Kria & Rey FF #3 (Ch 3 ,P 4 , Pg20)

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

A beautiful Update

Rey finally realized Kriya is doing this for something good...

and Kriya's reaction to Rey my God I love this attitude filled Kriya 8|

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Rupanshi Garg

@PunjabiKudi_17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Yippieee you updated...
Soon you will be back with other stories also...
Hayee m so waitng for dem..
Well this one is just woww..
Rey realised tht kria is doing smthng for good..
Thanq for resumng ur works.. :))

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Wow.. Dii U r back with a bang! :D
Awesome update
Kria's emotions were portrayed beautifully..
n finally Rey realized that he misunderstood Kria..
Waiting for next chapter..
Continue soon
plz update DOL too :)

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chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Omg omg

Stil cnt blv iski update mila

Aftr exact 6 mnths

Lv u sooo much 4 updatng

Awsmmm prt

Thnks 4 pm

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

This is fabulous.

I am loving Kria's characterisation.

Rey's behaviour is being very good for the storyline.

I loved d confused n feeling bad Rey during Raj's convo.

Kria ignoring Rey felt so good ^_^ esp becoz of d way he humiliated her.

Amazing update.

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

awesome one... finally rey is realizing his mistakes...thanks 4 the pm...update other ffs soon...

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

awesome update...
i just luv ur works..
toh koi bhi update ho, i luv to read them...
pls continue ur other works too asap...
nd ofcourse u r an amazing writer...

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

That was awesome...

Loved the way you showed Kria's life...

I mean you know like everything coming out as a slap over his face...

I especially loved how you broached the various subjects... her film... her ways... everything... and the contrast of kria ways...

I loved how u r bringing rey's character... amazing it is... acceptance of his mistakes... and the cold kria... is just awesome...

the start of the chapter where you showed their povs were amazing..

I love the way how you never dwell into the past .. I mean u know... which is important... but can be done away with few words... saves words... and saves the emotional ride... and gives more emotional forsight in the leads...

Awesome update... as usual... :-D

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Amyyy *sobs* 😭

i was afraid that u might update again or not... and m glad u did.. :')

well yes even i was expecting LOA or DOL more... this was a surprise..but..haah...atleast u updated and thats more than enough for me :D

coming to this... I just loved it.. loved it sooo much...

The inner turmoil which both are going thru was shown amazingly...

and here Kriya is keeping a strong face yet again...

Rey realised what he did... and is all set to mend the broken pieces...

I loved how he was trying to talk to her but she avoided..

but..calling 4a.m. ??? :O

that was sooo like Rey :P

jo bhi tha.. i enjoyed reading it.. :D

i loved it sooo muchhh... :D

keep writing plzzz...