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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for your feedback! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey P!

I am sorry for being so late but had an exam today and amidst all the frenzy forgot to edit out my previous res.

This update was surprising, considering how Akash ended up in a soup in front of Payal. For a guy who's apparently so meek and shy in front of his crush, I was surprised when he put Arnav's misunderstanding to rest so swiftly. As if saying - we do it in style. 😆

And Arnav, or should I call him the green eyed monster? He shouldn't be hurting meri Khushi like that over and over again. Kyu dard hai tere ishq mei? 😆

I am all geared up fro the next one. I am sure there will be some explosive scenes. I can't expect anything lesser from you! :D

Lovely update! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am having so much fun reading this!! Up to chapter 4 now..
Very nice!!. thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aakash understood the situation and wisely conveyed about himself to Arnav.
Enjoyed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the parts in one go, loved the concept and story.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains

You have no idea what you are doing - do you?! You are making my mind swing like a frikkin pendulum, part B, I dislike Arnav with every ounce of thought in me and part C - well, not so much. It's clear how much he was affected by K and his strained relationship. I understand Khushi's state of mind too - losing a friend seeing him drift away especially when you start looking at him as someone more than a friend - it hurts. It hurts badly. So when she delivered her raging piece about Lavanya and him, part of me feels she just vented everything out, not really being in control over what she was actually saying. Part of me also feels what she said was hurtful, not entirely justified. Part of me also feels that the Khushi we know, she would have cried buckets just thinking over and regretting what she had said, knowing how much it would have hurt Arnav. But I loved this chapter for one reason mostly - Arnav remembering and smiling sadly at the memories spanning over the last ten years of K and his life, heart rending, truly.

Now I know this must have been getting real old - but I so love these names - Razzie, Subbu bear, Medusa! And dude, I love Payal - so much! She and Aakash are a riot! And thank heavens Aakash made certain things clear to Raizada's pea sized brain.

But oh well - no complaints. I am back to liking Arnav! 😆


Continue soon!


'Pea sized brain'?! Hahahahahahahahaha! That is hilarious! :D

Thanks so much for your feedback and for detailing all of your reactions and feelings and how they changed! Really help me as a writer! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avika_ShArMa

Im so Late!

awesome update FP(Can i know your real name pls?) 😊
it was really surprising to see Aakash talking like that, saying something like that to Arnav. But it was for the better.
Arnav will be one hell of a possessive lover, if he gets a chance. I can see! ;)
But what made Khushi react like that,that she had to leave the room? I couldn't understand that portion. Care to explain? :)

Im looking forward to Arnav's reaction. Curious like hell !!😉

Update Soon. Soonish.. :)


Thanks for your feedback! :D

About Khushi's reaction...it was, I guess, just the tone and the way Arnav said what he did and what he was slyly implying by that. And if you remember, he said something as stupid in the car when they were coming back from Akash's house and had hurt Khushi back then also...

About my name...

"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet."

Shakespeare Uncle ko contest karne wale hum kaun hote hain? ;) :D
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Originally posted by: luvbug

Oh my god... poor payal... oh actually... i dont knw who to pitty more...akash or payal :P... Akash always ends up hurting her (physically)...hehe...

OH n wat do i say abt arshi...
n khushi...y did she leave... was it something from the past tht u already told us... or something u hsvent shared... coz it didnt stir any memory from what i have read...
wooahh n i totally agree with you...who would have thought aksh would say something like that...
now awaiting arnav's reaction to that... pls pls update soon!


Thanks for your feedback! :D

Khushi left because of what Arnav was implying and if you remember, there was a time in the car when they were returning from Akash's house that Arnav had said something equally stupid and Khushi had been hurt back then too...


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Originally posted by: TabbyJ.


Just read the new chp and with it my theory becomes more strong!
This is arnavs way of showing his emotions and whereas khushi was different before she has adapted his ways now, so as u say north pole AND northpole NEVER attract, one has to change and by the looks of it it's going to be Arnav this time and not khushi!
Amazing chp finally the confusions out, now they can get on with working on poor akash's home :p


Thanks for your feedback! Love the analogy! :D

And yep...they should really start working on the Malik project now! Bahut distracted rehte hain dono! ;) :D
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Thanks for your feedback! :D

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