Raizada and Sons - Note on Page 105 - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
No words...still left with after shocks...amazing update...do not want this FF to complete...everybody is handling the situation so well...the family's reaction to Arjun was awesome...did not expect the actual target being khushi...now khushi and lavanya will be sent away to the farm house...hope they will be protected...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow, what an update, no word to describe how the story relate one to the other, the trauma, sadness, emotion... You are the best...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good. Arnav, Suraj, KBV should get their revenge. I hope Vijayendra pays for what he did to Arnav's father and now the rest of the family.

Viren as a shining star on the political stage - please don't make me laugh. And yet in this story we are insiders and see just what he is...How many corrupt, useless politicians are out there fooling people every single day?

I never thought that Khushi would be the target, but it makes total sense. I am hoping Arnav and Khushi are not harmed...

As for Krishna...he finally found his voice and then some. Arjun...I don't know what to think of him. He could have been so much better and he allowed himself to be used and to be as bad as Viren...is he to blame for the deaths of those 6 people? Yes, if stupidity, narcissism and selfishness can be blamed. He should have known better, he certainly had the right examples around him - KBV, Arnav -but he felt that he couldn't live up to those standards so let himself be led down a different path.

Even if he redeems himself and turns everything around in his life it's too late. Maybe the one thing he can be blamed for is being a coward and letting his ego be fed by Viren and co instead of working to overcome his insecurities. He was the weakest link and the easiest pawn.

Sorry, I'm rambling. But while I was definitely satisfied by Krishna slapping him and telling it like it is...I find him an object of pity rather than anger. You do not come back, emotionally, from having the deaths of your wife and children on your head. Maybe he can go all vigilante a la Death Wish style? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't have any words for this tale - It is much better than the movie Rajneeti. You seriously should consider printing this book as a novel or turning it into a script for a serial/movie. Awesome story and the twists you are throwing in are mind-blowing. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update was superb Kalyaani... 👏

Brilliant update...u brilliantly showed the truth prevailing in our society...how the greed of a man can destroy all the innocence existing up in the society...:(

Eye for an eye...too brilliant!!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
amazing ff
plz add me to ur pm list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u for the quick chapter...speech less...

Malik and Khan conversations are interesting,

can not wait to read vijayendra fall down...and viren too,

so kushis is the main target...oh man...

hoping every thing goes well according to KVBs plan...He is avery big man here...

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Posted: 12 years ago
very good and satisfying update.. the problem is that your writing is so good that we all feel what khan and mallik are feeling. 👏that this story is not a fiction but is something that we are a part of

thank you so much for this update. even though things are to move forward, there is little solace that revenge will happen..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am getting cry K. Do tell me that is indeed a foul play :( 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u so much for an early update of RnS we badly needed the follow up.U bring out the emotion for ur characters...even when i read i too felt a strong urge to teach those two Father & son a lesson...Kalyaani this fiction is nearing an end...but please keep writing...i'm out of words..u r a fabulous writer...

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