New Arhi FF ~~ Brave Heart(4th chap on pg 30)

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

different concept

intriguing

lukng fwd

danx fr d pm

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Niki

@..Enchantress..

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -HEAVEN-

Niki...m really happy u liked it 😊 thanks
😳
Prolog mein hi itna qustin! U ll get ur ans 😉

My pleasure dear.

Question toh aur bhi the...prologue hi tha issliye nahin pucha.😆
I'll wait for my answers 😳

Update-wa jaldi dena nahin toh "Daiyya Ho" 😈

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice start - pls continue soon thx for the pm

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Super concept.👍🏼update soon

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

U guys rock~~~

The start is so interesting~~

Pinky,u r just awesome !!!

Continue soon & thanx for the pm !!!

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Loads of names

@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Superb start dear and congrats for ur frst ff
arnav is major and khushi lost everyone and she is widow who is arun? Her son? And brown eyes belongs to arnav
amazing and interesting!!!!
update soon
thanks for pm and buddy me

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Senorita Sanaya
I am glad you finally posted it believe it or not I am actually reading it only now. When I read it before I was only checking for any improvement required.

I am sure this FF will be a success. All The Best.

thanks alot angel ji 😃
Hope so 😳

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Interesting beginning !

Khushi's characterization is quite ambiguous. She seems weak and strong at the same time. Her hatred toward British and Indian who support British is well justified and will definitely add some drama to this FF as I think Arnav's the new general.

The dream intrigues me a lot.

I guess Arnav id directly or indirectly involved in Khushi's parents death.

Keep it up guys 🤗

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Agathe
Interesting beginning !

Khushi's characterization is quite ambiguous. She seems weak and strong at the same time. Her hatred toward British and Indian who support British is well justified and will definitely add some drama to this FF as I think Arnav's the new general.

The dream intrigues me a lot.
I guess Arnav id directly or indirectly involved in Khushi's parents death.

Keep it up guys🤗

thanks...glad u liked it. this ff ll b full of drama 😉