Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Oh come on! Why do you think it is bad? You have put everyone(I meant Akash, Arnav, Khushi and even Deeya) in their right place here. I could easily understand where do they all come from now. It is good that there is no more past baggage from now on. 😊

IPK 2, I don't know if I have that much patience to invest my energy and time for it. I think it is coming at 6 PM here, no chance of watching it on TV. Busy you see. So, forget. 😛 But, I loved the many ways bhadaas is coming out from everyone. I read so many good posts on that. 😆

Just something weird I guess. Glad its done, this update.

I didn't know the time slot had been decided and all. Damn, they did pull a fast one on everyone! The forum will come alive again. I miss the madness in IF the past few months. No fun when everything is all quiet.😆 I saw a few of those posts too, and one video on Yt. It was all pretty creative stuff. IPK has very unique set of fans.

Just curious, you don't watch QH do you?

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

@A, it is like little fire is enough to burn the entire forest. Yeah, forum is active again. 😊

I do watch QH sometimes. But, the couple is yet to strike a chord within me. 😛. No offence meant.

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sweetsmile1

@sweetsmile1

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Just came across ur ff...read it in one go...it is just excellent ...😊

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Brilliant, from the word go!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
@A, it is like little fire is enough to burn the entire forest. Yeah, forum is active again. 😊

I do watch QH sometimes. But, the couple is yet to strike a chord within me. 😛. No offence meant.

No offence taken. I don't watch it either :D I was just curious since it stars you know who.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: meem17
Loved the update
It was awesome

Thank you Meem :)

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#517

A great chapter. Akash needed the opportunity to give it to Arnav for Arnav to realize the extent of the damage his decisions made. This is a great beginning to see where Arnav goes next and hopefully his conversation with Akash resonates with him as he makes his next plan.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: sushan
What a wonderful conversation between brothers.I have read lot of stories on Arhi but this is the longest and most captivating convo between arnav and akash loved it

oh yeah? here i was thinking, these guys are talking too much😆

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: neverbefore
'Boring' must be the new 'superb' because I don't know any planet on which 16 would be boring!!!! 😕

Absolutely amazing chapter. Akash making Arnav see the truth of his actions is just superb...finally Akash has stepped up and shown Arnav what a true man is about...taking responsibility, living his principles and genuinely caring for another's well being. The man deserves a Nobel Prize!!

I seriously hope that Arnav's hormones and temper don't run away with him. He has to start 'man'-ing up now that he knows how much Akash has done to correct his wrongs. Will this be big enough to change him...it should be!!

Sigh! You know now that I think about it, it most definitely was the length of the update that annoyed me more than anything else. After one of the earlier parts which was as long if not longer, i had sworn off lengthy chapters. But alls well that ends well.😃

Yeah, time for Arnav to do a few right things. Let's see how that shapes up... Thanks a lot!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: gifttag
'What you sow so shall you reap' this came to mind as I was reading it..Khushi's forgiveness will not be easily achieved he really will have to Work pretty hard..she might just forgive him but might not give second chance to Arnav..what redeeming qualities he has..none where I am looking from and I am sure Khushi will feal the same..Akash actually paid the price for Arnav's misdeed and still paying it and he asks Arnav not to rope her in with emotional blachmail..can't believe Akash has been so self sacrificeing..I also agree with when he said that his marriage was doomed to fail with Khushi as Payal's dowery. Let's see what cards Arnav plays and how he wins this one.

Loved the way you opened this chapter with one wonderful song and the way you wrote that you just took my breath away..I read and then I read again few times.

Khushi is so funny she was having the most sensuous dream and she wakes up and touches her stomach..she was confused and asking all sorts of questions until Arnav barges in and give her answers to say she was shocked will be an understatement.

Awesome update..I loved this chapter..you have done complete justice to it. Akash and Arnav's conversation was something else both their pain I could feel through the screen.

I can't wait to see where this is going to go.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

Let me start with Khushi and her reaction to that dream - she will do the craziest things! So no surprises there. I had to leave out a good chunk of what followed in the conversation for the next update cause this was getting too long.😆

What you sow so shall you reap stands true for Arnav. But may be its time life gave him so happiness. Everyone makes mistakes...he wouldn't be human if he didn't. I'm still sympathetic towards the guy slightly as you can see...despite everything. Now that the past is partly done... the story can move forward.

Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts on the update.

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