FF: Unspoken PART 26 PG 141 *new thread!!!

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

edited my comment on page 10:)

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rana5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

You are developing the story well, the interest is there and your descriptions of the characters are good. The interactions between Arnav and khushi were wonderful. I can't wait for whatever you have in store for us! The transformation of an angry, terror inducing Arnav to a softer one is a journey I look forward to. So many questions that are unanswered so far but the main one is-what is Khushi hiding and what is she running away from???

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adhu11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Why arnav is so rude to khushi?

Feeling bad for khushi

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Curious to know about kushi
awesome update <3

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

res
She woke up is the forst thing i remember 😊
wat the 😲 y the hell was c running 😡 thnkgd adi saw her he wil nt eat her up man
well well c was running away bt y and did really i mean dont were c was
gosh he is behaving lyk a school teacher towards her do dis do dat hahaha
Lolll khushi got shock hearing father frm adi mouths
awesum update

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Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

AWESOME CONCEPT ... I LOVE IT!!!!!

LOVE THE BANNER TOO ... ITS TOOO GOOD!!!!

(hehehe back with our minis ... Still havent watched the movie 😭)

Behene De Is One of My Favorite Songs ... I am glad you wrote a SS ooops now an FF 😃 inspired by it!

Its good that you turned it into an FF ... Or I would have smacked you ... Better not end this any time soon Farah like the other one ... Or else I would really smack you *WARNING*

Anyways Coming back to the story ...

Adi is so cute ... awww I love him! Love how he calls Arnav "Abba"!

And wow ... Arnav is the king of the village ... well not the king ... the leader but still I like to call him THE KING ... Suits him well 😉

And I am guessing there is more to Khushi's story than what she has told Arnav! There has to be more rite??? 😕

And finally Ammi ... love her! A huge clap for her ... after all she has to bardash The King the most ... And now even Khushi has to! hehehe lol!

OVERALL AMAZING STORY ... I JUST LOVE IT ... Like all you other stories!(Why am I stating the obvious 🤔 ... LOL

Eagerly waiting for the Next Update

❤️ Love You Loads ❤️

❤️ Pari ❤️

Edited by pari162 - 12 years ago

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@momo121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Amazing update!
Continue soon and Thnks for the pm

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Sunara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

I am quite fascinated with this story.. would love to see where this would eventually lead to..

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amita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

just read all parts in one go

must say its interesting and beautifully written

Why Arnav is so rude to Khushi?

Feeling bad for Khushi

But want to know Khushi's side of story

loved this update too much

waiting for next update

plz continue it soon

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Finally khushi is awake...

dis is gonna b intresting...

love the part... post soon...

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