Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: Samyxx
Beautiful update...

Thanks a lot Samyxx :)

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: -Aria-

No offence taken. I don't watch it either :D I was just curious since it stars you know who.

Hahaha! I know. That's the reason I tried. But...sigh... 😛

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Oh! BTW, next part ready? 😉

I am ready you see.

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akaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Liked Aakash and Arnav talk.

Enjoyed reading.

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Oh! BTW, next part ready? 😉
I am ready you see.

😲 Seriously!?

Yeah. Erm...Just not this FF though.

Well...I'm trying to re-read another FF for the gazillionth time so that I can update it over the weekend. I have four readers who want to read further. And a spammer who has no intention of reading it ever. So this weekend is dedicated to that :D

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: serendipitylove
My dear friend I think you are made for long stories!! Ur writing style makes us savour the language, the build-up and the descriptions...like a meal to be cherished and eaten slowly... I haven't read your other work but from my LB experience with you I must say that the story should definitely unfold slowly in this pace...! Which would make it pretty long I think! I'm glad this did not end in 15 chapters!!

I am irritated with deeya being there! She's like this thorn in paradise! But considering Khushi's fragile state, I guess its like a necessary evil... And there you've left us hanging again...Right at the brink of a major Arshi encounter... ! I hope deeya is off the picture somehow and we'd see lots and lots of arshi...!

Ha ha. yes. I'm beginning to realize it too. Let's see. Thank you though :)

I see two people already supremely annoyed by Deeya's continued presence😃 But like you say so yourself, its a necessary evil at this point. Well i its any consolation, now that the past is partly out of the way, and Arnav has found Khushi, I'm struggling to find ways to keep him away from her😛

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: koisk
How true that one incident can change sooo many lives... Hope Arnav can earn khushis forgiveness.

Let's hope so.

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: Dreamy123
amazing update...loved the conversation of Arnav and akash...good Akash was there with khushi...hope payal and akash will also come together soon ...n he will tel everthing to payal too...waiting to know how khushi got into Arnav's shirt 😳 ...thank u so much

@bold, Don't get any dreamy ideas now. There really is no secret about that, as Deeya will clarify soon 😛 We don't want Khushi to strangle Arnav literally now do we?

Everyone's happiness is tied with Khushi's at this point.

Thank you Dreamy for sharing your thoughts on the update :)

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: shree10
Aria, A brilliant chapter. I have no more words.

Arnav got away too easily in the show!!

He did get away too easily. Suppose by the time in the show, they were already thinking of winding down

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#530

Originally posted by: 1chilly
This was not boring in any way.

Loved how Aakash showed Arnav the mirror.
Someone had to do it.
And now Ihope Aakash and Payal too will at last find peace together.

Aenav has a long way to go before finding forgiveness from Khushi.
But atleast he has now decided to redeem himself.

Everyone's happiness is somehow tied with Khushi's. So until she finds closure, either way no one else will.

Yes, the new days starts with bright sunshine, the rains have finally stayed away.