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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Recap: Rajeev start dating Archie, Akshat and Charu hide some thing to Aamna about her pregnancyAamna invites all the family to Kanan's party, and...I think that' all

Part 16:

Veena: Hi betta

Rajeev: Hi mumma main jaldi mein houn mujhe aaj Archie ke saat picture dekhne janna hai

Veena: betta mujhe acha nahin lagta ke tum aur Archie, aur waisse bhi aaj hum loog saab Kanan ki birthday party mein ja rahein hain

Rajeev: Kanan kaun hai

Veena: Aamna ki behen

Rajeev: kaun Aamna

Veena: Shut up Rajeev!!! Aamna se laraiye hui hai tumhari is mein Kanan ka kya kusur

Rajeev: ok main party mein jaougha but only for Kanan

Veena: acha betta main zara Aamna ke paas jake bethti houn

Rajeev: haan meri to kisi ko parwa hi nahin hai na

Veena: aissi baat nahin hai betta

Rajeev: let's forgot jaiye mumma

Veena leave and go on the door of Aamna's room she sees that Sanjana usse college ki kuch batein kar rahi hai n they both are laughing

Veena: Aamna betta

Aamna: oh Hi mumma!! betiye

Veena: to kya chal raha hain dono behenon mein

Sanjana: kuch nahin mumma hum to aisse hi

Veena: acha batao kiska Mazak ura rahi thi tum dono

Sanjana: uss idiot Aman ka

Veena: agar usne sun liya to phir larna dono

Aamna: inka to yahi kaam hai, waisse I want to thanks you both aap mujhe bohot support karti hain

Sanjana: whet is this bhabhi aap mujhe paraiya mehsoos maat karaiye plz

Veena: aur aapni maan se bhi koi Thanks kehta hai

They all hug when mehek comes

Mehek: aap loog abhi tak taiyaar nahin hue hurry up party ka time ho raha hai

Sanjana: are main to baas panch mins mein aiye dair to yeh lagatin hain

Aamna: acha aaj main bhi panch mins me tayaar ho ke aiye

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In the party

Akshat: ladies and gentlemans, your intension plz, I'mp here for celebarate my sister in law'birthday: Kanan I want to cuts the cake the cake soon so no long speech ok

Kanan: ok aaj main jo bhi houn it's because of a lots of persons par pehle main us insaan ko stage pe bulana chahoun ghi jiske menaat ki wajah se is saal mera music album realise hua: Rajeev baiya!!!!!!!!!!

Rajeev comes on the stage smiles at Kanan

Kanan: and the person who always support me, always care for me, always love me like she is my mom it's my Dii!!!!!

Aamna comes on the stage n hug Kanan

Akshat: now we can cut the cake

Charu: Akshaaatt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All sing(Happy Bithday) to Kanan

Kanan cuts the cake and give the first piece to Rajeev, then to Aamna and all

Varun: and now it's time to dicoo!!!!!!!!!!!

All dance on the dance floor exept Rajeev and Aamna, she just watch them near the dance floor but he is at the bar drinking

Kanan: Rajeev baiya

Rajeev:

oh Kanan! yeh lo some flowers for you

Kanan:

thanks baiya waisse aap yahain kya kar rahein hai

Rajeev: time pass kar raha houn

Kanan:

what rubbish aapko dance karna hoga

Rajeev: kiske saat tumhari Dii to aab...

Kanan: koi baat nahin aap mere saat dance kijiye chaliye

Rajeev:

ok tum nahjin manoghi

She drags him on the dance floor and both dance

Aamna has notices that Raj comes on the dance floor

She dream that they both dance together

song time:

Thora sa pyaar hua hai thora hai baaki

Thora sa pyaar hua hai thora hai baaki

Kaunsa mor aya zindaghi ke safar mein

Baas gaya tu hi tu aab to meri nazar mein

Dil ki har ek dharkan tujko pechan thi hai

Meri chahat hai aab kya tu nahin janti hai

Main tujhe jaan gaye hooohooo

Tujko pechan gaye phir bhi teri haan hai baaki

Thora sa pyaar hua hai thora hai baaki

Charu comes to her make her out of her thought

Charu: Dii

Aamna: haan...woh mein...mein zara bahar ho ke aati houn

Charu:

Dii bahar tand hai

Aamna: to kya yahain ghaarmi hai

Charu: Dii aap...

Aamna: I'm sorry meri wajah se you can't dance with Akshat here but try to enjoy the party

Charu: Nahin dii main to...

But she leave

Aamna was out looking at the moon she remember all the moments she spend with Rajeev jab use bache ki yaad aati hai

Aamna(to her baby): Hi meri jaan kaisse ho aap, you know aaj aapki massi ka janam din hai don't worry main aapki taraf se unhe wish kardounghi hhmm now aap so jaiye raat bohot ho chuki hai.

Voice: sweets dreams

Aamna return and sees Sanjana standing there

Sanjana: tum bohot ache bache ho aapni mumma ko bilkul bhi tang nahin karte that's like a good girl...or boy, waise bhabhi aapko kab pata chalegha it's a girl or a boy

Aamna: Idon't know, waisse bhi I don't care I just want my baby safe and sound

Sanjana: ok chaliye bohot sardi(cold) lag rahi hai mujhe

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C.G: Rajeev betta main dekh raha houn houn ke tum aur Archie bohot ache dost banchuke

Rajeev: haan papa I know what do you mean but I needs some time

C.G:

waisse Archie is a nice girl

Rajeev: haan afsos is baat ka hai ke mujhe ye aaj pata chal raha hai

C.G: koi baat nahin chalo I think we should leave

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All the Garewals exept Varun and Mehek has leave

Aamna: thank you Varun tum ne party arrange karne mein Akshat ki bohot madat ki

Mehek: Dii yeh to humara farz banta hai

Charu: Akshat plz Dii ko ghar drop kar dena

Varun: No it's ok mein kar loungha

Kanan: Dii I will miss you a looot take care

Aamna: don't worry main time nikal ke tumse milne aoughi

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sorry pehli bar bohot acha part likha tha part deleted ho gaya dusri bar hurry mein likha actually mujhe khanna banana hai sorry

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

part 15
nice part...
poor Aamna...
that chudail Archie...
and Raj is really an idiot...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

part 16
nice...
when will he get to know about Archie and Swayam and others?
cont soon...

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Recap: All goes to Kanan'birthday, and...nothing else

Part 17:

Archie and Rajeev goes on a date again
Archie: Rajeev I want to talk to you about something
Rajeev: yes
Archie: divorce Aamna
DHAMAKE for Rajeev
Rajeev: what?
Archie: If you divorce her you are free, and Aamna too it's for her happiness then she can live with Aksshat plz Rajeev
Rajeev thing for a moment and then said
Rajeev: hhmm I think it's the best solution
Archie: so you go and pick the paper from the court
Rajeev: hhmm I will
Archie: that's good
Rajeev: maybe
Archie: oh common, this girl spoil your life and you still want her well, it's for her
Rajeev: you are right I will give her, her love
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Aamna was in her sister's house:
Kanan: thanx Dii for coming kal kuch baat hi nahin ho paye thi
Aamna: to aab batta do koi khas baat
Kanan: nahin woh...baas aap ko bohot miss kar rahi thi aap teen mahino se mujse nahin milli I'm not happy for t-his
Aamna: I'm sorry, but I promise you that now I come here regulary
Kanan: thanx Dii, but aap bhi is halat mein thak jahein ghi aur aaj bhi subba ke 9 bajje hamare ghar a gaye, main khud hi a jaounghi
Aamna: nahin tum plz mere ghar maat aana warna Vassu auntie ya papa phir se koi...nahin tum whain maat aana plz
Kanan: ok Dii, No problem par aap itna ghabra kyun rahi hain
Aamna: kuch nahin aab main chalti houn maine office join karra hai late ho gaye to bohot bura ho ga,
bye
Kanan: bye!!(in her mind): yeh Dii bohot ajeeb hai pehle to aise nahin thi, I think she hides some thing from me
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Aamna was in he'r cabin(office mein)
when koi darwaze pe knock karta hai
Aamna: come in
The person: tum!!!...tum yahain klya kar rahi ho
Aamna: aapna kaam kar rahi houn sir, mujhe aapne naukri se nikala to nahin hain na, so I can work her and ask for my salary
Person: stop this nonsense Aamna leave!!!! Tu yahain aye kyun thi
Aamna: for live I needs money sir and for have money I must work so I come there for working sir
Person: whatever, I don't care main tumhe paisse doungha but try to not show your face to me
Aamna: thanks Rajeev(he stares at her) I mean thank you sir
He leave
Aamna: (in her mind): dekha jaan aab tumhare papa hume paisse dega aab chahe wo hume khanna kilaye ya phir hume salary de it's the same for me
Aamna goes for find a file and she meets Kanan
Kanan: Dii aapne office join kar liya
Aamna: haan is tarra humara wo problem bhi solf we can meet in office
Kanan: yes Dii but main aapko lunch time pe milti houn bohot kaam hai
Aamna: ok no problem
Kanan goes and Aamna smiles standing there
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Rajeev: Dad

C.G: Haan bolo
Rajeev: I want to divorce with Aamna
C.G: what??? This is great news...I mean...this is good for you both
Rajeev: yes I think that too
C.G: I'm with you
Veena: but I'm not agree, plz Rajeev betta yeh saab thik ho sakta hai
Rajeev: kya thik ho sakta hai you plz don't interfere in my problems
Veena was hurt by Rajeev' behaviour he never talk to her like this she has tears in her eyes and goes away from there
She walks in hurry towards her room when she met Aamna
Aamna holds her arm
Aamna: kya hua mumma aap ro kyun rahi hain
Veena looks at her and thinks
Veena(in her mind): aab mein tumhe kya bataoun yeh hi ke kal mera betta tumhe talak dega...nahin, Aamna ko maat batao who is baat ko lekar upset ho jaye ghi
Aamna: mumma (she lead her to her room{Aamna'room} and they both sits on the bed) mumma kyun itna ro rahin hai plz kuch to kahein
Aamna wipes her tears
Veena: kuch nahin betta woh...baas tumhare papa ne...
Aamna: oh...mumma aap unki batoun par dayan maat dein you know ke who hamesha dusron ko hurt kartein hain
Veena: hhmm tum kaissi ho office se thak gaye ho ghi thora araam karlo
Aamna: nahin mumma maine who aaj Rajeev ki passand ki khir banani hai aur chinni lene aye thi...oh god!! khir!!!!
She get up n rush in the kitchen
Veena: (to herself)kitni achi biwi milli thi tumhe Rajeev phir bhi tum, Aamna ki battoun se lagta hai ke who abhi bhi tumse pyaar karti hai lekin...yeh saab...shayad Aamna Akshat ke saath ki hui ghalti ko pachta rahi hai aur shayad who tumhare saath phirse...agar aissa nahin hota to who kab ka Akshat ke ghar rehne lagti ******************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Akshat: Charu don't you think ke tumhari Dii ko is halat mein kaam nahin karna chahye
Charu: haan to
Akshat: tum us se yeh kyun nahin kehti ke mere ghar me raho khanna bhi wahain se khao n all
Charu: tum Dii ko nahin jante who kabhi nahin maneghi she will teel me "main kisi par depend nahin hona chahthi"
Akshat: par phir bhi use manao I don't think ke yeh saab ke baad Rajeev will behave well with her
Charu: Dii prefers to endure the insults from Jiju rather than being away from him
Akshat: par phir bhi mujhe acha nahin lagta
Charu: relax Akshat my Dii is a strong woman, ok I have an appointment so I must leave I call you later
Akshat: ok
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Archie: Swayam I'm so happy Rajeev mangaya
Swayam: woow excellent news dear
Archie: hhmm I will forward Papa to give this new to Aamna I'm sure She will be shattered
Swayam: I'm so happy
Archie: me tooo
Swayam: I'm very hangry
Archie: then we goes and have dinner
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At the dinner table: Ek ajeeb si khamoshi thi saab baas khanna kha rahe the
When Aamna comes
Aamna: Sir...I mean Rajeev aaj maine tumhare liye khir banaiye you want to eat
Rajeev: kis khushi mein
Archie whispers to him: divorce ki khushi mein
They both laugh zor zor se
Aamna don't hears but feels bad
She sits and start to eat
Lallit: Rajeev betta project tum handle kar rahe ho na
Rajeev: haan par I have some other work so miss Sihna main chahta houn ke tum presentation bannao aur kal 6p.m tak ready ho
Aamna: lekin aap mujhe aaj baata rahe hain main to kal tak kabhi bhi finish nahin kar paounghi
Rajeev: I don't care mujhe presentation kal 6p.m bajje tayar chahiye or else tum naukri se nikali jaoghi
Aamna: yes sir
She get up and goes to her room change herself in hurry and start working kaam karte karte so jati hai
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Morning: someone knock at her door
( so Rajeev divorce papers lenne gaya tha but he doesn't signs it because it's impossible for him usne socha pehle Aamna signs karde phir wo bhi karlegha, then he said to Lallit that he have signs it and tell him that He gives this papers to her)
someone knock at the door of her room
She opens her eyes get up and open the door
Lallit: main tumhe kuch denne aya houn

Aamna: ji uncle
Lallit: yeh lo divorce papers Rajeev ne signs karke behje hain
Aamna upar bijliyan ghir thi hain she start crying she was shocked,

Lallit: usne yeh bhi kaha ke inhe jaldi signs karke use bejdenna
Aamna rush in the washroom she was shattered jaisse Archie ne socha tha
Lallit papers uske table pe rakh ke chala jattta hai
Aamna just cry
Aamna(in her mind): mujpe zara bhi yakeen nahin tha, kya hamara rishta chand karzo ki buniyat hai,

She remember her wedding, then her wedding's night make her more crying

Jab use bahar kisi cheez ke ghirne ki awaaz aati hai
Wo washroom se bahar aati hai and she sees that the frame jisme unki wedding pick thi was broken
(It was this pic but the frame is broken)

DHAMAKE once again for her
Wo frame ko utathi hai n then uski nazar divorce papers par parti hai
She cry bitterly and gets in unconscious(behosh ho jati hai)
Sanjana who sees all this goes to her sreaming
Sanjana: bhhhaaabbhiii
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hope you like the part
I'm waiting for your commments

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Recap: Archie Rajeev ko manna leti hai ke who Aamna ko divorce de, Aamna ne office join kar liya aur Rajeev sara kaam use hi dene lagga, and Lallit tell about the divorce to Aamna

Part 18:

She cry bitterly and gets in unconscious(behosh ho jati hai)
Sanjana who sees all this goes to her sreaming
Sanjana: bhhhaaabbhiii
Sanjana: bhabhi, Aamna bhabhi uthiye plz...muuummmaaa
Rajeev comes hearing her sreaming
Rajeev: what happen Sanju chila kyun rahi ho
Sanjana: all this is you fault
Rajeev: but I...(when sees Aamna lying on Sanjana'lap) Aamna!!!!!!!
Jaisse ke who kuch mins ke liye saab kuch bhul gaya
He pick her in his arms and use bed pe letta tha hai
Rajeev: Sanjana paani le ao jaldi
She' leave
Rajeev kisses Aamna'hands
Rajeev: Aamna, jaan utho open yours eyes, dekho bache ke liye yeh saab acha nhahin
use bache ki fikar hone lagti hai
Rajeev: omg, bacha
He calls Charu
Charu: hello
Rajeev: hello Charu plz comes at my home fast
Charu: kyun kya hua
Rajeev: Aamna behosh ho gaye hai use hosh bhi nahin araha I'm verry scared for the baby
Charu: what the hell...yeh saab hua kaisse
Rajeev: I don't know plz comes fast
Charu: ok aap Dii ka khayal rakhiye gha main arahi houn
she cut the phone
Itne tak Sanjana paani le ke agaye thi
Rajeev: thanks
who thora sa uski face pe ghira tha hai aur baaki, very caringly use pilatta hai
Then 10 mins later the doctor...oupss I mean Charu arrived
Charu check Aamna aur Rajeev bechen ho raha tha
Rajeev: kaissi hai
Charu: few mins jiju...
Charu: saab kuch normal hai baas kissi ghaire sadme ki wajah se...I needs to know ke kya hua
Sanjana Rajeev ko ghur rahi thi the she said
Sanjana: Big b ne bhabhi ko divorce dene ka faissla kiya who bohot ro rahi thi aur phir behosh ho gaye
Charu: hhmm ab to thik hai par Sanju tum rhayal rakhna ke ainda yeh saab na ho
Rajeev ronne lagta hai his eyes are full of guilt
Aamna: ko hosh anne lagta hai
She open her eyes
Sanjana: bhabhi
Aamna uth ke beth jati hai aapna sar pakar ke
Then she remember, a tears comes out of her eyes but she manages to stop her tears
Aamna: mujhe office janna haiu bohot kaam hai
Charu: Dii aap ko aaram ki zarurat hai plz
Aamna: Charu ek bohot important project ki presentation banana hai I don't have time dekho pehle hi 10 a.m ho chuke hain
Who kuch kapre leke washroom main chali jati hai
Few mins later she comes
Aamna: sorry Charu tumhe bi disturb kiya
Charu: nahin Dii khair main hospital chalti houn
Sanjana: haan main already college late ho chuki houn
She leave too
Aamna ne abhi tak yeh nahin notices kiya hota ke Raj room mein hai
She goes to the frame pic ko nikal ke aapne purse mein dal letti hai

( kal ke part mein zarurat thi aur aaj mili khair it's this pic)

Then she is about to leave jab who Rajeev ko dekhti hai
Woh bohot ro raha tha he feels very guilty
Aamna looks into his eyes aur aapna sar no mein hilati hai
He wipes his tears
She smiles and leave
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Office mein sarra din kaam karti hai aur 6 p.m Rajeev ki cabin mein jati hai
Aamna: sorry sir, I know you hate sees my face par aap ko presentation denne aye houn
Rajeev: Aamna kisne kaha tum yahain nahin a saakti ao betho
Aamna: nahin sir it's ok
Rajeev presentation check karta hai
Rajeev: good work acha wo tumse ek baat karni thi
Aamna: boliye sir
Rajeev: Aamna mujhe maaf kardo maine tumhare saath bohot bura kiya, hum pati patni to nahin rahe par dost to reh sakte hain na
Woh aapna haat age bara tha hai
She shakes his hands
Aamna: friends
Rajeev smiles
Aamna too, at this time she want to hugs him and not let him leave but she can't
Aamna: phir main ghar chaloun
Rajeev: haan
Woh ja hi rahi thi jab Raj use rok ta hai
Rajeev: Aamna
She returns
Aamna: jii sir
Rajeev: kya kal walii khir abhi hai
Aamna laugh
Aamna: haan don't worry main aap ke liye intazam kar lounghi
Then she leave
Rajeev wahain smiles karta hai and Aamna bohot hi rhush hoti hai
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Rajeev was in his room wadrobe se kuch dhoudh raha tha maybe a shirt
Jab use Aamna ki ek pic milti hai

He smiles and hugs the photograph
The he kisses on her hand, on her cheeks, and then quickly on her lips(pagal ho gaya lol)
Rajeev: aaj tum bohot hi khubsurat lag rahi ho
Then Aamna(the real) comes in her room
Aamna: dinner ka time ho gaya hai
Rajeev realise who ek pic se baat kar raha hai
Rajeev looks at Aamna
and then said
Rajeev: tum...tum yahain kya kar rahi ho jao let give me some privacy
Woh Aamna ko bahar bejta hai and he lock the door
She don't know why but Aamna ko is baat par hassi aati hai
Aamna: new girl friend ki pics dekh rahe ho(she laugh)
Rajeev: nahin woh...Aamna tum jao main aata houn
Aamna: hhmm
Aamna aaj bohot rhush thi najane kyun usko aissa lag raha tha ke usne kisi koi hui cheez ko pa liya
dosti hi sahi un dono ke bich ek rishta to tha
Veena: are Aamna betta tum Rajeev ko lenne gaye thi na to kahain hai woh
Aamna: pata nahin shayad who aaj aapni girl'friend ke saath dinner kar raha hai
Veena: kya
Aamna laugh and sits
Aamna: kuch nahin mumma abhi aatein hounghe Rajeev
Archie ko bohot ghussa ata hai
Vassu notices that
Vassu: waisse Rajeev bhi tum jaissa hi hai Aamna, Do do, teen teen gir friends hai uski like you
Aamna ka mood kharab ho jata hai she feels bad then Rajeev comes and sits beside her because Veena was on his chair
Archie ko bohot ghussa aata hai once again
Rajeev: meri khir
Aamna: pehle meeta nahin namkin khate hain
Rajeev: aaj tum ne khir banai hai to main sirf khir hi khaoun gha le ao sara doungha
Aamna: Rajeev itna meeta thik nahin hota
Rajeev: are yaar tum abhi maan bani nahin ke dadi bann rahi ho khir lado plzz(he makes a puppy face)
Aamna smiles and then leave, who khir leke aati hai
Aamna: yeh lo khoob kao
Rajeev start to eat
Rajeev: wwoow amazing tum ek restaurant kyun nahin kholti, acha who kal mujhe...(he hesitates) bariyani(rice) bana do ghi
Aamna: sure
Rajeev: teen weeks ho gaye hai tumhare hatoun ka khanna nahin khaiya
Aamna: who...actually main sirf aapne liye choti moti si cheez banna letti houn
Rajeev: tum saab se alaag khanna kyun khati ho
Aamna looks at Chetan
Aamna: Rajeev wo...
C.G: yeh tumhare liye kal kuch bhi nahin banaiye ghi, main isse paisse nahin detta, yeh aapna allag sauda letti hai aur alag khannna khati hai
Aamna: exuse me papa...I mean uncle agar main aapne boss ko khanna bana dhoun to isse aap ko kya problem hai? main aapke bette ko nahin balke aapne dost aur boss ke liye banati houn then she leave
Archie was boiling ke Aamna ne Rajeev ko aapna dost kaha
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Aamna aapne room mein hotti hai when Veena comes
Veena: kaissi ho betta
Aamna: fine mumma aur aap
Veena: Sanjana ne bataya subbo ko tum...

Aamna: yeh Sanju bhi na aisse hi karti hai mumma dekhiye main aapke samne khari houn

Veena: mujhe tujpe yakiin hai par aapni ankhon pe nahin
Aamna: to main aapse ke rahi houn na I'm sooo haaapppyy

Veena: kyun aur waisse dinner pe Rajeev ke saath kya chal raha tha

Aamna: kuch nahin mumma(she shy)
Veena(in her mind): lagta hai Rajeev ne divorce ke barre mein aapna faisla badal diya good

Aamna: acha mumma kal mujhe hospital janna hai to Rajeev ne pucha to use kehna ke main 7 a.m niklon ghi aur 9a.m tak office ajaounghi ok
Veena: ok par office ke baad bhi ja sakti ho

Aamna: nahin mumma main who office ke baad thak...er thak nahin jatti par waisse bhi Rajeev ke liye khanna banana hai to
Veena: hhmm crazy girl
They both laugh and Veena leave
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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Hello gyus aaj part post kar diya par the holidays are now finish and I needs some time to settle in my new college so sorry but I can't cont before 3,4 weeks verry sorry for the delay but I'msure that I will continue the story hope you all understand .

Waisse I have few albums( 1 album=95 pics) from KTH feel free to use all are by me

http://rajeev-n-aamna.skyrock.com/profil/photos/albums

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

part 17
nice part...
poor Aamna...
and Raj hes gonna regret too badly...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

part 18
awesome...
seriously this Raj is too much...
changes like anything every second...
cont soon...

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

I'm verry sorry for the delay koshish karunghi ghi ke week me ek part likha

Recap: Aamna and Raj ke bich dosti honne lagti hai jo baat Archie ko bilkul bhi passand nahin aati

Kissmat Part 19:

All where not at home pata nahin maybe they go out for some holidays of 2 days .so Aamna Rajeev where alone at home
So it was 10p.m and bohot tand thi Aamna was in her room kuch buisness kaam kar rahi thi when Zor se bijli gir thi hai, she was scared usko storm se dar lagta tha. Woh rRajeev ke kamre mein jati hai she knock at the door who was already open
Rajeev: Aamna tum
Aamna: can i stay here
Rajeev: haan lekin kya baat hai
Aamna: Rajeev woh mujhe storm se dar lagta hai
FLASHBACK IN RAJ'S MIND
Rajeev aur Aamna bahar gaye the for some walk toghter
Aamna: Rajeev tumhe saardi nahi lag rahi
Rajeev:nahin kyun
Aamna: tumne aapna coat bhi mujhe de diya hai aur puri tara gille(wet) ho chuke ho
Rajeev: haan to
Aamna: to
Rajeev start to come sloser to her
Aamna: Rajjj
Rajeev: Aaamuuu
Aamna: i...
Rajeev: you
Aamna: i love...you
Rajeev: itni si baat kehne mein itniii deeer kyyuun, so i love you too jaanu
Aamna:hum shaadi kab karein ghein
Rajeev: jaab mein bura ho jaoungha
He laugh

Rajeev: karo ghi mujse shaadi

Aamna: of course
Rajeev: hhmm, but now I want to spend some good time with you, aur waisse bhi I don't needs permission or other for touch you
Aamna: acha
Rajeev: of course
Aamna: then shaadi se pehle tum mujhe haat bhi nahin lagao ghe you don't touch my hands, my hair, my shoulders...n...
Rajeev: good other parts I can touch yours lips too thanx Aamna
Aamna: shut up, let's do a deal
Rajeev: pyaar me bhi deal hotti hai
Aamna: chup, We don't touch each other before the wedding
Rajeev: ok I'm sure pehle tum haro ghi
Aamna: we will see
Rajeev(stop walking, n dreamily said): no, I will feel
Aamna: ok so mr. joker Garewal will you stop dreaming n comes
Rajeev: Aamna this is cheating you know mein tumhari baat nahin taal sakta tum mujhe khud bula rahi ho
Aamna: no, mujse 1 m dur chalo
Rajeev: 1 m dur to...samundar(sea)hai...you want to swim with me
Aamna: Rajeeevvv
Rajeev: Aaamnnaa
She returns and looks at him
Rajeev(like a small kids jo teacher se poakra gaya): ok ab main kuch nahin bolun gha
They walks some mins like this but sudennly bijli chamakti hai and Aamna dar ke hugs Raj very tightly
Rajeev: Aamna main panch tak ginnoun gha agar tum nahin hatti to game over for you
He try to separate her from himself but couldn't
Rajeev(worried): Aamu...are you ok
Aamna(scared): Rajeev plz mujhe storm se bohot dar lagta hai stay with me
Rajeev(very carringly): oh, I'm sorry don't worry I'm with you
He kisses her hair and very caringly rubs his fingers on her back
FLASHBACK END
Aamna: agar tumhe koi problem hai to...
Rajeev: nahin Aamna ao
She sits on his bed
Aamna: kya kar rahe ho
Rajeev: nothing special baas some work
Aamna: hhmm...waisse kal to papa ne manna kar diya tha but today you want to eat something special
Rajeev: no you take rest main bahar se kaloun gha
Aamna: but...if you don't mind can you stay home with me
Rajeev leave his work and sits next to her
Rajeev want to speak want to come closer to her but he can't
Rajeev: err...kaissi ho
Aamna: fine
Rajeev: hhmm
There was an awkward silence between the two
Rajeev and Aamna in the same time: to phir...
They looks at each other
Aamna: kuch kehna tha
Rajeev: nahin to aur tum
Aamna: no
sudennly light off
Aamna(hugging him): Rajeeevv
Rajeev smile usko shararat sujh rahi thi
is ek pal ke liye wo sab kuch bhul gaye the
Rajeev hug her too after a longgg time dono ko sukun mil raha hai
Rajeev: so mrs darr pok Garewal can I move to light a candle
Aamna: nooo plz mujhe chor ke maat jao
Rajeev holds her hand
Aamna let of him
He wraps his arms around her shoulders and they both walks togheter in the dark
Candle leke wapas aate hain
Rajeev: ab to darr nahin lag raha
Aamna: jab tak tum saath ho I will never get scared
Rajeev kisses her forhead
they both stay in each other'arms and then aade ghante baad bijli wapas aati hai
Aamna: Rajeev...
Rajeev to sogaya tha Aamna ki bahoun me
She looks at him, he looks sssooo cute
She smile, use bed pe letakar kithen me khanna banana ke liye jaati hai
Ek ghante baad wapas aati hai to she looks ke Raj jag kar TV dekh raha hai
Aamna: yeh lo khanna
Rajeev: hhmm ok
He holds her hand and drags her to the balcony where He was dressed a beautiful candle table

Aamna: Rajeev yeh saab...
Rajeev: sshh
He help her to sits and sits too
Rajeev: khanna tum ne banaya aur khanne ki jagah maine hhm
Aamna smile
He don't know why but aaj Rajeev ko Aamna par bohot pyaar a raha tha
He serves her
and then start to eat
Aamna just looks at him eating with a smile on her face
Rajeev: hey!! tum nahin khao ghi
Aamna: nahin plz Raj bilkul bhook nahin hai
Rajeev: what bhook nahin hai?
He take a bit food on his spoon and make her eat
She eat a little but sudennly get up and rush in the washroom
Rajeev bohot hi worried tha uske piche jaata hai He comes and holds her by her shoulders to support her
Rajeev: I'm sorry I forgot you are pregnant
Aamna: it's ok I'm fine baas vomit
Rajeev: I'm sorry
Aamna: nahin Raj don't feels guilty
She walks a little but feels very weak
Rajeev comes and holds her
Rajeev: Aamna
He take her to the bed and make her lies
Rajeev: take some rest
Aamna: hhmm
It was again stormy and Aamna was scared Rajeev lies next to her and she falls asleep in his protective arms
Rajeev looks at her innocent face and later he fall asleep too
(They just sleep in each others arms very close nothing happen)
Jab gar walle wapas aatein hain and They all sees Aamna in Raj's bed sleep with him they imagines others things
C.G: Rajeeevvv
Rajeev wake up
He looks arounds him and finds Aamna he smile(for him he just take care of his mom' daughter)
Rajeev: papa aap loog ghalat samajh rahe hain baas Aamna ki tabiyat kharab ho gaiye to maine use yahain hi leta diya
Vassu: dekha chetan yeh manouz larki ne is bechare ko phirse aapne jaal me phassa liya
Rajeev looks at Aamna who was sleeping peacefully
Rajeev: plz hum yeh saab baad me discusses karein ghe, Aamna ki tabiyat kharab hai she needs rest
Rishi: why big b? why you care of the person who spoil your life
Rajeev: Rishi plz main yeh saab bhul ke aapni zindaghi ek nahe sire se churu kar chukka houn
Swayam: pata nahin kya kya gaul khilae in dono ne ek raat akele kya chor diya...huh!!!
Itne chor se Aamna ki ankh bhi khul jaati hai
She holds her head remember then looks around her where all Rajeev ki behesatikar rahe the
Swayam looks at her mischievously
Who bohot darr jaati hai

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Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago