Arhi FF: The Matchmaker #4

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: chavvi16
See ya then
And am glad you weren't offended with my comments that is a relief

Offended? Why Chavi?

I love your feedback...especially the humor.😃

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

R! 😊

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Loved the update Afya... And yay!! It had lot of Arhi moments... It was cute, intense, passionate and beautiful... An absolute delight to read... With your narration skills it has been a very good visual experience... So a big applause to you... 👏

To begin with, I always love a jealous Arnav... I loved his anger towards Khushi for refusing to dance with him... and then going ahead and dancing with NK and her friends... the jealousy coursing through him seeing others admire her... So he exactly does what he knows best... He runs away from the situation... He is unable to name his emotions... he does not know why he is feeling this way for Khushi... poor guy I felt bad for him... But its time to start thinking Arnav babuwa!! Use your brain and try to understand what your heart feels!! 😊

I loved the small scene where Khushi comes back from the party to see Arnav sleep so cutely... loved how she tucks him in bed before going to change into her night clothes... These small small moments if these two idiots analyze, they shall realize their feelings for each other... The whole scenario between the elder family members of a nedd to party was so cute... Mamiji wanting to have a party of her own... and Akash knowing much more about Payal and her family now was too cute... 😳

And then the whole setting for another party thrown in by the elders was such a cute idea... This truly is a lovely family... just excluding this Arnav who is being stubborn... Khushi as usal is always concerned about her family... their well-being... if someone has taken medicines or no!! Always the selfless one... And then we get the hot, passionate, angry and intense dance... This scene was so perfectly blended in the story that it feels like it was made for it... I am so in love with this couple... Can't get enough of them... ❤️

Arnav and Khushi both did not know what was happening between them... and I really wished there would have been an after scene where they are kind of uncomfortable with what they had just shared... And then both of them very conveniently got busy with their lives... completely avoiding the intense pull that they felt for each other... Crazy couple!! Always making us crave for them to be together... 😛

And then Khushi goes out with NK and does not return till late... Arnav is worried and panics to not being able to reach either... and then that brilliant scene, again fit so perfectly in the scenario... I could feel Arnav's fear, panic, anger, sadness, craziness his pain... an all-an-all out Barun Sobti speacial scene... And then his relief in hearing her voice... and then... What if I had lost you?' Hayye!!! Followed by 'Aapko Kya faraq padta hai?' and then the epic dialogue of IPK... 'Offcourse faraq padta hain dammit, Kyon ki...' FINALLY!! I hope realization does begin with both these so in love souls... 🤗

Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago

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ajoop

@ajoop

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

loved it
too good 😊

Edited by ajoop - 12 years ago

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

wow superb update loved it thank you for pm.

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

so arhi's first dance...😉

loved it❤️

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

simply fabulous.
loved it
keep writing
thanxx for such wonderful stuffm

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Afya you are doing an excellent work and you are just fabulous in keeping the excitement up when you end one part, i was very much eager to get this update. Very easily you blended all those scenes with the new situations, it is incredible actually, really amazing.

I am really getting sad seeing those two poor souls, poor arnav and khushi. It is happiness everywhere barring their hearts.😕 Whenever you take shyam's name, i am getting nervous and anxious😆

Beautiful update and its going good.😳

Edited by KittenRose - 12 years ago

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choochootrain

@choochootrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

Love mami n naniji surprise...soo sweet of them...n we get to see arhi dance tat passionate rage dance...both juz too stubborn to delve into their feelings towards each other...

Wonder wat happen to nk n kushi...cant wait to read wat arnav gonna do...

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PANCHI__pOOJa

@Panchi__Doll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#400

Res
~~unres~~
Wow wow wow loved d update!! Full of anger intense n d passion...
Loved diz jealous arnav...angry bcuz khushi refused 2 dance vth him n also danced with Nk...His temper so shot up Dat he needed a drive!! poor akash got saved b4 d volcano blasted...
Khushi ur too innocent...she jst missed d jealousy face of arnav...
Loving diz mamiji yr...she planned a costume party 4 all..Naniji ur too sweet..brought arshi to shake der leg...Ahh den cums der intense filled dance...Barun n sanaya jst rocked der...As payal said dey hav a sizzling chemistry...
so Nk took khushi along vth him 4 shopping...n arnav jst got worried n went looking 4 dem jst 2 get one glimpse of his khushi Dat she is safe...ya d bangle pieces n her sandal wer cue 4 more desperation!! d way he ran behind d ambulance thinking his khushi left..he realized he cannot live without his khushi...den 1 view of her in mirror n her voice jst brought him d relief n @ the same time anger 4 being so careless!!! Den cums my fav dialogue "off course farq padta hai dammit" Altogether sarun jst rocked here...
waiting 4 d next update...thnx 4 d pm!!! TC

Edited by Panchi__Doll - 12 years ago