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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
amazing awesum superb totally loved it...
i loved hw sakshi understood his unsaid wrds, his pain, his loneliness and wanted to help him...
though it was a bit of childish behaviour or watever it may be she ultimately made him smile...
and thats the biggest thing at the moment... arjun was longing fr a frnd a person who will understand and thanks to sakshi she did that...

love u vidya di fr this update 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
superb...chai banana sikh gayi sakshi...
Arjun's mocking definitely is pleasure to read...I love the way he teases her...
haan kuch baate to sad thi update mein...Roshni, uski baat aate hi you make us emotional...
sakshi wanting to take all his pain..hope he will share his pain with her!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
nice story
very intense side of arjun
sam ne mujhe akele choda was touching
sakshi and arjun 😊
his taunting😉
lovely😊
heart touching😭made me cry

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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
di plz update dis story n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Oh please add one more part please and update wrong number as well
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
u have to continue plzzz pm me when you do
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
di.. i came to unres my res.. but i couldn't find where i ressd😆...

anyways an amazing update & closure to the OS... so emotional yet the msg that there is always 'light at the end of the tunnel', shines through... love the way you hve depcited that everyone needs a companion in life, as life is incomplete without some1 who lends support and comfort to u in all times, someone who will be with u regardless of the situation & will accept u the way u r without a care in the world... yeh toh kuch zyaada philosophical hogaya mere liye😉😆😆

anyway i came across a quote when i was reading 'April Fool's Day' by Bryce McCartney that defines this OS for me (actually u did like that book di, just dont read at night, i was bawling my eyes out😭😭, if u hvent already read it tht is😳)

"Love is an energy, it cannot be created nor destroyed. It simply is. Giving meaning to life and direction to goodness."
don't know if it makes sense, but it made sense to me😃😃... and ofc thaanks payal di for the theme of OS.. hugs to both🤗&🤗

Edited by gujjupari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Di it was absolutely fantastic an absolute pleasure to read... Please update soon and pm xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Hello Arakshians...so here is one crazy part to my sad poignant OS...

romantic hai...so dont blame me or smack me for anything...😉

errors honge...pls excuse all that...plsss

mere pyaare BBs, this is dedicated to u...u know why?lol🤗

and Payal dear...thanks again for strangling me to start this...owe it to u!🤗

so here it is...

Part 3:

The tea was drunk to the last drop……the coffee was long over but the lull of silence set in……They sat in silence for god knows how long……

She wanted to speak a lot but one look at his broken shattered form and all her words got struck in her throat….she couldn't pretend as if nothing was wrong and speak to him casually as she did always in the past…..Today it was all different!

He couldn't deny that he felt a unique peace in her presence! Unaware of himself, he craved for more of that time……he wanted the time to stop there…as if dreading the time when she would get up to leave and then he would be all alone in that house which was nothing less of a haunted one now……Roshni, her love, her memories, her painful shrieks everything….everything echoes in his ears like dark shadows from the past!

He couldn't bear this loneliness any more but he felt he didn't have a choice…….He had left this home fearing these shadows but then after Sik's death, he suddenly felt a pull from within to come here and tell his beloved Roshni that he had finally avenged for her death…yes, it didn't mean anything now……Roshni wouldn't come back no matter what but he had to do it………

But the days after that was nothing but hell…….He sat on the recliner hugging every memory of her….photos and albums of their life together! But nothing gave him peace….

But today…..just Sakshi's presence gave him what he was yearning for…..he didn't want to lose that but even in those moments, he couldn't understand what he was feeling for her….he was confused!

While she wasn't one bit confused of what she felt for him….she was damn sure of her feelings for him…..the heart to heart talk with Aisha and Aisha's questions had made it more evident that she loved him…no doubts on that…...though she never expressed it in words, she knew that she was in love with him deeply, madly crazily……no one could love someone so deeply and that too without zero expectations of getting that love back….She realized that he would never reciprocate her love…..he would never accept her……

But she wanted to be there for him….to comfort him….to give him peace, solace…..to give him happiness….to give him whatever it takes to make him live his life again!

TO bring him back!

An hour must have passed with her waiting for him to say something to her but he didn't open his mouth…..She tried to get up muttering something but he instantly spoke up cutting her short….It was his fear of letting her go away speaking impulsively……

"Sakshi, main baahar jaa raha hoom……I will drop you"

He managed to say that but his mind and heart was speaking different words altogether….It seemed to echo to her not to leave him alone and go!

He also wanted to get out of the 4 walls which was beginning to suffocate him and breath in fresh air!!

They set off together…….to her surprise for the second time again in the day, he didn't go towards her place…..he turned to a different direction…..

A little into that route, she realized where they were heading…the union of the blue seas and the light blue skies were becoming more and more clearer as they left behind big buildings and busy traffic….

He stopped the vehicle towards the side of the road……It was an isolated….not so frequented beach….

He got down and started walking towards the blue water….she followed him closely without a question…..not even an enquiring look….may be he needed this……may be he wanted to talk to someone….may be he wanted her company….

She smacked herself for the last bit….."no way….Arjun Rawte wishing Sakshi Anand's company…only in your dreams girl…..get a grip!"

But she didn't know what lay ahead of all those thoughts……and what lay deep inside him…..

The sea was calm today just like him in her presence…….He breathed in a fresh whiff of air and spoke, "main aur Roshni yahaan aksar aaya karthe teh….it was her favorite place…"

Sakshi was stunned to hear him speak such personal things to her……now she could sense that he wanted to talk to someone…..pour out to someone and lighten himself and she was all ears for that…always ready to do anything and everything for him!

Love indeed had made her crazy…….it could do anything! She sighed as she heard him talk more about his dead wife…..

He stopped his words when he unknowingly started saying about her death……She could feel his voice cracking up and his eyes blurring with tears…..

She couldn't control herself….she walked closer to him and entwined her fingers within his as if to console him….No words could do that…so she chose that gesture to indicate that she was there and he wasn't alone! No matter what, she would stand by him to support him!

He didn't shrug her hand as she expected……He tightened the grip on her fingers shocking her…….

As if to give more meaning to that momentary emotions and feelings, the sky rained down...was it sad like him? or were they happy tears seeing him in solace and peace? It looked like the skies and the angels from heaven were happy seeing him with her! Or perhaps Roshni was happy witnessing Arjun Rawte being reborn today!

As an instinct, she tried to run to the vehicle as the rain hardened on them…..but he didn't move a bit neither did he free her of the hold…….

He pulled her towards the opposite direction which led to a rocky area…..One rock led to another and he took lead and guided her……

They had to jump from a rock to the ground to reach a partly sheltered area…..meaning sheltered by rocks…..He jumped down first and then held out his hands to help her….

She didn't think twice…..she jumped in only to be caught by him…….literally she was in his arms now…..

His hands held her gently…she slid down to stand on the ground but still within his embrace…..

Both were fully drenched by now…….her white shirt was hugging her body and accentuating her features……Coincidently he was in his hottest shirt as well…a white shirt……both looked like straight out of a romantic movie!

Entwined in an embrace, eyes locked and their hearts touching each other while their hear beats raced and sang in a similar rhythm!

The intimate embrace and the touch on her wet body sure did something to him…..it ignited the desire and passion which he believed was no more there in him…

A part of him which he thought was dead sprang to life in those moments….was it the rain, their circumstances, the privacy doing all these triggers? No, it wasn't….it was her…..her presence….her beautiful face….her most desirable body….the closeness to her that was doing all that….

She snapped out of the dream like trance and broke away from his hold……..

She walked a bit into the rocks and stood facing the opposite direction….Rain drops were still drizzling on them mercilessly but both didn't seem to mind it….or they were too preoccupied to get affected by that!

When she moved away, he felt a sense of loss…….he wanted to touch her again….feel her body on his again…..he walked to her and snaked his arms around her waist from behind pulling her to himself shaking her to the core!

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum...

[To be continued]

yeah my devil popped out at the right time...sorry!😉

so how was it? pls do reply...more the comments quicker the update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Didu!!!! aapke yeh devil toh!!!!!! urrrggg!!!! strangle strangle strangle!!! nah jokes u know nah i love both u & ur devil [:D]

hmmm!!! bahon ke darmiyan, do pyaar mil rahe... jaane kya bole maaan... dole soon ke badan... dhakhan bhani zubaaannn [8->]. This song was like on repeat as i was readin ur update!!! haiii & i fainted [:$] [:$] [:$]

lolz & i thought this OS finished!!! welll its kinda goood it didnt yet [:)]

white shirts [;)] ... rain [;)] ... desire [;)] ... yeh kya ho raha didu yeh kya ho raha haii [LOL] .. hmm in a lyrical mode today [LOL] [LOL]

Great job as always didu & & i also wanted to say tht plsss dont send me pms... i feel so guilty tht u waste ur effort & i dont respond!!!

PS: didu, dont gt mad at wat am abt to say [:$] , but i cant stop myself, yeh pure romantoc beach wala love (aaj kal style chaal rahi hai nah????? [;)] ) pure imagination hai yaaahhh koi personal experience [;)] like i said pls dont gt madbat ur choti... U can throw anything u want for this comment [LOL] & yeah pls rmbr the pm issue [:D]

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