Arakshi SS: Bechain dil mera Pg 50 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..just read all the three parts..and wow...u have that knack to touch the untouched chord...👏 At first Arjuns internal turmoil,his emptiness portrayed in the most poignant way..i could almost feel it inside me...and then sakshi,s entry...wow..wonderfull style of writing..😊😊
rain..white shirt..passion...😉 hmm..devil with red horns..😛
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Vidya di 🤗
Thanx fr d pm n dedication
mujhe arni chaiye tha :P
koi ni arakshi bi changa h
awesum update
lov it
beautiful sng
grtly potrayed pov
haye amazing !!


Payal, I told u that it would be Arjun and Sakshi story and u were fine with it...
I dont think i can ever write such romance for Arjun and Roshni, the simple reason being Arni makes me feel sad and I only get visions of her cruel death...which also bring memories of Arjun's sorrows!


thanks to all...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwssmm part
cont sooon
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...Beautiful is the word...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand



Payal, I told u that it would be Arjun and Sakshi story and u were fine with it...
I dont think i can ever write such romance for Arjun and Roshni, the simple reason being Arni makes me feel sad and I only get visions of her cruel death...which also bring memories of Arjun's sorrows!


thanks to all...


I knw di sry for my blutring kan pakad ke
yup arni is very different itself
sory di realy!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it ,😊😊😊
it was way too good 👏👏👏
while reading i was feeling so connected as if i was witnessing each and very moment

the rains...the beach...the sea...and of course our bheege hue arjun and sakshi...
dat pouring of rain...and with dat each emotion dat u depicted was just too enchanting
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
right now i'm spell bound ...and just want to read further, 2day itself ...
i know dats way too much on my part to ask but wat to do i cant control myself...
all ur fault...😆😆😆

well plz plz plz cont soon...😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vidya ... Explation of each and every moment and word you have written is so clear and I was ke I m not reading it but I m watching it on the screen ... Mind blowing ... Superub ... Awesome ... And sab kuchh ... Now I m waiting for the next part ... Thanks dear for the update and for the pm :)
Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res/unres what is arjun planning to do by bring sakshi to beach in rains.
Edited by diw9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi vidya di...🤗... awesome update!...loved it😉... okey u perfectely potrayed arjun's loneliness and his state of mind ,...his confussion , his suffocation ...everything... so acp is in confusen about his feeling for sakshi😉...not bad !... but the way arjun started sharing his feelings with sakshi n and fear of losing her is enough proof that he has feelings for sakshi😉... and the beach scene😉...only confession milega?😲... and ya there are very rare person who loves someone without any expexctation!...so sakshi is... loved it...di ...update soon di🤗
Edited by life93 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: life93

hi vidya di...🤗... awesome update!...loved it😉... okey u perfectely potrayed arjun's loneliness and his state of mind ,...his confussion , his suffocation ...everything... so acp is in confusen about his feeling for sakshi😉...not bad !... but the way arjun started sharing his feelings with sakshi n and fear of losing her is enough proof that he has feelings for sakshi😉... and the beach scene😉...only confession milega?😲... and ya there are very rare person who loves someone without any expexctation!...so sakshi is... loved it...di ...update soon di🤗


oye neeru ki bachhi...confession ke aage kya chaahiye tujhe??
hmm bacchi bigad gayi! kuch karna padega! 😉

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