Arhi FF: The Matchmaker #4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread!!



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A very beautiful update Afya... again I am bowled over by the sheer simplicity of your writing...

To begin with I am glad the Shyam part got over quickly. He has been one villain who you can hate with all your heart... And a big applause to Abhaas for making us hate him so much! 👏 I am glad he noticed how Arnav was seeking Khushi... he should slowly start realizing that Arnav has started showing interest in her... And all of Shyam's plans have always been foiled... so was this one...

But someone else gained from his plan... Our very on Arhi! It was so magical... What a scene? Everything in slow motion except their heartbeats and ours... 'humare dhadkane tezz ho jaati hai'... Hayye!! I just love this mesmerizing couple... and then he picks her up to their bedroom and lays her down... and she says 'mat jao'... just perfect... All of this leaves him wondering why is he so attracted towards her? Something is surely changing between them... And I hope they realize it soon... 😊

And so now Arnav has started admiring how beautiful Khushi is... his heart has started valuing her and wanting her presence... I am loving it! I loved how Anjali teased Arnav and poor naive Khushi was left wondering what the brother-sister duo kept on talking about?
Again Khushi cited the reason of work and did not go along with Arnav... I really wished she did... so they could spend some private time together... but I guess distance makes the heart grow fonder! 😉

I loved the fact taht he has started missing her presence... he craves to see her once he is back and seeing a quit Khushi he worries about what is wrong? And then the bomb is dropped... 'Jiji is engaged... I will leave soon...' This is what they have been wanting since the beginning, especially Arnav... But when the time has come, he does not know how to react... He is angry that things have happened to fast...

He gets into the ASR mode immediately... Angry that his two days absence had cost him so much... Anjali is as usual excited with the news... But Arnav barges in on Mami and screams at her for not taking Akash's rishta earlier... Mami does not know what has hit her... poor thing! 😆 Then Arnav resorts to his favorite man, Aman... to get a background check on some Mr Rajiv Shukla!!

What fun it will be to watch a desperate Arnav trying to break Payal's rishta!! I really loved the update Afya... and thank you so much for the mention... your story truly deserves all the praise! I am happier with the double update in this week!!
Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago
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Congrets for the new thread 🥳
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congrats on new thread
will wait for same
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Congrats on new thread.

Shyam's plan to waylay a Khushi not in her senses goes awry thanks to his Rani Sahiba and her enthusiasm to introduce her Pati Dev to her friends. *Anjaliji, Aap bhi na! Pata nahi he kya? You plan on foiling your Pati Parameshwar's amorous plans!Yeh teek he kya???* Shyam's frustration knows no ends. Instead of spending time with his Khushi he has to meet and spend time among his wife's friends! ***Knowing that Arnav's marriage to Khushi was a sham, I wonder what plans he had for Khushi. Whether he would divorce Anjali or commit bigamy or keep Khushi as his mistress! Had always wondered about this aspect.*

After a Cassanova, comes Arnav in search of Khushi and with the help of a smiling Di with twinkle in her eyes goes to Khushi as per her directions. Khushi, Gazebo, colours and water. What's missing? Arnav. Lo! here he comes in time to clear her eyes of the colour dust and catch hold of a drowsy Khushi! * Nice biceps and of course white shirt! Who can forget???* So back at room both doze off their stupor. When he got up what does he see? A beautiful sight of Khushi in wet hair, freshly showered looking like a flower that had bloomed with a first shower of rain after the sweltering heat! Trust Anjali not to leave out a chance to tease and asked Khushi did her Chote tell her how beautiful she looks? Arnav realizes that it was Di's prank to make him drink bhaang laced drink. But Khushi is puzzled! *Buddhu! Its Anjali cupid at work*

Arnav works at Mumbai day and night for two days and comes back to RM and Khushi and what does he find? A woebegone Khushi! The reason for her being sad was that her Jiji was getting married! No, no, Jiji getting married is fine and a happy news, but she has to move out of the wedlock once that is done! Once Arnav comes to know he is angry that she is sticking to his original plan and is not staying back! *But my dear Buddu! You need to spell out that you want her by your side. She has no way of knowing what is in your mind. How does she know that you have changed your thoughts when you have not verbalized it. She will adhere only to the thoughts voiced out to her before! I can't believe I am needed to tell this to you! Chote, tum bhi na!* When Anjali comes to know that Payal got engaged she has to share it with Nani and they rope in Khushi to tell all about it,without allowing Arnav to talk to her! *What the! Unbelievable!! ASR being shunted out!!!*

Arnav is not the one to sit quietly! He goes to Mami and tells her about Payal's engagement and without mincing words tells her to buck up or else Akash will miss not only the train but even the bullock cart!

Arnav comes back to his room and calls the number he often did! *who is it tellz me! tellz me! Is it the general dogsbody Aman???* He spits out, Find out all about Rajiv Shukla. Something is fishy! *Me wonder is it Shyam's handiwork?? So that he can have me time with Khushi when she seperates from Arnav without Rani Sahiba poking her nose??? Enjoy two birds at the same time???*

Loved the tracks as well as the connection to the story. Loved the way you have cleverly incorporated Khushi's sagaii announcement track into this story as though Anjali is congratulating Khushi for her sister's engagement! Loved it! In the holi track I did not expect Dhadkhan convo as it would not fit here at all at this point of time!

It was a lovely update.

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...

Thanks for the dedication ...but I stand by what I said...your writing does not need my validation, if never has, it so good.

This chapter for me had everything this update should have had at this point and I mean even you edit on the holi video..it was really well written and so perfect...
Th emotions, the dilemma, the feelings and the changes...that came out do brilliantly , seriously I am so happy with it, and I do apologise for the delay...

I hated Shyam and his lecherous intentions ...lusting after Khushi...fooling his wife and insulting her love...glad his attempt was unsuccessful ! I loved how Anjali remarks how difficult it is to keep a track of him, even when is he around...I get the feeling this remark holds some significance...!
Both unaware they have drunk bhang but feeling the effects...
I loved she has started to affect him in every way possible, how he is mesmerised by her at holi, how they both feel an unexplainable pull and attraction to each other, why he feels restless at her absence and how presence makes him question the emotions that are steadily increasing in quality and quantity around her...I loved how he asks Di for her, the look on his face and the tone of his question, exposing a side of his which even had been hidden from Di...
I loved how she is going through the same emotions...trying to analyse her feelings while standing in the gazebo, the video was perfect ,the way they look at each other ...to his lone tear drop...it would have been too hasty for be able to express anything at this point according to me...
I loved the way he is drawn to her, how her mat jao...( loved the use of this dialogue, in reverse and here ) and how he holds her hand and sleeps...

she is becoming a habit and that too a good one...to him...the tenderness he feels, and something about her that touches his soul ...
I loved Anjali teasing him about what he says about her and poor Khushi clueless...and him realising the culprit behind giving him the bhang...

I loved how he is annoyed about the unexpected trip to Bombay and she realises that something was wrong after the phone call he receives

I was hoping she would accompany him, wanting them to spend some time together, but then realised why you kept them apart right now and it was a good move, he restless at not being around her, not seeing her ...he missed her and all he could think about is to come back to her...and him working long hours just to ensure that he does not have to extend his trip..

I loved when he comes home and asks for her, he see her expression and is worried and she so lost that she does not notice when he came, in a dilemma whether to tell him or not, but his concern for her finally makes her tell and I loved his reaction.when she tells him that her sisters wedding has been fixed in a months time and when she reminds him that ...she will go after that, he feels anger like never before it's what they had decided but still the impact he was having on her going away, was so well written Afya, I could feel both their pains...also loved how you used the video here...it was perfect and such a brilliant idea...

His anger, his surprise, his fear of losing her along with his inability to express what he felt ...his anger at this situation suddenly and surprisingly coming his way...how being away for a mere two days has brought such devastation to his life,,,,which he was slowly showing signs of appreciating ... and she wanting to hear something that would give her some hope...something that justifies her emotions and what havoc they are causing her...she is shocked at his outburst and needs to know why it matters to him...suddenly...could she dare and hope?
Loved how he goes to mamaji and tells her off about her tardiness of her actions...just barging in and giving her piece of his mind...she has no clue it was such an urgent matter...and then getting Aman to find out all he can about Mr Shukla, wondering why and how this happened all so suddenly and who was Rajeev Shukla and how come he did not know anything about him.! Does he smell something suspicions here...Shyam?

Loved it...and waiting for him to put all the reactions of his actions together and realise ...!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread!!! Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awe diz one is totally awesome update!!!
To begin vth diz shyam..want 2 punch him..never d less! Awe arnav missing her wife around n in search of her...love diz Holi scenes yaar...itz jst beautiful!!...Arnav lifting her n gently placing her on bed n khushi's mat Jao..awe I loved it 😛 ...den Arnav admiring her angelic face also holding her hand n sleeping well described afya...
Khushi entering room vth gloomy face makes arnav concerned...Ahh den cums Ahh der cums d bomb Jiji got engaged! den she vl b leaving soon now! ...Diz is wat he wanted..so d day has cum but arnav is fuming y????? bechara still dnt knw ya...Hmm so Rajiv is d guy! Amanji plz make it fast n give d correct details abt Rajiv ahkir rishta thodne ka sawaal hai... 😃
Helo hi bye bye hope mamiji's make upwa did nt get smudged wen arnav suddenly barked in...hahaha...mamiji arnav had asked u na 2 go ask 4 payal's hand last week den y din u go?? hahaha poor mami had no idea abt Dat...n I too hav no idea wen payal got engaged n hw...

waiting 4 d next update eagerly...continue soon...thnx 4 d pm...TC
Edited by Panchi__Doll - 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread

nice update...
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nice updt
i like how arnav want to reach home soon
now whats going to happen
arnav is going to stop payal marrige
he cannot stay away from khushi
waiting for sunday
plz add me

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