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Posted: 12 years ago
I am just wondering that why we couldn't have this strong Akash and Payal in the show? Why did we have to suffer a stupid Payal and a spineless Akash? They way u have written this story is just awesome... I like the way Arnav is always trying to control his temper, so true to his character that he loses his temper at the drop of a hat and a resilient Khushi who is not ready to become a doormat for Arnav just bcz he has come looking for her, Arnav should know that he has a really lonnng way to go before Khushi could even think of forgiving him.

Thanx a lot for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _disha_

You gave Akash a voice and a soul !

And i have never agreed with him ever before.

So Arnav now "knows" ...knows in the real sense of the domino effect his actions of the past have lead to. Akash seems to have learnt from his mistakes ...but with Arnav one can never be sure ...

Khushi's morning routine was hilarious ...and have to give it to Deeya for stalling her for so long and of course the ever impatient Arnav had to barge right in !


Arnav "knows" finally. He had set out to right one thing and only wronged so many! I think we keep forgetting that despite his flaws, Arnav was a good man. Just slightly messed up emotionally. Thats why he needs Khushi more than he knows.

Deeya has started to annoy a lot my readers😆 Not that I mind, I'm loving the reactions. But she is a necessary evil as someone rightly said. You seem to approve of her though :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manikka

awesome update...


the hero of this update was clearly Akash..."She deserves better, don't you see? To do what she wants and live the life that she wants'. The only person who has the right to take decisions for her is her' not you, not me, nor Payal or anyone else for that matter"...doing the things..tht too hiding frm the family..is gr8..but all right things came with the price...khushi has paid the price for the right things..now akash is paying for the same...and realising tht how much hard all the things were for khushi... "May be this is the price we all have to pay for everything we made her go through"...wonderful line...i don't think i hav seen such strong Akash anywhere else...wonderful...

arnav has seen the mirror by talking to Akash...
lovely update dear...
thnks for he PM...


Hiding things certainly has come with a big price tag for everyone. And that's it, hats where everyone has erred in this story, everyone has at one point or another kept a secret. Sometimes truth is the best way out. Sigh, its easier said than done though.

Thank you Manikka for sharing your thoughts on the update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roseycheek

Good for you Aakash!! Arnav did needed that reality check! Now how far is he willing to go to get his girl??


wonderful update once again


As far as it takes ;)
When it concerns her, we know he won't give up that easily.

But what does she want?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

oh iam surprised at the character of Akash - I wish the one in the serial was atleast 10% of ur Akash -

lovely update Aria - how can u call such a lovely update as a boring one, dear - bring on the next update soon pls


Yes, I would have loved to see a stronger Aakash on the show as well. Too bad they didn't believe in their own creation or their potential.

I honestly felt that this update was wayy too long. May be that was part of the problem. But alls well that ends well.

Thank you Priya :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: msmarple

Great update.

Loved Akash here...willing to sacrifice his own marriage to try and do right by Khushi.

Makes one realize once again how much the CV's could have done with Akash's character - but they chose not to.


Yeah, they certainly did not exlore all the characters as well as they could have. May be they caved in due to all kinds of pressures we cannot even begin to understand of.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: momb24

👏 this is for Akash,you have done a brilliant job of his character in this story, the way he dealt with Arnav,his dispair and puting Khushi wants first was wonderfully discribed and puts Arnav to shame. nothing boring about this chapter,just great!. looking forward to seeing how Arnav deals with Khushi.


Thank you!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: casker

loved how Akash show Arnav his deeds. Don't want any one to forgive Arnav😡.


So that means you don't want to see a happy ending?😲
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks Savy :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vann

Akash turned a greater hero than Arnav this time...as much as I appreciated what he has done for khushi, i was glad he finally got tired of being good...not because it threw arnav and khushi together but because it makes him more human...not just goodness/selflessness personified...a man who is yearning for his partner and trying to set right what Arnav undid. Wonderful!


He did show Arnav the mirror...how wrong he was and still is, till he realizes that right things don't come to him naturally...what a come down for a man who liked playing God! For me this realization was one of the climactic points and you have led to beautifully...at an unhurried pace...doing complete justice to it...great chapter😊


Loved your comment Vann. Thank you for sharing them here :)

Aakash is broken man because he is tired of trying to do the right thing while Arnav does not know where to begin. We find ourselves in strange predicaments.

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