New Arhi FF ~~ Brave Heart(4th chap on pg 30)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ...OceanEyes...
Ki shuru korla bolo dkhi??emn daaarrrun ff..ami aram kore boshe porteo parbo na,due to xm??

m angry with u and natasha😡

khub valo concept yaar,i like it..
I need u 2 cntnue ASAP!!

thanks a lot 😳

All the best 😃
Ki korbo...amader toh chuti 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awww... My Pinky did it !!!

Beautiful beginning...A widow Khushi n Arnav---Army Officer!!

The way of depiction is so heart-touching...Khushi's nightmares n those mesmerizing eyes !!!

I can't wait...Update soon,

duo of amazing writers !!!

Api ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: cheesemad
hey,
very nice concept...
frankly speaking, I checked this thread just because its name... Mel Gibson Starer Brave Heart is one of my favorite movies...n m glad I checked this thread out or else i would have missed such a wonderful concept...

do continue soon, waiting eagerly:)

Thank u sooo much 😊
Actually this name is inspired frm the movie but the story is totally different. Glad u liked it 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey brilliant prologue.. seems to be very interesting story.. arnav, a british major a new getup of arnav.. loved the prologue.. looking forward to read more.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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ArnieBoyBarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

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res

thanx very much for the PM.

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Interesting start Khushi is a widow and Arnav works for the British Khushi has nightmares like the start can't wait to read more thanks for the pm

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

interesting
khushi is a widow

cant wait to read more

thanks for the pm

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OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

I am glad you finally posted it believe it or not I am actually reading it only now. When I read it before I was only checking for any improvement required.

I am sure this FF will be a success. All The Best.