINCE CHARMING"
without his notice a smle came on his face aftr reading but still he couldn't belive his eyes...he then trun to next page..there was a pic of there frst meeting..whch the most strge one that any one can have...his smile became wider aftr rembr ther frst meeting

"THE MOST WEIRDEST MEETING ANYONE CAN EVERY HAVE..."

withe same smile he turned to the next page to see the pic of there both ...
"AFTER SPENDING DAYS WITH HIM I AM FALL FOR HIM MORE AND MORE.."
he was really in a grt shock now did "she say i am falling for him? BTWshe has huge collection of our pics i wonder frm where she got all this..."he thought to himself and truned to next page..
"OUR FIRST DANCE PERFORMANCE TOGETHER "
aftr seeing he got back to his FB aftr remberd there performance...so automatically a huge smile came on his face...he turned the page..
"IN MY DREAMS YOU ARE MINE BUT IN REALITY YOU ARE MY DREAM"
by now he was not able understan any thing ..but to get the clarity he turned to the next page...
n de nxt page...
all ovr de pge it ws wrtn "rey i luv u ..i luv u rey..." ..aftr readng dis he was cmpltly shckd ..he was not able to belve wat he was seeing..de gal who has rejctd him..luvs him soo much..out of xctmnt he trund to nxt page..

"rey .. i love u so much ..but i don't have de dare to tell dis to u becos.. am scrd dat if shar knw abt dis...i wil lose my BFF fvr...she will nvr talk to me...me apni best friend ki liy e apani pyaar ko chodidungi..sry rey meri pass koy optn nahi..i luv u rey ..i luv u rey..i really do..rey meri pass koh optn nahi hey ..pls forgve me ...i am helpless.."


he turned to next page and there other pic of there both
""Why were we so far apart, even when we were together? "
he agn trund de page..

"rey i was vry harsh to u today..i am really vry sorry rey but am helpless i have to do it save my friendship..ajaka dini meri life me black day hey...tumey muje propse kiya aur meney tumey rejct kiya..am sry rey am sry...and i love u rey "
then he understood everthng and he clsd dairy...
rey 2 him self:iska mathalab kriyu luvs me? aur usi muje esi liye rejct kiya kuy ki wo shar ko kona nahi chahati...chahey kuch bhi ho par me tumey nahi chodunga kriyu...mey tum si ye bolwakehi rahunga ki u luv me...tho miss.kriya shekhawat get ready to say i luv u ...
he said it with a wide smile and place the dairy at its place and jst them the calling bell rang and it was kriya...rey opened the door and just then raj and reetu to reach there reetu meet both kriyansh and went into her flat while rey bid gud bye to kriya and went to raj and pulled him aside and huged him and said..
rey:thank u so much saale..
raj:kise keliye?😕
rey:wo muje teri ghar pe bolanekeliye..
raj:me kuch samja nahi..
rey:chod tuje samj me ayega bhi nahi...
both bid gud bye and went into there respective flats...
here it ends...i knw its not dat gud as u people have xpctd..but pls adjt...
PRECAP:
sharon:hey i have to say u have a grt dressng sense..u luk grt..
karan:hey thanks..u knw u luk vry beautiful..
by now swayam was really vry jealous...
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rey:hey raj mera ek help karega?
raj:defo karunga bolo what do u need..
rey:wo kya hey na ki
rey explain the whole dairy matter to raj
here it ends..i hope u people will like it..thank u so much for such lovly comments .. due to spamming prob i couldn't rply to every one but i loved reading them.slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...

luv,
renu

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aftr a sleep less and choas filled night finlly sharon got sum tme to sleep...she clses her eyes and was abt to fall asleep ..but suddnly her phn strtd ringng ..and it was swayam..she pickd the call...
swayam(shoutng):sharonnn
sharon:yup ..i can hear..am not deaf..don't scream...
swayam:ya ..i knw dat..but please save me frm ur BFF yaar..she is gonna killng me..and why the hell you people keep crckt bats in ur house?..any ways.. please opn the door of ur room ..
sharon:wat? ur at my home?
swayam:yupe..now no more qustn please opn de door ..she is back of me...
sharon :okay... okay 1 min...

sharon opn the door and see that kriyam runing all ovr de house...and she went in between swayam & kriya...and was tryng to stop kriya..
sharon:sweetu dear wat u dng ...he is ur bro not ur enemy..why are u tryng to hit him with this?
kriya:oh shar ..pls hat ja..i have to teach a lessn to him so dat he doesn't repeat such mistkes...(tryng to hit swayam)
swayam: please save me sharon...(chckng her 4r top to bottom..sharon was wearng a shrt dress) BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk too hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
sharon:thanks..
kriyai(who was notce all this):oye.. hello mr.swayam shekawath...how many tmes i have told u not to flrt wid my best frnd?u r gng to get two xtra for this...(trys to hit him but sharon stops her)
sharon:hey sweetu chill yaar..it okay na...lev it ..
kriya:arey shar u knw na?how much i was worried abt dis stupd yestrdy...wat if sum thng happns to him..wat shld i answr mom &dady?
sharon:sweetu chill drlng ..are u gng to kill him r wat?
kriya: aja tho ye gaya meri hat mey...(swayam runs frm dere..and kriya runs behnd him shutng..)
here rey is distrub by all dis..irrtd rey cmes to sharon room and seeing all this he says..
rey: wat de hell guys?wats gng on here? will sum one xpln?(swayam runs behnd rey&hides)
swayam:wo acvtlly ..my sis is full on angry on me abt yestrdy fght...now she wants to teach me a lessn yaar..pls save me frm her ..
rey:hey swayam tu apni behan si dartha hey?wat dis man?
swayam:u don't abt her yaar..agar gussa aya tho maa chandi hojathi hey meri behan...
rey:(to himself)muje patha hey ki wo shrt temprd hey..muje nahi tho aur kisko patha hoga meri kriyu ke baremey..to swayam :oh really ..i don't knw yaar..
kriya:hello xcuse me agar tumari dicuss hoga tho hatogey ..i need to talk to my bro..
swayam to rey :no yaar..she is gng to hit me hard...pls kuch kari na..(rey cng his crckt bat in kriya's hand..)
rey:hey kriya gve my crckt bat back to me...if not i don't knw wat i'll do..gve my bat back to me...(kriya gve a evil smle andnoded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..
rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)
kriya:haha..rey stop it pls.. stop it rey...haha
rey:then gve my bat back to me...
kriya:nooo..
rey:then am not gng to stop..
sharon 2 swayam:they are lukng cute na? it had been a vry lng tme since i have seen them like this..
swayam(lost in sharon's beauti):ya ture ...agreed...
(sharo looks at swayam&swayam looks at sharon...swaron share LLHH momnt...in dis ticklng prcss acdntly de bat in kriya's hand hits rey's head...hearng the rey shutng swaron come to there sense..)
kriya:oh god ..rey are you okay.? am sorry really sry...i didn't mean to do that..am sry..(cupid his face and strtd blow in de place wer de bat hitd..both share a LLHH..soon rey coms in his snse)
rey (tryng to remve her hands off his face):no its okay..am fine..

kriya(tears strtd making way frm her eyes):no rey am really sorry..

rey:no its okay...

sharon to her self:why sweetu is feelng so sad as if she had cmmtd the biggst mistke evr? what ever..(she truns 2 swayam):swayam kya tu pls neche jakara ice leavogey ?
swayam:ya sure...(swayam went frm dere)
sharon:hey sweetu chill..bro is alrght ..(swayam was back wid ice&putd deice head on de plce wer rey got hurtd..)
rey:ouchhh..hey swayam its paing yaar...
swayam:okay sorry sorry...BTW thanks dude at last becos of u my sis forgot evrythng...
rey(gves a smle):no prb..
kriya: no..not so soon bhai ... ur not gng to escpe so esly...(gvs an evl smle.)
swayam strtd rung &kriya ran behnd him..cng dis sharey lukd at each othr and smld...

precap:

swaron in lost jungle..

swayam:y do u hate me so much miss.signhania...?

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rey:akey (eyes)band karu tho vahi dheki thi hey ..kolu tho vahi dhekithi hey...

kriyansh dancng on dil se rey...

kriya :sorry rey ...am sorry..i want you back in my life but i can't get you back...but rey ..wat wuld you do if ur in my plce?if you wer askd to choose one thng b/w frndshp &love wat wuld you choose?
i knw i have brkn ur heart...but i don't have othr optns rey...i knw ur still angry on me.. but am really helpless rey...please try to understnd me...(and she strtd rung frm dere)

do new entrs bi honewaley hey rajat shekawath..and reetu signhania so stay tund...😃

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luv,

renu


Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ch4:Dil Se Rey..

next day early mrng in de clg...

rey was in the RH.he was jst cng de kriya's face in his eyes...all de mermies flashd in his mind...de 1st tme dey danced togthr...der 1st date..
der 1st fall ..and de mnt wen he propsd her...at de momnt wen he got de propse thng in his mind..he spokd to himslf:akey (eyes)band karu tho vahi dheki thi hey ..kolu tho vahi dhekithi hey...why kriya why ?why did do dis 2 me?i luv u so much but u didn't luv me back why?
i hate u kriya ...de wrd u said r still ringng in my ears...(he brk dwn in to tears...)
here kriya coming towrds RH..she is thnkng abt rey...der 1st meetng...der 1st date ...der 1st camp...& der 1 st kiss(she was blushng thnk abt it ) but soon her eyes were filld wid tears..wen rembrd how she had brkn his heart...
kriya to herslf:sry rey ...am sry..i want u back in my lyf but i can't get u back...but rey ..wat wuld u do if ur in my plce?if u wer askd to choose 1 thng b/w frndshp &luv wat wuld u choose?
i knw i have brkn ur heart...but i don't have othr optns rey...i knw ur still angry on me.. rey can't we atleast be frnds?😭
jst thn he heard some sound frm the rh..and entrd rh and saw rey dancng,,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xfuqkg6pbNU

rey:(hldng the stole ): tho kriya yeha sach me yeha ayethi ??it can't be my imgne becoz i have her stole with me..now why did she come her?what she wants now?

kriya in gals lock room..

kriya(realsng her stole was missng):why did u go in ?why did u lev ur stole der?ab rey ko patha chala tho?...

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(swaron wer in der botany class...dey both r science studnts..& kriyansh are arts stutnds..)
botany techr:so stutnd ..am gng to gve a prjct today ..dats is to collct diffrnt typs of flwr..wch are vry rare...for dis u people r gng to wrk in team...
so am gng tell who is de parntr of whom..so ..riya(swaron's classmate)wid rahul(swaron's class mate)..neha wid vicky..simmi wid nilesh..&sharon wid swayam...
aftr lstn to de teachr ..
sharon to herslf:oh god..wat de hell ..swayam and my pantr?i don't knw how ma gng to cmplt my prct ..i don't knw any thng abt him...hope dat its gng to be fine ...
swayam to himslf:oh so sharon is my prjct patnr..hm i thnk i will njy wrkng wid her as sis alway say abt her dat she is a gud grl ..swet grl..etc etc..will c how it will be wrkng wid her..
botny techr gve dem maps as wer 2 fnd dat flwrs..2 evr one&left de class ..
swayam:so sharon lets us strt de fnd the flowrs frm today? okay?
sharon:yupe okay..will strt in de evng okay...
swayam:yupe fine..
**********
in de evng..swaron in de car gng to get de flwr..for der prjct..
swayam:so wat is de flwrs wch we have to find?
sharon:Rafflesia arnoldii,Silene tomentosa,Blue Bell Tunicate, Lotus berthelotii,Purple Foxglove..dats it..
swayam:okay wer do we fnd dis flwrs?culd u pls read de map?
sharon:ya sure...
swyam:okay wer shld we go now?
sharon:de maps says we have to go to de rght..
swayam:rght? ..i don't thnk so..it let us to out of de twn..
sharon(in angry):hey do as i say..it is lyk dat only in de map...u say as if am wrng.. now take de rght
swayam:chil ..chill ...okay okay..
soon dey wer in a plce wer der was no one der ..dey wer in jungle...
swayam:wer shld we go?
sharon:hmm am cnfusd..de map says take left but der is no left trun here...(she gets to knw dat she was holdng de map up side dwn..)oh shit ..
swayam:wat ?wat happnd?any thng wrng..
sharon:sry swayam..i have done a mistke...
swayam: wat?
sharon:i was holdng de map upside dwn...
swayam:WTH sharon? oh god wat to do now? i don't wer we r now...
sharon(checkng her bag):oh shit...
swayam:now wat happnd?
sharon :i frgot my phn at home...
swayam:oh god..we r lost here and ur worried abt phn?
sharon :arey idt i was thnk ki if i had phn i wuld call my bro..&tell our prbml..
swayam:not a bad idea...u can call frm my phn..take it (gvng her his phn)
sharon:oh god not now...
swayam: wat happnd?
sharon:no sgnls..we can't make a call..
swayam:don't worried we r safe untill we r in de car...
but dey de car tire was punctrd...both got dwn 4rm de car and strtd walkng in jungle...
whle walkng ...
sharon(angry):dis is all becos of u?
swayam:oye..hello wat do u mean becos me?(cnfusd)
sharon:ya ..y did u hear to my wrd..if u didn't hear to me ..jst did wat u knw..we wuld not suffr here...
swayam:hey wats wrng wid u ..i don't undrstnd? 1st u only say to follw u ..thn u only ask y did u follow...wat ur prblm miss.signhania?..
sharon: mr.shekawath.. now i have to spend a whole nght in dis jungle wid u..dats my prblm ..
swayam:don't worry ...am not a man eatr or an wild animl..dat i'll eat u...y do u hate me so much miss.signhania...?
sharon(gves him angry luk):wat evr..i jst don't want to cme wid u.. i'll take my way ..u take ur way..
swayam:as u wish ..
both lev in diffrnt dirctns..sharon hears sum one shoutng...
swayam:ahhh .. sharonnn
sharon:oh god ...is dat swayam? ..oh god..he shld not get hurtd..
(she strtd rung in de drctn in wch swayam went..)

***********

out side the clg ..

kriya :hey bhagwan abi mer car ko karb honatha kya?ab me ghar kise javu?

jst then rey was gng in his car saw kriya stdng near her car and stop...

rey(lowng his car widow glass..):hey kya huva?

kriya:wo mei car karb hogayahey...

rey:hey come in ..me tumey lift dedunga..

kriya :okay

she sat in his car der was pindrop slnt in the car ...none of them talk in the car...and soon they rechd their apartmnt kriya thankd rey and went to her flat and rey did the same...kriya press the calling bell and the door is opnd by a guys who is at the age of 19 years on whom any gals gocrzy...kriya was schk to see him there..

kriya:chotu?????tu yeha? what a suprze (she said hugng him)

raj:wo kya hey na meri shcooling katam hogayahey tho soch apaki hi clg jn karalu that why am here...(he said hugng her back)

kriya:thats grt ...apani total life time me tera phele acha decsn yehi hey..

raj:haha..vry funny..

kriya :i was jst kidding chotu..vese bro nahi aya?

raj:nahi ..unka intazr horahey...

kriya:ach tek i was gng to frshd up ..

and kriya went into her room and raj sat in the sofa watching tv...and here in sharey flat..rey entrd in and sat on his sofa removng his shoes..jst then his phn strtd ringng.. he saw the dailr name and smile creepd on his face...

rey:hello choti..kisi hey?ach kab?kal?okay fine me airprt ajavunga tuje pick up karaney..chal cia..take care love u ...(both hang the call)..wow choti aaney wali hey.
precap:

reetu ki entry

raj goes to pick reetu frm airprt and raj-reetu ki nok-jhok...
swaron 1st hug ...
rey claimng dwn kriya...kriya in rey's arms...

i knw bohat borng chaptr tha ..sry for dat...but nxt part will be gud one...slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...and for pm's add me...
luv,
renu


Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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chapter 2:I WILL BE LOVING YOU REY

kriyansh were still in the same postn...still lost in each othr..but got distrub by the sund made by the kids...both came into sense..but are still in the same postn...
rey : kriyu ..i mean kriya ur okay?
kriya:ya am fne...
he help her to get strghtnd..jst den sharon came ...
sharon:bro tu ghar jara hena?sweetu ko bi leja...tekey

rey :okay ..i'll..chalo kriya lets go...
kriya :ya okay..bye shar ..gud n8 drlng...
sharon :gud n8 dear ..take care of ur bhai & urself too...
kriya:i'll dear...(both of dem hug...&rey aslo hug sharon)
sharon:bye bro ..bye sweetu ..
kriyansh:bye...

kriyansh were out side the huse..seeing swayam's cndtn kriya culdn't cntrl herslf ..and she strtd cryng ..rey culdn't see her cryng ..went near her &hugd her..she aslo hugd him back..

rey(still hugng her):hey come on tumari bhai ko kuchi nahi huva..he is okay na..don't cry kriyu...i can't see you like this...
kriya(brkng de hug& cryng):i was thnk ki what wuld happn if i didn't get any call frm the party...he nvr lstn to me i said him 1000 tme not be so implusv...but he nvr lstn ...whatshld i do with dis guy?...usey esi halthi me nahi dheki sakitha hu...
rey :hey chill ..don't worry..look at me ..meri cnditn dheko kasi hey?am i cryng ..no rght ?am lukng like joker rght?
kriya(gvng a smle):no ..u don't..evn in dis cndtn you look cute...
rey: really? me tumey cute lag rahahu? (befre she culd ans he cut her off)any ways...its too late lets go home...
kriya:yupe k..
kreyam went to there aprmnt..rey help kriya in takng swayam to dere flat...& plcd him on de bed in swayam's room...
rey(checkng his pockts): oh shit...i left my flat key at chachi's huse...oh god wat to do now?
kriya:hey rey its okay ..don't worry..shar wahi hey na she will get de key wen she is cmng trwm...
rey :ya but till den wer shld i be??withouth flat keys i can't go into flat rght?
kriya:hey rey u can be in my flat ..as mom &dady are out of statn u can be in our flat till shar cmes...
rey :are u sure?
kriya:yupe ..ya..u can be in de geust room...
rey :okay...
kriya:what r u gng do now?
rey : i jst want to take a shwr...culd pls tell me wherr is de wash room?
kriya:ya sure...cme i'll show u ..
(kriya take rey to geust room &shows him de wash room and levs...rey took shwr ...as he doesn't have an xtra shrt ..he thught to ask kriya to gve him swayam's shrt...at prsnt he is shrtless)
rey:hey kriya..culd u pls gve me one of de swayam's shrt?
kriya( who was with swayam removng his shoes off..hears rey ):ya sure rey one min am cmng...
kriya took one of swayam's shrt and was abt to go de room wer rey was...&rey was cmng out to take de shrt..dey both bang into each othr..both fall 2 de grund..kriya on de grund&rey on de top of her and shared a LLHH momnt...aftr sum tme both cme into der sense...
rey got up & helpd kriya to get up..kriya's eyes widend by cng rey as he was shrtless...rey took one step forwrd..kriya moved backwrd...dis prcss cntnd till she hit de wall..
rey :for god sake will u pls stop movng back?
kriya :hmmm.ya...wo actvlly...thanks rey.. thanks for evry thng u have done today...u have helpd me alot..
rey:no thanks kriya...
kriya:u r same as u wer in de past...
rey (in rude tone) :oh pls...i don't want to talk abt de past..it jst gvs me pain wen i rembr it...😡
by then kriya's eye became wet...
rey:u have hurt me a lot kriya..a lot..(took de shrt frm her hand&left into de room bangng de door in angry)..
kriya to herslf:i nevr want to hurt u rey...but what clud i do i have no optn left...sry rey ...i luv rey & i will be luvng u always...if posbl pls 4rgve me rey...
so here de chap ends...

PRECAP:

swayam:BTW pehele meney kabi kaha hey kya ki u luk dam hot?
sharon(blushng):oh really?
swayam:yupe..u r really hot..
***************************************************
rey:hey kriya gve my crckt bat back to me...if not i don't knw what i'll do..gve my bat back to me...(kriya gave an evil smile and noded in no..and strtd rung..rey ran back of her..both wer runs around de room..rey fnlly caught her &strtd ticklng her)

thanks for all ur lovly commnts..i cldn't rply to all cmmnt becoz of spammng probml but i love read ur feedback... pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...and for pm's add me... i have pmd only those people who are in my buddy list..

luv,

renu


Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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hello readers ..i knw am late but kya karu i was not well so thodi late hogi...shorry still not feeling bettr but for u people update it ..hope u people will like it ...i didn't do any proof reading so ignore typos...

CH5:THE HUG

sharon ran in de dirctn in which swayam went...finally she saw him lying on the ground with his head bleeding ..as he got hurt on the same place where it was injured before...
she tried 2 wake him up..she place his head on her lap..remvd his band aid on dat wound and washed the wound with water...& put anthr band aid..(sharon always carries frst aid box with her..u see😆)she sprkld sum watr on his face..he had woken up...
sharon:ur okay?
swayam:yup am okay ..
sharon:i don't understand how come did u get hurtd? are u kid can't u jst take care of urself?oh god don't knw how sweetu tolerates u..
swayam:i jst was..befor he culd answr back sharon has stopped him and said
sharon:now i don't need any explntn..frm now we will go togthgr okay?

swayam:huh? phele kehathiho ki tumey meri sat nahi ana peri kud kehathiho ki we will go togthr ?

sharon:god jst stop speaking this rubsh and follow me did u get it?
swayam :okay ..i wonder tu kisi bi sunthiho kya?

sharon:what?

swayam:kuch nahi ..chalo
as it had become night they decided to stay there that night..there were cold wind were blowing... sharon was shvrng..swayam gve his jackt 2 her..she took it widout cmplng as she was feelng chilld..
sudnly they heard sum roars of lion...sharon got scrd and hugd swayam as tght as she can...for the 1st tme they both felt sum thng diffrnt ..sum thng spl..kuch kuch hotha hey types...
sharon's fear was vanshd as she was feelng dat she was in de wrlds safest plce...dey sat dwn still holdng each othr..
swayam(brkng de hug):ur okay?
sharon:ya am okay..i was scarred hearing dat sound..
swayam:i knw u grls alway wil be feared abt such thngs...
sharon(not payng attn 2 his wrd ..lost in him):ya..(rembrs wat he said &wid full on attutd &angry pushing him back)wat ?wTH ..hello wat do mean ha?u don't knw any thng abt me?got it? u wer say as if u boys nevr get scrd of anythng..
swayam(balancing himself):oh kk chill..chill .it luks lyk if i don't agree u r gng to kill me..okay fine ..we boy do get scrd okay..
sharon:hmmm...
aftr sum tme sharon fell asleep on swayam's shldrs...her hairs wer fallng her face...he slw lock her hair behnd her ear...she was jst lukng like an angel...
swayam talked to him self:kitini cute..innocent ...i wish if u wuld be as innocent as ur now..it wuld be grt...but still u luk vry cute whle sleep..gud n8...
soon he too had fall into deep sleep..his hands was on her waist...her hand wer arund his neck...dey both lukng really cute ...
nxt mrng at kriyam aparmnt..kriya and raj was tnsd abt dere bhai..they doesn't knw wer he is...they have no clue abt there bro...kriya was cryng and raj was trying to console her ..her nose has already became red...she didnt sleep the whole night ..she was wry abt his bhai...she was angry ..sad..worried .
kriya to herself:hey universe ji pata nahi bhai kaha hey ..but pls where evr he may be...pls keep him safe ..please unverse ji.

raj:god knows bhai kaha hey ye bhai bi na..aur di ki tho haltha bohat bura hey i think only one person can handle her now.."REY" yes rey i will call him..

AT sharey's apartment rey is really worrid abt his sistr ...as she was miss 4r last night ..and he shld go to receive his baby sis too
rey to himslef: oh god shar..wer r u dear?am really worry?u didn't take phn aslo ...pls come home soon me &mumy r worid abt u ...dear..oh god i hope ki meri behan kahi bi ho tok ho...dats it..and muje choti ko leney airport bhi janahey...

jst thn raj calls to rey and rey pick it...
raj:hmm rey

rey:yup

raj:raj here..

rey:hie raj when did u come?

raj:hie rey ..yestrdy ..can u pls come to our flat?

rey:kyu?kya huva?

raj:wo rey di rat si rorahi hey and she didn't even slept last night ...so i thnk only u can handle her pls come na..

rey:what ?kriya rat bar nahi soyi hey? am come me abi arahu..

raj:okay thanks rey..

rey:but can u do me a favour?

raj:yup tell me..i will

rey:kya tu airport ja sak they ho to recve my sisy?

raj:okay ..fine..

rey :okay then i am coming

raj left to airport and rey went to kriyam's flat...kriya opns de door &he comes insde..
rey: are you okay ?kya huva why are you cryng so much?
kriya jst hug rey as tght as much she can...and was still sobbing badly..rey hugd her back...
rey(brkng de hug):kriyu wat happnd..?
kriya:no rey nthng is okay ...bro didn't come 2 home snce last n8..
rey:ur bro too?(cnfusd)😕
kriya:wat do u mean by u bro too? who else went missing?
rey :my sis is also miss since last night..
kriya :wat?shar is miss?and u didn't me til now...?(now angry at him)
rey:kriyu its not de tme to be angry okay?let thnk wer did dis both go..
kriya:hey rey kahi ayasa tho nahi ki wo dono sath me kogaye?
rey:may be .hosakitha hey..hey do u have any shar's classmats numbr?
kriya:yupe..meri paas simmi ki numbr hey..ek sec(gve him her numbr&he calls her...)
simmi:hello ..who dis?
rey:hello me sahron ki bhai rey hu..
simmi:ohtum bolo kuch kam hey kya?
rey:acutvly wo shar kal raat se ghar nahi ayeha..do have any abt wer is she?
simmi :no ..sry but shayad swayam ko pata hoga..becos dey both r prtns in botny prjct..
rey :oh ..kk thank 4r de info bye..
simmi :any tme..bye
both hang the phn

kriya:what happn?what did she say?
rey: wo keharahithi ki swayam aur sharon dono kisi projct me partnrs..so may be dey both r 2gthr...
kriya:ya may be..but jst hope ki wo dono tek oh..dats it..
rey:ya..jst hope..now feel sum relf as swayam is wid my sis..i thnk she will not face any probmls..
kriya:i think that shld be my dialog kyu ki shar is gng to take care of my bro...
both laugh at once and strt to share an LLHH...

PRECAP:

reetu ki entry

raj-reetu ki nok-jhok..

kriyansh ki past ki kuch secret will be revealed...

here it end i knw its not so good...i feel really weak for me wrtng this was a big deal ..hope u people undrstnd..next time pakka achi update dungi...slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...

luv,
renu

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NEW ENTRIES:


Rajat shekawath:

called as raj.he is youngr brother of kriyam.he is comng back to india aftr 6 years..he gng to join st.louis .gals go crzy ovr him..smart handsum,,frndly ,prnkstr,sport star.vry brd minded and bindass attutd wala hey..don't have any laksh in his life...he is also an awsum dancer..vry caring abt his family..more than a brother he is an best friend to kriya..she shares evrthng abt her live with him...he knws evrthng about kriyansh..always loves and suprts his sibblngs he is gng to helpin getting kriyansh and swaron closer...in love with reetu his schoolmate ..loves her a lot but did't express his feelng to her..loves to fight with her always...he is 19 years old


reetu signhania:

she is the sister of youngr sharey.coming back to india aftr 6 years.she is also gng join st.louis..she is three years yngr than sharey..cares and loves her family a lot...vry shrt temprd..vry close to rey shares vry thng with him..she is topper of her schl..has a soft coner for rajat..loves him but she herslf is unware abut this fact..always fight with him..vry respnble and maturd..an really awsum dancertoo..vry kind at heart ..bohat ziddhi...knws evrthng abt kriyansh...sharey loves her a lot ...gng to help in getting kriyansh and swaron closr..she is also 19 year old


tho here are the cs of the new entries.i hope u like dis charctr too..these two are postve chrctrs only...this new jodi is gng to get our kriyansh and swaron closer and there is gng to be an love stry of his two too..so there gng to lots of fun ahead ..and ah thodi bohat romnce too...so stay stuned too knw more..igrnce typos..
love'
renu

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BANNER:

so prstng my ff banner to all...i knw it is not so good becoz ye mera phele try hey ...before dis i have nvr trd anythng in edtng ..so guys pls do tell me how is the banner?and do rate it as i have to knw how well i can edt ...😃


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