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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: manvilover18
sad update...
feeling sad for manvi...
plzzz update it quick...

Yes dear... its a sad wala ff...Will cont soon... tada...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: anu0555
emti0nal yr !! bt awsm t00000 !!!!
superbly wrttn n nyc cncpt !!!
n thnx 4 PM !!
plz.. update s00n Lara !!
w8n desPerateLy 4 nxt part !!
n i mst say u r vry gud writtr !!!
<3 u aL0t !!!

Thanks a lot friend...This lara maiya will updt soon... take care...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: richa002
Awsome update...
Virat didnt trust her...
Nd asked manvi to get out of his life..virat is going to regret for this...
Update soon..

Thanks a lot for your precious comment yaar...Will cont asap... take care... 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: rasp_berry
Wowww superb updt...trully mindblowing...watever decision manvi took was perfectly allright...wating fr the next...pls updt soon m pm me

Thanks a lot dear for your encouragement yaar...will cont soon...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: roshreb
nice emotional update..feeling really bad for manvi.. virat was too harsh wiz her..." Take this bas***d thing in your womb away from me... but he will surely regret this later.. he is so blinded by his jealousy and anger.. hope karan has nothing to do with those pictures..continue soon..

Thanks a lot for your comment dear...😊...You will get your answers soon...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Huma0301
Amazing update
poor soul manvi
im just thinking wen virats finds out the truth hw disgusted he will feel on himself
love ur choice of song in the end
im really loving this so plzzz continue reallyy quickly

Thanks a lot dear...😊...Glad that you liked the song also... thats my favourite sad song...Will cont soon ...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: hangok
wow what a beginning,
poor manvi,
virat im sure you will regret it soon...
hope he finds the truth soon but dont want manvi to forgive him so easily...

thanks for pm
now waiting for the next part

No sooner dear... I am in a total devil mood nowadays...Take care and am coming soon with the updt...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Tuba_KSG
awW my manvi ..
Q piche par gaen hn sb bechari k .. Every writer is just doing attiyachaar with her .. not fair .. but what to do now .. Concept is far acceptable then my demand to see virat suffer "" vo b wesa wala jese manvi suffer krti h cox of virat in almost every FF "" .. don't look at me like this , i was just saying ..
Any ways .. the concept was really nice n interesting .. PART 1 was awesome .. never thought k VIRAT esa Bole ka apne hi Unborn kO ..
Cont. soon , m interested !!

Thanks a lot dear...Well tumhari demand jaroor puri hogi but wait a bit...I am not done with tadpaoing mannu darling...Be ready with a bucket to cry more...