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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
part 19
nice..thanks.
poor Aamna...
these creeps have the audacity to blame and demean Aamna...
cont soon..i will try but i cant before saturday.

Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Recap: Rajeev and Aamna spends some good time togheter, Akshat and Charu hide something from Aamna about her pregnancy

Kissmat Part 20:

Itne chor se Aamna ki ankh bhi khul jaati hai
She holds her head remember then looks around her
where all Rajeev ki behesatikar rahe the
Swayam looks at her mischievously
Woh bohot darr jaati hai
Rajeev notices she is awake
Rajeev: Aamna
Aamna don't know what to do
Woh kisi bhi tarrain khud ko samet ke bed se utar ke saath khari ho jati hai
Archie: ab kaun sa jadou kiya tumne Rajeev pe, kaab samjo ghi he is not yours, he has divorced you!!!!!!!
Vassu: you are a very talented actress
Aamna: mein...who...mein...(looks at him)...Rajeev...(jaisse ke use help ke liye pukar rahi hai)
C.G: Don't you dare take his name again, iss najayz aulad ko aapni kokh me lekar kisi ko passa nahin sakti pata nahin kitne kitne admioun ke saath, kiya kar rahi ho tum yahain(Aamna start crying) kind of witch huh!!!!!!!
Rajeev: enough is enough,maine Aamna ko yahain bulaiya tha for some business work(she looks at him in shock ke why he is lying to defend her) ,humare bich is raat kuch nahin hua aur mujhe yeh baat kisi ke samne prove karne ki zarurat nahin hai, mera zameer janta hai, mera khuda janta hai aur agar aab kisi ne Aamna ko blame kiya to us ke liye acha nahin hoga
He notices ke Aamna ko chakar arahe hain so he said
Rajeev: Sanjana
Sanjana: haan big b
Rajeev: Aamna ko uske kamre tak lekar jao
Sanjana: ok
She walks towards Aamna gives and gives her support to walks to her room
Rajeev: uski tabiyat kharab hai, she needs rest, aur agar kisi ne use disturb kiya to mujse bura koi nahin hoga
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In Aamna's room:
she was lying on the bed and Sanjana was there to take care of her
Sanjana: bhabhi aap se ek baat puchon
Aamna: hhmm pucho
Sanjana: kya aap ab bhi big b se pyaar karti hain
Aamna looks at her, then she notices that Swayam was spying them
Aamna: nahin, Sanju Rajeev sirf mera dost hai main Akshat se pyaar karti houn
This make Sanjana disappointed and she leaves
Swayam comes to her
Swayam: I think you exceeded the limits
Aamna: what do you mean
Swayam: aab to baas mauka milne ka time hai, I will kills Rajeev
Aamna: no, you can't, pls Swayam(she get up and stooped down to his legs)mein tumare paoun parti houn plzz
He pushed her away
Swayam: nahin aab bohot der ho chuki hai
He leave
Aamna shouts
Aamna: SWAYAM!!!!!!!!Swayam plzzz DON'T do thaaatt swayaaam
She was very scared and spent a sleepless night
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It was a rainy morning and when Rajeev get up he feels someone next to him
He open his eyes and find Veena
Rajeev: mumma
She open her eyes
Veena: Rajeev betta
Rajeev: mumma aap yahain kya kar rahi hain papa se jagrah hua kiya?
Veena: nahin mujhe pata hai tum sari raat rote rahe ho
Rajeev: nahin mumma
Veena: kal Aamna ke saat phirse yeh saab karne ke baad tumhe who waqt yaad agaya hoga jab who tumhari thi par Rajeev betta ab teen mahine ho gaye hain, betta main tumse yeh nahin kehti ke kisi larki me interest lo, yeh baat to mujhe bhi achi nahin lagge ghi par business main lagan do seeks your centers of interest
Rajeev: par mumma aap to meri baat maniye kaal hum dono ke bich kuch nahin hua
Veena: are you sure ke yeh saab tum isliye keh rahe ho tanke Aamna par koi ungli na uthaiye
Rajeev: main sach keh raha houn aaj aapne bhi mujhe ghalat samja, mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahin thi
He gets up and goes in the washroom leaving Veena more sad
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Swayam: tumhe sirf use gholi marni hain not kill him, baas gheri chot pouchao uske arms ya legs mein
Man: ok sir,
The man leave
Archie: Swayam tum Rajeev ko kyun chot puonchanna chahthe ho
Swayam: kyunke isse Aamna usse dur chali jaye ghi
Archie: but tum uske bache upar var karte I don't know Why Rajeev
Swayam: abhi mein bache ko kuch nahin kar sakta aur phir bache ko chot loaggi to Aamna ko bhi lagge ghi and Rajeev usi care karne ke bahane mein uske aur kareeb ajay gha
Archie: ok
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Akshat and Charu were discuss in the hospital
Charu: you want to say something to me
Akshat: nahin to
Charu: phir mujse milne kyun aiye
Akshat: bina kaam ke main tumse milne nahin a sakta
Charu: oh shut up Akshat!!! mujhe bohot kaam hai
Akshat: this is not fair Charu pehle tum mujse milti thi sara din basketball khelti thi jaabse thumare college days khatam hue tumhare paas mere liye time hi nahin hai
Charu: oh!!! Akshat mein toh tumhein batana hi bhul gaye!!!!!!!
Akshat: what??
Charu: Dii kal subbo check up ke liye aiye thi, aur mera chak yakeen mein badal diya
Akshat: reeeaaalllyyy??????
Charu: hhhaaannn
Akshat: Charrruuu I'm so happy congratulation!!!!!!
Charu: haan par mujse kyun keh rahe ho Dii se kaho na
Akshat: oh yah, tum ne use bata bhi hai ke nahin
Charu: nnnoo I forgot
Akshat: pagal...ab aisse mera moun kyun dekh rahi ho call her
Charu: ok
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Aamna was in the bank actually us ke pass paisse kaam the, unfortunately she meets Rishi
Rishi:
Aamna tum yahain, dekho agar tumhe paisson ki zarurat hai to mujse kaho na
Aamna: Rishi plz mein tumhe jhelne ke mood mein nahin houn
Rishi: tum to naraz ho gaye acha ek kaam karo tum aapna sara zevar(jewelry) bech do aur phir tumhare paas paisse hounghe simple like poor people

Aamna: shut up Rishi!!!
She start to walks
Rishi: wait wait!!!ok actually mere pass bohot paisse hain to main unhe charity mein deta houn, tum bhi poor people mein hissa lelo kya pata kuch tumhein mil jaye
He left Aamna very angry
she returns home when her mobile ring
She pick up as it was Charu
Aamna: hello
Charu: helloo Dii how are you
Aamna: fine
Charu: Dii I have good news for you
Aamna: haan batao
Charu: Dii aap ek bache ki main nahin banne wali...
Aamna(cut in between): what do you mean I' not pregnant
Charu: Dii puri baat to suniyeh aap ek nahin do bache ki maan banne wali hain
Aamna(very happy): what sach!!!!???
Charu: haan aap ko twins hone walle hain
Aamna: oh I'm ssooo happpyyy Charu I love you
Charu laugh
Aamna: wiasse Charu ki bachi tumne to mujhe dara hi diya
Charu: dil to kara tha ke aapse mil ke bataoun lekin yeh jo Akshat hain na
Aamna: what iska matlab Akshat ko bhi pata tha aur aap logoun ne mujse yeh baat chupaiye
Charu: haan who sure nahin tha to main aap ko khushi de ke china nahin chahthi thi
Aamna: hhmm me sooo happy main...main tumhe kiya bataoun public mein houn loog mujhe pagal samjhein ghein
Charu: ok Dii sorry I have lot of work bye zyada pagal na honna but iss halat mmein hamesha is tarain khush rehna
Aamna: ok bye sweetheart
Charu disconnect the phone
Akshat: kya kaha Aamna ne
Charu: Dii pagal ho gaye hai
She leave Akshat confused
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Varrun aur Mehek ki anniversary thi so ghar pe party thi
so saab party enjoy kar rahe thein
when the man of Swayam was there staring at rajeev
Aamna was happy but also worried for Rajeev who har taraf dekh rahi thi ke all is fine
He pulls out a pistol
Aamna sees it but she was upstairs she start to runs down but the man shoot on Rajeev
TTTAAANNN
Then the man escape from there
Aamna finally arrived close Raj'lying body running and shouting
Aamna: Raaajeeevvv
she sits on the grounds take his head on her lap
Aamna(crying): Rajeev ankhein kholo, open your eyyeeesss Rajjjeeevvv
Veena comes too
Veena: mera betta
Aamna: mumma calls the ambulance!!!!!!! jalddiii!!!!!
She was crying badly and Veena is panic
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so here is the part do comments
Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
part 20
nice part...
so its twins for Raj and Aamna...
poor Aamna...
and that Archie and Swayam and the others should be punished so much...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
part 20
nice part...
Thanx
so its twins for Raj and Aamna...
Yes happy?
poor Aamna...
and that Archie and Swayam and the others should be punished so much...
Ya don worry
cont soon...
will try but I can't before next saturday
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I notice that there are some silent readers and I request them to do comments Pllleeeaaassseee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
So sorry but i have told you that with my college i have no much time sorry next part tomorow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey imane its awesome..do pm me whenever u update it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manju_sinal

hey imane its awesome..do pm me whenever u update it...

ok sweetheart, just give me an hour
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Recap: Aamna was so happy as Charu told her she has twins, a man of Swayam has try to killed Rajeev

Kissmat Part 21:

Aamna: plz mumma aap gabraiye maat kuch nahin hoga Rajeev ko call the ambulance
Veena(crying): mera bacha rajeev...
Aamna khud hi ambulance ko call karti hai
They both are now in the hospital waiting for some new of Rajeev
Veena: Aamna
Aamna(lost somewhere, her eyes are now red rone ki wajah se and she was feeling so guilty ke why main Rajeev ke itne kareeb ayie ke Swayam ko yeh kadam uthana para): hhmm
Veena:tum ab bhi ro rahi ho
Aamna: pata nahin mumma agar Rajeev ko kuch ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahin karoun ghi
Veena: lekin tum ne kya kiya
Aamna(realise ke Veena ko Swayam ke bare main pata nahin chalna chayie) woh... baas kuch nahin mumma aap nahin samjhe ghi

When all the family (without Rishi, he was not in the party) come there they come after while Veena and Aamna come with Rajeev
Mehek: Dii kya hua jiju ko
Aamna: woh...
C.G: agar mere bette ko kuch hua to main tumhe nahin chorungha samjhi
Veena: aap aag(fire) pe tel(oil) maat daliye(a French expression)
Vassu: bechara Rajeev
Sanjana: shut up you all hamesha bura hi sochte ho keep your mouth close and wait
15 mins later a nurse come out
Aamna rushes to her, all follow her
Aamna: nurse who...patient...is he ok
Nurse: abhi tak hum kuch nahi keh sakte bohot critical hai khun bohot beh chukka hai aur hospital main B positif groupe blood nahi hai we needs blood(balaji's style)
Aamna: B positif...nurse mera blood groupe same hain(just a concidence) aap mujse lein plz
Nurse: aap pregnant hai na
Aamna: haan kyun any problem
Nurse: I'm sorry it's not good for you and your child if I take you blood
Aamna: lekin nurse plz mujhe kuch nahin ho ga I promise
Veena: Aamna betta it's not good for you
Aamna(start crying): mumma...Rajeev
Aman: bhabhi hum blood ka arangement karte hain aap aram se beth jayie
Aamna: lekin...
Sanjana: bhabhi
They all was trying to arrange the blood and Aamna was just thinking feeling guilty
Some hours later Akshat come in he hospital meet charu when he find Aamna n all the parivar there
Akshat: Aamna kya hua sab thik to hai na
Aamna looks at him
Aamna: Rajeev...Rajeev...
Akshat: kya hua Rajeev ko
Aamna(tears start running from her eyes): meri...meri wajah se...Rajeev...ko...
She hugs him crying loudly
Veena feels bad
Akshat: Aamna...Veena antie kya hua why she is crying
Veena(start crying too): kisi ne Rajeev upar goli mari aur...
Akshat: WHAT?????
Aamna leave Akshat,sits beside Veena and put he head on her shoulder
Aamna: mumma kuch nahin ho sakta mere Rajeev ko, kuch nahin
Veena looks at her surprised
Veena: haan betta don't worry
and she again start crying
Akshat: lekin yeh saab hua kaisse
Aamna: akshat...yeh...saab...mere...mera...kusur..hai
Akshat understand ke yeh saab ke samne kehne ki baat nahin hai
Akshat: Aamna chalo hum cafeteria me bethte hain you needs rest chalo
Aamna ko bhi samaj ajati hai she wipes her tears and walks with Akshat
Veena again feels bad
Veena(in her mind): shayad mere bette ki kissmat me tum ho hi nahin par who tumhe kitna chahta hai apne pure dil se to phir kyun tum Akshat ke saath...nahin Rajeev ka khyal mein rakhoun ghi, who apni biwi ko kho sakta hai lekin apni maa ko kabhi nahin kho sakta...I'm always with him
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Akshat: Aamna coffe pilo
Aamna: are you mad wahain mera raj zindaghi aur maut se laraha hai aur main yahain maze aurahoun coffe pihoun?
Akshat: calm down aur batao ke yeh saab hua kaisse
Aamna: kal raat ko bohot storm tha...and you know I'm scared of it...
Akshat: haan to
Aamna: to...main Rajeev ke kamre mein gaye aur wahain meri tabiyat kharab ho gaiye...then raj ne mujh apne bed pe lita diya...aur khud bhi wahain leth gaya...par trust me Akshat humare bich kuch nahin hua
Akshat: hhmm to phir?
Aamna: phir jab main utti to all was in the room fighting with Rajeev...unko lagga keh...
Akshat: kitni ghatyia soch hai huh
Aamna: nahin Akshat mere liye to Rajeev aur main yeh kar sakte hain maine divorce peapers ko haat bhi nahin lagaya baas logon se kehdiya that I've sign it for me we are not divorced Akshat
Akshat: acha agge batao
Aamna: to I think I was about to faint...jab raj ne sanjana ko kaha ke bring her to her room...to sanjana bring me to my room...she ask me if I love Rajeev(tears start coming out of her eyes) aur swayam wahain tha to...I...I... said no...(she start crying) aur phir...wo...wo...swayam..(sobs)...usne kaha...he said...he will...kill Rajeev(crying)...aur phir aaj party mein...aaj wo ek aadmi ayaa and...he...shout on raj...aur main...main to upar...thi mujhe Rajeev ke saath niche khara hona chaiye tha...tab shayad main use bacha letti...main bohot bewakuf houn all this is my fault...na main storm se darti na mera Rajeev aaj...agar raj ko kuch ho gaya to I will kill myself
Akshat: shut up Aamna apne bachoun ka to socho
Aamna(realise, she put her hand on her stomach): mere bache...main...I'm sorry...
Akshat: acha chalo chaltein hai
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All where go home sone ke liye bas Aamna stay there
she was crying all the night and feeling guilty
Morning at 6am Veena comes
She see Aamna like that and become upset
Veena: Aamna betta tum sari raat yahain aur wo bhi...chalo...ghar chalo...
Aamna: mumma pehle doctor kehde ke Rajeev bilkul thik hai phir main ghar bhi chali jaounghi
Veena: uff kitni ziddi ho tum...kuch khaya hai tumne
Aamna: mumma maine kaha na pehle Rajeev ki khabar ane dijiye phir main saab kuch kar lounghi office bhi chali jaounghi
Veena sits beside her
Veena: yeh lo paani to pilo
Aamna: nahin
She looks down and take her head in her hands
When achanak we hear a scream from inside
Aamna looks up in shock
Aamna: mumma
Veena: main doctor ko bulati houn you don't panick ok
Amana start crying she walks inside and see Rajeev is moving here an here in unconscious he is suffering, and all the machines are biping(ti ti ti wali aawaz)
Aamna slowly walks towards him, take his hand and kiss it to make him calm
she kisses ewerywhere of his hand, her tears falls on his hand but he is still like that, Aamna slowly bend down and give him a short kiss on his lips
The maching stop biping and he calm down
Aamna sits beside him
Aamna: I'm sorry; meri wajah se tumhe yeh saab dard...
She again start cryning
Aamna: main tumhare liye tumse hi dur ja rahi houn mujhe maaf kardena...mujhe maaf kardena Rajeev...maine tumhare saath bohot bura kiya hai...mujhe bhul jana...ho sake to khush rehna aur kisi aur se shaadi karlenna...(she get up) and start walking...(when she returns)...bye...take care...
The doctor and nurses comes in the room
Doctor looks at Veena
Doctor: yeh to stable hain...hum abhi inhe khun ka injection dedetein hai aur phir in 24hours he can goes home
Veena: ok doctor thank you very much
the doctor goes and Veena aur Aamna comes out
Veena: Aamna tum ne aissa kya kiya jo Rajeev...
Aamna: kuch nahin mumma baas aisse hi...aab main ghar chalti houn Rajeev ko chaam(evening) ko lenne ajaoughi
Veena: haan haan jao rest karna ok
Aamna: hhmm
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She was walking to go home when she meet Swayam
Aamna: tum...
Swayam: haan main yeh dekhne aya houn ke Rajeev zinda hai ke marr...
Aamna: shut up!!!!bakwaas band karo!!!!! kyun kiya tumne aissa kyun...maine kaha tha na ke main Rajeev se dur chali jaounghi to phir kyun
Swayam: tum shayad meri warning ko damkhi samajthi ho lekin Swayam Raheja jo kehta hai wo karta bhi hai miss Sinha
Aamna: main Rajeev ke anne ke baad ghar chor kar ja rahi houn agar piche se tumne kuch kiya to bohot bura hoga Swayam
Swayam: omg me so scared(he laugh)
Aamna leave from there
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Verry sorry I write after two weeks but plz do comments I will try to post soon now my college schedule is good
This part was for my lovely friend manju welcome to my ff keep commenting here and sorry again deepa if I make you wait




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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww thnx swthrt fo dedicating dis part to me...well m reading ur ff from da begining so yet to read dis part..will comment later darling nd plz come to RA FC dear..missing u...

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