Raizada and Sons - Note on Page 105 - Page 47

K! Im not able to read it all at once... I'm jus too overwhelmed.. this is too saddening.. it's heavy! I'll get back to the other half soon.. so far you've penned down all the scenes n emotions so very well tht I've gone speechless n honestly I think I won't b able to do justice to your story anymore with my weak lousy comments...
You've sent me to another planet with ths update.. half of it..
mwah! b bck soon!

your this ff last two chap made me cry last i cry on reading any story was Umera Ahmed novel (writer of Pakistani novels) i feel devastated

i can feel the pain to lose someone close to your heart


i like Ur ff a lot i m feeling sad on thinking of its end

i m having same feeling (crying feeling ) after reading Ur this ff last two chap same like when IPKKND was ending feeling totally devastated 😭😭😭😭😭😭😔😔😔😔😔😭😭😭😭😭😭

Y0u have risen far ab0ve and c0ntinue t0 d0 s0 with each update Kalyaani and I am always in awe 0f it. An eye f0r an eye is n0t what they must try, its what they deserve and must get it. The fast paced acti0n and a "ref0rmed man" paying f0r his sin is painful. The car was mamaji's s0 0vi0usly the target must have been Khushi

brillant, kalyaani! you are a very gifted writer, please do pursue it more actively:)

Heartbreaking...

On the other hand U really are an amazing writer! Cant wait for the next update.

Mind blowing update dear!!!even though the tough time is going on for the family but still they are acting really wisely.. Every word seems real... All the conversation between characters are so good.. Really liked the way Krishna handles Arjun.. Again very nice update dear:-))

Such an emotional piece... hats off to you for the way you express each emotion so beautifully!

I am in awe at how well this chapter was put together: the action, reaction, emotions, the words, the setting were just a masterpiece. I wonderd after the bomb that you dropped in the last chapter as to what the immediate chapter would be like? I love the clash and letting Arjun know the consequences of his past actions / sins, loved the lashing out by the family members even though they are still in the haze of what has just happened, loved Arnav standing up to his Tayajji, Suraj pondering what and how he should act, and Kbv - well he made clear game playing time is over, every action has a reaction and this is exactly what will happen. If I was Vijeyandra, I would pack up and take my family as far away as possible from this lot. Blood is what they will be after and maybe rightfully so as I do not see evil people like Vijeyendra understanding in any reasonable way. I simply love Khan - Allah will give him his due. I know society has evolved from the barbaric time since the Quran was written but there are still people acting in a barbaric way, not caring for the innocents in the aim to get what what they are after. These people deserve to be held responsible for their callous acts of violence and disrespect of the innocents' lives.

just caught up with the last few chapters. Omg!! I could not believe when most of the family has been wiped out! Bloody hell! its like a nightmare come true! And lavanya! poor lavanya...

Im still in shock...