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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: spvd

there are so many links...u want the FFs' links or the Fan club links?

sorry i'm new in IF but it is an actual fan club?

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Imane

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Next part:

Ab is tarain hi sab Aamna ke saat bura soluk kartein the but aab wo loog use ghar se nikalne ke liye plan bhi banathe the:

Vassu: Hey gyus, we have a plan

Lallit:Archie tum suicide karne ka natak karo ghi
Archie: Kya?
Chetan: Maine ek doctor ko paise ke lalach se engage kara hai wo sab ko yeh hi kahe gha ke tum ne suicide karne ki koshish ki
Archie: good

Lallit: haan hum aise hi kartein hai

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Jab Rajeev aur Aamna market se wapas atein hai:
Sanjana: bhabi, Mehek aur Varun Roshan(their son) ke saat lunch pe bahar ja rahein hain , to Aman aur maine socha ke agar aap loog aur hum bi chalein to maza aega
Rajeev: good idea

Aamna: haan pls Rajeev mera bohot dil kar raha hai
Rajeev: mein abhi fresh ho ke aya ok
During this time:
Vassu(natak): hello...ya this me...KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lallit: kya hua
Vassu: hospital se phone tha unhone kaha ke Archie ne suicide karne ki koshish ki hai
Chetan: suicide?? lekin kyun
Vassu:(Aamna ki taraf jata hue) YEH SAB TUMHARA KUSUR HAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Veena: meri betti ke saat thik se baat karo uska kusur nahin hai agar tumhari pagal hai!

Chetan: Tum hamesha mere rhelaf kyun baat karti ho, aur Archie ne aisa kadam kabi nahin uthaya hota agar tum ne mere bette ki shaadi iske saat naa ki hoti

Rajeev: enough!!!!! ek dusre ko ghali dene ki bajay hospital chaliye

Veena, Rajeev aur Aamna ke bena saab nikalte hai

Rajeev: Aamna pls don't cry

Aamna: lekin maine kya kiya agar Archie ne suicide karne ki koshish ki to is me mera kya kusur

Veena: chalo betta choro yeh saab

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Doctor: patient kisi Rajeev se milna mangthi hain

Rajeev: it's me
Doctor: follow me...
Archie: Rajeev I love you

Rajeev: Archie you are just my cousin ok
Archie: lekin mein tumse pyaar karti houn
Rajeev: lekin mein Aamna se pyaar karta houn tum muje bhul jao
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Mehek: Di, mujhe aap se baat karni hain

Aamna: haan bolo

Mehek: aap Rajeev baiya ko chor dein

Aamna: Kya?

Mehek: maine unki baatein sun li Di wo aise aur bhi plan banaye ghe aap ka jina haram kar de ghe pls is se acha hoga ke jab tak time hai aap apni zingagi kahin aur basa lein

Aamna: lekin mein Rajeev se pyaar karti houn aur agar meri jaan ko khatra hua tab bhi mein Rajeev ka saat nahin choruon ghi

Mehek: sorry Di mujhe aap se yeh baat nahin karni chahie thi mein aap ke saat houn

Aamna: it's ok

Mehek: Di aap thak gaye hon ghi chaliye ghar chalein

Aamna: ok

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Jab dono ghar ati hein to wahain Akshat aur Charu hotein hai

Aamna: Akshat tum loog yahain kya kar rahe ho

Charu: kyun kya hum apni Di ke ghar nahin a sakte

Aamna: nahin aisi baat nahin hai per achanak

Akshat: mujhe bohot piace(thirst) lagi hai

Aamna: oh! sorry mein abhi softdrink lati houn

Charu: Akshat tum bhi na

Akshat: Mehek, Aamna ka chehra utra hua kyun hai

Mehek: kuch nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai

Charu: nahin Mehek mujhe bhi aisa laga

Aamna: kya laga?

Akshat: kuch nahin wo Charu ko tand lag rahi thi

Aamna: mein abhi ek chadar leke ati houn

Charu: very good Akshat wo pehle hi thaki hui hai aur tum use yahain wahain bagga rahe ho

Mehek: baas ab tum loog per se na churu ho jana

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Rajeev ghar ata hai

Rajeev: Aamna

Aamna: haan

Rajeev hugs her tightly

Rajeev: I love you jaan

Aamna: me too

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next part soon

Edited by Imanezara - 12 years ago

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Imane

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Tomorrow Akshat bed se niche gir jata hai

Charu: Akshat!!! tum hamesha bacha hi raho ghe
Akshat: ouch!!!! meri ghalti na&hin hai main to so raha tha
Rajeev: haan ab tum bed se bhi ghir gae agar maine tumhe sofe pe solaya hota to kya hota
Charu: sochne wali baat hai

Akshat: tum loog hamesha mera mazak kyun horate ho
Charu: Di kahain hai
Rajeev: cchuut!!! wo so rahi hai (fondle her cheeks) bechari thak gaye hai kal jo hua...
Akshat: choro yeh saab mujhe bohot bhuk lagi hai
Charu: Di ko jagana to nahi hai na main breakfast banati houn
Akshat: TUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Poor Raj wo to Aamna jaise perfect cook ka khanna kata hai jab ko tumhara khanna kahe gha to lagta hai bimar ho jaye gha
Charu: Shut up ok!!!! aur agar tumhe nahin khanna to maat kaho
Rajeev: baas karo!! Aamu ko jaga do ghe, tum loog jao fresh ho jao mumma breakfast banati hai
Wo saab Raj bhi fresh hone jate hai
Vassu unke kamre mein aati hai
Wo Aamna ke kann me yell karti hai
Vassu: AAMNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aamna just jump outside her sleep
Vassu: Breakfast banao waise bhi sara din apne pati ke saat mauj karti ho
Aamna:(in very weak voice) jii banati houn
Wo uth ke apne baal band thi hai when Vassu shout
Vassu: jaldi karo!!!!!!!!!!!!! mujhe bohot bukh lagi hai
Aamna: haan

she go downstairs
Rajeev ne sab kuch sunn liya and he gets angry
Rajeev: Kya chahthi hai aap, uske upa aise hukam chalarahi thi jaise ke wo aapki naukar hai, mere zinda hote hue meri biwi ke saat aap itna bura behave nahin karsakti samji aap!!
Chetan: Apni chachi ke saat izaat se baat karo Rajeev
Rajeev: inhone pehle Aamna ke saat izaat se baat nahin ki
Chetan: Izaat ?? But she don't deserve it
Rajeev: aap loggonn se to baat karna hi fusul hai
Aamna kitchen mei aati hai
Veena: Aamna!! tum uth bhi gaye you know what I mean tumhe Rajeev ke saat zaida wakt guzarna chahiye
Aamna: eeerrr...mumma wo
Vassu: wo Akshat aur Charu ne jaga diya
Veena: koi baat nahin idaar ao
Veena hugs her
Veena: chalo tum jake betho mein breakfast banati houn
Aamna: nahin wo mein aapki madat kartin houn
Veena smiles at her and kisses her forehead

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Akshat, Charu, Mehek, Varun, Sanjana, Aman, Raj and Aamna go out for lunch

Rajeev: you know Akshat abhi bhi apne bed se gherta hai

Sanjana: OMG!!! like Aman

Aman: shut up!!

Mehek: jiju aap bhi na hamesha jagre hi banatein hain

Aamna: tum nahin janti aap logon ko busy karke yeh mere saat flirt karna chahthe the kyun Raj

Rajeev: nahin Aamna to...aise hi...aisi koi baat nahin hai

Varun: kyun aap bhi bataye ke aap yeh hi chahthi hai ke big b aapke saat flirt kare

Charu: right Di

Aamna: nahin...main...to...wo..

They all laugh except Rajeev Aamna, they feel shy☺️

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Jab wo wapas aatein hain
Swayam: Rajeev a gaya
Rajeev:Swayam!?
Swayam: mujse kaha gaya hai ke tum meri behen ke saat shaadi nahin karna chahthe aur yeh is(touch Aamna's lips)beauty ki wajah se
Rajeev: use haath maat lagana

Swayam: don't get angry bro
Rajeev: i'm not your brother aur agar tumne Aamna ko hath bhi lagaya to main tumlhe
Swayam: kya kar loghe (laugh) tum kuch nahin kar sakte
Rajeev: (uske ghale se pakar ke) I prevent you for my wife I can do everything, everything ok!!!!!!
Vassu: leave my son!!!

Chetan(usko tapad marta hai aur Rajeev niche ghir jata hai, uska sir sirion pe lagta hai aur khoun behne lagta hai) besharam!!!!!!
Aamna: RAJEEV!!!!
Veena: Chetan Garewal will you stop it!!!!

All are shocked

Chetan: yeh saab tumhare batamiz bete ka kusur hai

Veena: mera beta bohot acha hai wo Swayam sharam nahin aati use apni bhabhi ke saat chi!!!

Chetan goes to his room

Aamna run towards Rajeev

Aamna: Rajeev...tumhe aissa nahin karna chahiye tha...agar tumhe kuch ho jata to

Rajeev: Aamu i'm ok pls don't cry jaan

Sanjana: bhabhi big b is fine aap pls maat rohiye

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Aamna Rajeev ko band laga rahi thi
Rajeev: Aamna, ake so jao
Aamna: nahin abhi rhoun beh raha hai
Rajeev: yeh kuch nahin hai,...Aamna
Aamna: hhhmm
Rajeev: I love you

Aamna look at him

Rajeev: are abhi rhoun beh raha hai

Aamna: it's not funny

Rajeev: to maine kab kaha that it's funny

Aamna: I love you too

Rajeev kisses her cheeks n then her lips they have a long passionate kiss

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ok gyus hope you like the part next part tomorrow

Edited by Imanezara - 12 years ago

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Imane

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Posted: 12 years ago

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2 MONTHS LATER
In do mahinon meh sab kuch waisa hi tha koi special baat nahin, lekin aab phir se problems hone lage

Swayam: listen I have the best plan dekhna is ke baad wo larki Rajeev ki taraf dekhe ghi bhi nahin, maine R.G(Rajeev Garewal)ke naam pe ek new compagnie kholi hai aur unse 500 000laks ki rakam advance me liye hai, aur agar aaj paise na lautaye to... ,kisi ko nahin malum ke main compagnie kholi hai , saab ko aisa lage gha ke Rajeev ki compagnie haikyunki papers pe maine uski signs karvaein hai aur phir use jail ho jaye ghi.
Vassu: aur yeh sab karne se tum kya hasell karlo ghe
Swayam: Mom, paise maine Aamna ke account me transfer kyein hai, Rajeev ko uske upar chak hone lage gha, phir main paise Akshat ke naam pe ek account me transfer kar doun gha, Rajeev ko aisa laghe gha ke Akshat aur Aamna ke bich me kuch chalraha hai
Lalit: haan lekin wo to Rajeev se pyaar karti hai aur use kahe ghi ke usne kuch nahin kiya
Swayam: is ke liye belive me agar wo khud Rajeev se nahin kehthi ke yeh saab usne kiya hai aur wo Akshat se pyaar karti hai to main bhi Lallit Garewal ka betta nahin
Chetan: ok but Rajeev
Swayam: Rajeev sirf uski rhushi chahtha hai agar wo kahe ghi ke uski khushi Akshat ke saat hai to wo use chor dega
Vassu: aur yeh tum kaise use kaho ghe
Swayam: Mom just trust me wakt ane par saab samaj ajaye gha par ab main apse aur kuch nahin keh sakta

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Mehek: auntie! aap apne khanne me dalti kya hai it's to good
Sanjana: nahin aaj maine bhabhi ki madat kari hai khanna banana mein

Rishi: hein yeh kon si kahani sunna rahi ho
Varun: ya very good joke bhabhi ne khanna sara akela bannaya hai ke
Rajeev: I confirm
Aamna: eh! stop it you guys Sanjana ne meri bohot madat kari hai
Varun laugh

Aman: aur tum has te raho tumhe to coffe bhi nahin banana aati
Veena: coffe kya isse to stove bhi on karna nahin aata
All laugh

Swayam(in his mind): hanslo yeh akhri din hai jab aap saab is tarain has sakte ho

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Afternoon

police comes
Police officer: Mr Rajeev Garewalyou are under arrest

Rajeev: what?

Aamna: for what

Police officer: toke bazi ke case me, R.G entreprise ne mr lalvani ki compagnie se paise udar liye the lekin date guzar chuki aur aap ne paise nahin lautaye is liye unhone aap ke khelaf case kiya hai

Aamna: kisne aap se kaha ke R.G Raj ki compagnie
Police officer: sare papers par unke signs hai

PoliceRajeev ko lejati hai

Veena: nahin Rajeev mera bacha

Sanjana: mumma don't worry, big b wapis ahein ghe...I hope

Aman: bhabhi
Varun: Aamna bhabhi kahain hai

Rishi: wo big b ke piche gaye hai

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Aamna: Rajeev!!!!
Rajeev: Aamna

She hugs him tightly
Rajeev: Aamu chuuut don't cry be strong

Aamna: nahin main tumhare begher nahin ji sakti

Rajeev: apna rhyaal rakna, khanna thik se khanna aur rona nahin pls
Aamna: tum wapas aao ghe na
Rajeev: haan I promise you mere intazar karna
Aamna: agar karna pare to sari zindagi tumhara intazar karoun ghi

They both hug and Police Rajeev ko le jati hai leave Aamna crying😭😭😭

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Aamna

aapne kamre me rohi ja rahi thi when Archie comes

Archie: yeh saab tumhara kusur hai mere Rajeev ko jail me dal diya
Aamna: main
Archie: zaida bholi maat bano paise tumhare account mein hain
Aamna: kya?
Archie: shut up!!!!
Mehek: Archie!!!! enough wo pehle hi bohot pareshan hai, jao yahain se

Archie: huh!!!!!!!

She goes

Mehek: Di pls maat rohiye

Aamna: mera Rajeev(crys)

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Swayam: pehli mission accomplished

Vassu: unke moun dekhe the
They laugh like evils
Archie: I love you bro
Swayam: me too Archie
Lalit: wouaouh itna maza kabse nahin aya tha
C.G: champagne ki bottle kahain hai(kitna bura hai apne bette ke jail janne pe champagne pita hai)

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I know ke yeh part ke kuch are same at kth but don't worry kahani bilkul different hai next part soon

Edited by Imanezara - 12 years ago

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Imane

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Rajeev aur Aamna samajthe the ke sab thik ho jaye gha lekin wo Swayam ka plan nahin janthe the unhone kabi bhi yeh nahin socha tha ke wo is tara alag ho jaye ghein.

Veena: Betta, maat ro tum janti ho ke Rajeev ko bura laghe gha agar tum is tara roti rahi
Aamna wipes har tears
Aamna: Aap sahi kehti hai chalein lunch banatein hai
Veena: ok, par is baar tum bhi khao ghi jab ka Rajeev arrest hua hai tum ne to khanna pina hi chor diya

Aamna: kya aap ko lagta hai ke wahain Rajeev ko khanna milta hai

Veena: tumhare haathon ka khanna nahin milta hoga par wo kaam chalalega don't worry

Aamna: ok

They go downstairs
Chetan: I don't believe this
Vassu: is liye bachon ko apni marzi nahin karni deni chaiye
Archie: poor Rajeev
Aamna: kya hua Rajeev ko

Lalit: how dare you demand this
Chetan: tumhari wajah se mera bacha jail meh hai
Veena: kya? Tum loog bakwas band karo ghar me pehle bohot tension hai
Vassu: our lawyer discovered that most of your salary
Archie(cut in between): given by Rajeev
Vassu: there are 500 000laks

Chetan: you will paye for this

Aamna: lekin maine kuch nahin kiya aur main apne Rajeev ko jail kyun bejhoun ghi I love him so much

Lalit: natak karti hai

Chetan: enough jao apne kamre me

Aamna: lekin
Vassu: sunahi nahin deta daffa ho jao!!!!

She goes to her room

Veena: are betta khanna to khalo
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Lawyer: Mr Garewal
Rajeev: yes
Lawyer: teen din mein aap chorwae jao ghe, aap ke bhai Rishi ne amound paye kar diya
Rajeev: really thanx you very much
At this time Rajeev can imagine his future with Aamna and not in jail?
Lawyer: lekin maine kuch ajeeb found kara hai
Rajeev: kya matlab
Lawyer: paise apki wife ke account se nikle haimain kisi ko kuch nahin kahoun gha kyun ke wo aap ki biwi hai lekin
Rajeev: no!! zarur kuch garbar hai Aamna aise kabhi nahin kare ghi
Lawyer: as you wish
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Vassu: plan ka agla hissa kya hai
Swayam: I will kidnap Aamna
Chetan: what
Swayam: I will just keep her in my possession, wo Rajeev ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai to ab main use KUCH BHI karne ke liye mjbour kar doun gha
Chetan: mhhh, I see you are too good
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Veena: Aamna
Aamna: hann
Veena: cheeni(sugar) khatam ho gaye hai aur mujhe aaj sham ki khir ke liye zarourat hai tum pls ek paquet to leh aao
Aamna: jii mumma
Aamna leave
Lallit(whisper to Swayam): it's time

Swayam follow her
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Aamna walk on the road
When achanak Swayam aur 4 aadmi surround her un saab ne mask pehna hua tha Swayam

Swayam Aamna ko bazoun se pakar letta hai
Aamna: leave mme
Aamna: kaun hai aap?! I said leave me!! choro mujhe
Swayam get angry and stike her
Aamna: aahh!!!?
she fall on the ground
Swayam: le chalo isse
Wo aadmi Aamna ko ek gari mein dal kar le jatein hai
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It's now 11 p.m aur Aamna abhi taak wapas nahi aye, chak nahin paida karne ke liye Swayam ghar a gaya, Aamna ko apne aadmi ke saat chor kar
Saab so rahe the ek Veena hi jaghi hui thi Aamna ka intazar ka rahi thi

She feels guilty agar use kuch ho gaya to wo Rajeev ko kya jawab de ghi
Raat issi parshani mein guzar jati hai
Chetan: Aamna abhi tak wapas nahin aye
Vassu: I wonder what she still traffic now
Swayam: papa paise Aamna ke account se Akshat ke account me transfer ho gaye
Lallit: Akshat kaun hai
Chetan: uska dost
Vassu: she sent her husband to prison for giving money to her friend
Archie: she spent the night out with his so-called friend

Sanjana:Shut up bhabhi is not like this zarur koi problem ho ghi

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Swayam Aamna ko ek kursi se band kar rakha hua tha, usko khanna bhi nahin detta tha
Swayam(with his mask): so you have a good night miss

Aamna: not miss, Mrs Rajeev Garewal and when he knows what you are doing he wills kill you

Swayam hasne lagta hai zor zor se
Swayam: Rajeev will kills me, we will discuss this topic tomorrow
Aamna began to have as a voil before the eyes and feels very dizzy
Aamna: paani...give me some water

Swayam: you do pitier,bring her half a glass of water
Aamna drink the water she could not speak but could make it pronounced the name of Rajeev

Rajeev sleep but at this time he awoke with a start
Rajeev: AAMNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

he felt that something had happened to her

Edited by Imanezara - 12 years ago

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Imane

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I will write this FF

to the bitter end

But I need your support so pls guys do comments

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Imane

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Swayam: aj mere plan ka next situation hey
Lallit: matlab
Swayam: matlab aj jab Aamna ghar ai ghi to vo badli hui si laggi gi
Vassu: Swayam i love you beta
Swayam: me too mum, ab mein chalta houn
Archie:bye!
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Swayam vahain pounchta hai jahain us ne Aamna ko raka tha
Swayam: tum loghon ne is ko koi kanna to nahi dia na?
1 man: Nahi sir, hum ne in ko kuch nahi dia
Swayam: good
Wo Aamna ke pas ata hai
Swayam: good morning sweety!
Aamna: choro muje, kaun ho tum
Swayam: aj tumhe sab kuch pata lag jai gha, kal keh rahi thi na ke jab Rajeev ko pata chale gha vo muje mardale gha , ab dekhtey hai
Swayam Aamna ko kursi se utar kar arm se pakar leta hai
Aamna: choro muje
Swayam: chalo mere saat thora sa bhaar ho atein hain yahain kitni gharmi(hot) hai
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Rajeev: please sir kya mein apne gharwalon se baat kar sakta houn
Police officier: ok lekin sirf 5minutes
Rajeev: ok thanx
Rajeev ghar phone karta hai
Veena utati hai
Veena: hello
Rajeev: allo mumma Aamna kahain hai pls mujhe us se baat karwaho wo thik to hai na
Veena: pata nahin
Rajeev: kya, mumma Aamna ko phone do
Veena: Rajeev mein bahot pareshan hun Aamna do din pehle chini(sugar) lene nikli thi aur tab se wo wapis nahi ai, na raat(night) ko aur na kisi aur time
Rajeev: KYA!!!! mumma aap ne use doundha nahi i'm sure wo kisi musibat me ho ghi
Veena: pls aisi bathein maat karo inchalla wo thik hoghi
Rajeev: nahin mumma pls aap police se baat karein kuch bi karein meri Aami ko mere paas lautha dein
Wo rone lagta hai
Veena: Rajeev beta pls tum ro maat
Police officier: sunieh! time khatam hogai ah hai so pls
Rajeev: ok, bye mumma
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Swayam: so mrs Aamna Garewal
Aamna: kyun lahi ho mujhe yahain
Swayam: relax idhar jahain koi bhi nahi guzartha mein tumhe ye dekhane ai a houn ke mein kaun houn aur mein kya karsakata houn
Swayam apna mask utartha hai

Aamna (shocked) : TUM!!!??
Swayam: hain mein aur aab dekhti rehna
Wo ik pistol nikalata hain aur apnein sarhei aadmis(mans) jo vahain karhei the unko mardhalta hei

Aamna: NAHIN!!!!! pls tum aisha maat karna mein(wo roni lagti hei) mein, tum mujhe mardo pls mehre Rajeev ko kuch maat karna, (wo uske pahaun parti hai) pls jo tum chaho ghe mein wo karaun ghi pls mere Rajeev ko...
Swayam: good mein ye hi sunna chatha tha "jo tum chaho ghe mein wo karaun ghi" karo ghi?
Aamna: haa
Swayam: to phir dyhaan se meri baat suno, jab Rajeev jail se wapis ai gha to thum us se kaho ghi ke tumhe Akshat se pyaar hogai hai aur tum Rajeev ko chordo ghi hamesha ke liye tum usse ye bhi kehna ke vo Archie se shadii karle
Aamna: likin mein...

Swayam: nahi to mein tumhare Rajeev ko
Aamna: nahin!!!!! ok mein ye saab Karoun ghi
Swayam: police ko kuch bhi bataya ya Rajeev ko to mein usse nahin choruon ga, samjii!!
Aamna: haan?

Swayam: good aab mein ghar chalta houn aur tum chao to inhe danfan(bury) karlena aur chaho to paidal ghar ajana
Aamna wahan sochthi rehthi hei ki wo apne Rajeev ke baigher kaise rahe ghi aur rohthi rehthi

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Swayam ghar ata hai
Archie: kya hua mann gai?
Swayam: tumhe kya lagta hai
dono milkar haste hein
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Aamna booki aur piassi ghar pounchti hai
Veena: Aamna!! beta tum a gai
Wo jakar uske gale lag jati
Veena: ao meri bachi betto
Aamna: mein thik houn mumma
Veena: kahain thik ho chehra dekha hai apna, mein khanna lati houn
Veena khana lene jati hai aur Aamna ki ankhon me ansoo ajatei hai wo jaldi se unhe saaf karleti hai
Sanjana: bhabhi aap, kaisi hein aap
Aman: aap janti hai jab big b ka phone ai a tha aur unhne pata chala to wo kitne ro rehe the
Varun: aap log college se a gai ho to apne kamre me jao bhabhi ko teng karne ki koi zarurat nai
Mehek: han pehle hi bahot pareshan lag rahin hain
Aamna: nahi aissi koi baat nahi hai aur kyun dant rahi ho in becharon ko
Sanjana: dekha, my bhabhi is the best bhabhi of the world?

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Imane

@The_Imane

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

2 weeks later

Aj wo din tha jab Rajeev ghar lauthne wala hai, pichle do hafthon se Aamna ne thik se kisi se baat nahin ki thi wo sara din chup chap bethi rehthi thi, Veena samjthi thi ke ye Rajeev se juda hone ka assar(effect) hai.
Jab Rajeev ghar ponchta hai sab auska intezar kar rahe hautein hai
Rajeev: mumma
Veena: Rajeev!!!(she hugs him tightly)
Sanjana: Big b!!!!!!
Aman, Sanjana, Varun, Mehek sab jake use milthe hain, baas ek Aamna hi hai jo use dur se dekhthi rehthi hai
Rajeev un saab ko chaur kar Aamna ke paas aata hai aur usse apni bahon me le leta hai
Rajeev: Kaissi ho tum
Aamna: thik hoon
Vassu: kaisi ho sakti hai maujh kari hai isne tumhare piche se
Veena: kya bakwass kar rahi ho
C.G: kyun Veena tum ne mere bette ko bathaya nahin ki uski biwi uske piche kya karti hai
Rajeev Aamna ko dekhtha hai jiski nazrein juki hui thi
Lallit: kahain thi tum un do raathoon ke dauran
Veena: chup karo jab Aamna lauthi thi wo bohot audaas thi zarur kuch garbar hui thi
Vassu: audas tho haugi akhar apne pati ko dokha jo dyia hai isne
Rajeev: baas!!!!!! bohot hogaya agar ye kuch kehti nahin hai to iska matlab ye nahin ke aap log iska faidha authao
C.G: nahin Rajeev is baat ko khatam hone do, TUM bolo kahain thi tum
Aamna Swayam do dekhti hai jo Rajeev ko gur raha tha, wo darr jati hai
Aamna: Akshat ke ghar
Lallit: aur ye Akshat kaun hai
Rajeev: mera dost, milgai tasali!!!
Wo Aamna ko leke apne kamre me chala jata hai
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Unke kamre me:
Aamna soffe pe beth jati hai
Rajeev fresh hoke ata hai
Jab wo washroom se nikalta hai to he sees ke Aamna pareshan hoke bethi hai
Rajeev uske paas ata hai
Rajeev: hey!! Aamu why are you looking upset
Aamna: kuch nahin, tum taq gai hoge jau jakar so jao
Rajeev: aise kaise so jaoun, aise to meri raat adoori reh jaigi na ;)
Aamna wahain se uth jati hai
Aamna: Raj, pls aj mera mood nahin hai
Rajeev: accha koi baat nahin par mere paas ake beth to jau
Aamna uske paas bethti hai
Rajeev: in teen haftoon me maine tumhe bohot miss kia, aur tum?
Aamna: shayad(maybe)
Rajeev Aamna ke behaviour se hurt ho jata hai
Rajeev: kanna kao ghi
Aamna: maine kaliha
Rajeev: kya lekin Aamna aj to tumhe pata tha ke mein ghar a raha hoon aur tumne mere begher kanna kalia
Aamna: haan to?
Rajeev ke ankhoon me ansoon ajate hain
Wo bed pe chala jata hai
Rajeev: good night
Aamna: good night

Wo apni bed ki taraf let ke roti rehti hai ?
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Subah ho jati hai Aamna uth ke Rajeev ke maate(forehead)pe kiss karke kicthen me nachta banane ke liye
jati hai
Swayam: mera kaam kiya
Aamna darr jati hai, jab wo piche murti hai to she sees Swayam
Aamna: nahin par mein jald se Rajeev ko keh donghi
Swayam: ok
Swayam kicthen se baar ata hai
Archie: kya kehti hai
Swayam: lagta hai isi abhi tak ye nahin pata chala ke Swayam Raheja hai kya cheez
Archie: to tum kya karo ghe
Swayam: mein? maine kya karna hai mere kuch aadmi bata de ghein aj ise ke main hoon kaun
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Sab log nachta kar rahe hothe hai
Sanjana: today i'm so happy, big b thik thak hamare paas hein, aaj bhabhi ka khanna bi pherse perfect hai
Aman: lagta hai big b ne raat ko kuch assar kiya hoga
Veena: chup! besharam
Sanjana: haan aur college me bhi acha chalraha hai
Varun: mein bhi bohot kush hoon
Mehek: mumma kiyun na sunday ko hum ek party rakhen
Rishi: good idea i love parties aur iss party ke spcials guess hoongue big b and Aamna bhabhi

Rajeev: mumma wo haemin josh project wala contract mil gaya
Veena: aaj mein bohot kush hoon aab to party ho kar rahe ghi
Sanjana: Haan par mumma party sunday ko kyun aaj hi karletey hai na
Rishi: aaj big b ko office janna hai, aur big b ke bagher party kis baat ki haina bhabhi?
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Raat ko Rajeev ghar ata uski kamar(back) buri tarain se zarhmi(hurt) hoti hai rhun beh raha hota hai kamre me Aamna aati hai n she is shocked to sees Rajeev

Aamna: Rajeev ye sab kya hai
Rajeev: kuch nahin...er...wo tum...kaisi ho tum
Aamna: shut up Raj!! ye dekho kitna khoon beh raha hai betho mein abhi ai
Rajeev: nahin Aamna it's ok
Per wo ja chuki thi
Aamna wapas aati hai aur Rajeev ko band lagati hai

Aamna: ye sab hua kaise?
Rajeev: kuch gundee the kaithe the ke aab yeh tum jo seh rahe ho wo us insaan ki waja se jise tum sabse zaida pyaar karte ho, aur marra unhoon ne mujhe

Aamna ko usi waqt samajh ajati hai
Aamna(in her mind): yeh saab mera kusur hai, Swayam ki harkat hai yeh, mein tumhe chorna nahin chahthi thi, per aab mein majbur ho gai hoon
Wo rohne lagti hai

Rajeev: Aamu pls don't cry, dekho TUM ne band lagai to ab bilkul bi dard nahin ho raha
Aamna rohte rohte Rajeev ke kande per apna saar raq leti hai

Rajeev piche murke uske ansoon pounchta hai

Aamna uske gale lagjati Rajeev bhi usse hug karleta hai

(Aamna ko pata tha ke ye akhri bhar Rajeev ke saath karne ka moka milraha hai)n light off...

Edited by Imanezara - 12 years ago

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Imane

@The_Imane

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Swayam: maine tum se kaha tha na ke tum usse sab bata do aur tum ne nahin manna ab dekhliya natija
Aamna: Swayam, pls mein aaj batadounghi tum pls usse kuch maat karna
Swayam: abhi issi waqt sab ke samne
Aamna: kya lekin
Swayam: aj mein sochne laga houn ke tum apne pati ki maut hi chahti ho
Aamna: nahin pls
Swayam: to phir jao!!!!
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Aamna: Rajeev mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai
Rajeev: bolo
Aamna: Rajeev, ab mein tumhare saat nahin reh sakti
Rajeev(shocked): KYA?
Aamna: I will leave you
Rajeev: shut up! agar yeh mazak hai to it's not funny ok, mumma apne sunna yeh kya keh rahi hai
Veena(shocked too): Aamna beta yeh tum
Aamna: mumma pls
Rajeev: Aamna tumhe kis cheez ki kami hai batao mein tumhe abhi de doungha
Aamna: Rajeev pls, mein tumhe aur nahin bata sakti
Rajeev: nahin Aamna, muhje ek waja chahie
Aamna: mein...mein...Akshat...se...se...pyaar kartin houn
Rajeev: kya? To phir tumne mujse shaadi kyun ki?
Aamna: mujhe shaadi ke baad usse pyaar hua
Rajeev: aur mein mera kya hoga, mere pyaar me kya kami thi
Aamna: Rajeev baas!!! mein aur Akshat ek dusre se pyaar kartein hein aur mein tumhe chor rahi houn baat yahin rhatam, aur haan mein chahti houn ke tum Archie se shaadi kar lo

She run to her room before she break in front of all
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Rishi: Kahain jah rahi ho tum, mere big b ko thoka dekhe tumne samjatha ke mein tumhe chain se jine doun gha

Aamna: Rishi pls hato mere raste se

Rishi: nahin pehle to tum mere big b ki zindagi mein pyaar lahi aur aab ausse tanah chor ke ja rahi ho
Aamna: maine jo tumhare big b se kehnna tha wo keh diya aab hato

Rishi: ek baat kan kolke sunlo jo tum kar rahi ho mein vo hone nahin dounga

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Aamna Akshat ko sab kuch bata deti hai

Akshat: lekin Aamna yeh kya fusul batein hai

Aamna: nahin Akshat tum ausse nahin jante wo mere Raj ko marde gha

Akshat: ok Aamna mein tumhari madat karun gha, lekin tum mujhe batao mujhe karna kya hai

Aamna: tum saab se kaho ghe ke hum dono ko pyaar ho gaya aur mere saat raho ghe aur jaise hi Rajeev mujhe chorde mein apne ghar chali jaoun ghi and tum bhi pirse Charu ke paas chale janna

Akshat: ok mein Charu ko manane ki koshish karun gha

Aamna: thanx Akshat

Akshat goes leaving Aamna crying

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Sanjana:mumma, bhabhi acha nahin kar rahin hain
Veena: beta tum apna kam karo is bare me maat socho
Aman: lekin mumma, aisa kya hogaya, bhabhi big b se kitna pyaar karti thi aur aab woh kehti hai ke unonhe kabi big b se pyaar hi nahin kya
Varun:tum log yeh saab choro
Mehek: haan yeh baroun ki batein hain
Sanjana: kal shaam ki party ka kya hoga
Veena: party to ho ke rahe ghi,tum log kyun pareshan hote ho aissi larahi hoti rehti hain new couples mein
Aman: new couples? mumma unki shaadi ko 4 mahine(months) ho gaye hain
Varun: hann mumma ab mujhe nahin nahin lagta ke unmhe pisrse pyaar ayga yah nahin
Mehek: hope ke saab kuch thik ho jaye
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I know it's a very short part but I don't have time today

Edited by Imanezara - 12 years ago