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apni1

@apni1

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

so much to process about what the next steps will be...
looking forward to reading more...

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rupamudra

@arshirupa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

such a fantastic update

loved it

hope arnav punished real criminal

update soon

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

I'm anti violence but there are times when revenge is the only option left.

When innocent lives are snatched away.

In such a cruel manner.

Unbearable.

Justice needs to be served.

I really appreciate that you did your homework well and quoted correctly from the Holy Quran.

For reference it's Verse 5:45

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Sj236

@Sj236

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

You r jst amazing!
Due to dis tragedy , i forgot abt lavanya!
Wonderful update!
D verses of Quran were really apt!
Wonderful work!

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

m speechless...it's wonderful piece of imagination...

arjun is finally back...1st time i hav seen krishna in action...his calm and cool fade is washed away with the loss...and suraj's words were soo true...he was lucky tht he has realized his mistakes soon so he has a chance to repent but he has paid the price as lavanya was targeted...but unfortunately arjun is left with nothing...his sin's price were paid by his innocent kids and women of his family...and now he could do nothing other them blaming and repenting himself...

vijayendra has failed in his attempt to kill khushi and taken soo many lives...soo this is an eye for an eye...loved khan's words...

wonderful update di...

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Brilliantly written update hope they are able to keep Khushi safe wonder how she and the family will react when they find out she is the main target

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

The nerve of the Vijayendra! You bloody bas***d, how dare he even show his face, omg I would have ripped his face off

Arjun is a little too late, if only he cleaned up and became a better person beforehand.

Eye for an Eye, I am so ready for this, I want them all the suffer and wish that they were never born

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

OMG

the last few updates have been so sad

the entire family killed

this has felt so many people wilting

one man adn his sins

vijayendra spoiled his life and that of arjun and viren

arjun did not pay for his sins

the entire damily did

what right does he have to stay alive

i wish arjun died instead of the family

this could not have been an accident

vijayendra is behind it

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

A fantastic update indeed! I am glad you gave voice to Krishna. The hunger for power led to dirty games and loss of innocent lives! It's time for the tide to turn now. Let the revenge begin...

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

I have no words to write about last two updates, it was shell shocking and left me with tears. Eventhough my mind completely understand that its fiction, but my heart was beating like hell while reading these and I cant stop myself crying for Arnav, Khushi, KVB & Krishna. Fantastic chapters Kalyaani, you wrote both of these chapters with pure brilliance, kudos to you for writing such heart wrenching updates 👏