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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

The agony of loss and the rage that resulted from Vijayendra and sejal's visit was so well written and realistic.

In this case I am so rooting for an eye for an eye situation.

I so admire the strength of KBV.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Gritty and well written chapter.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Hey Kalyaani…you are great…another sad but amazing update…what an update….I had a feeling this attack is for Khushi as she is the key to both Arnav and KBV…KBV is aware of their intension… I just loved the high voltage emotional outburst…poor KBV Khushi Krishna and Arnav….It was written brilliantly…we can call this modern Mahabharata…eagerly waiting for the next update.😛

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

A awesome update Kalyaani..really very well written..I'am in absolute awe of your writing...a brilliant update dear..the update yet again gave me goose-bumps..the loss of loosing your loved ones is immeasurable and the family is inconsolable..my heart really goes out to Arnav and Khushi...such a difficult time has come in their life..the tragedy has struck leaving behind a vacuum of loss of their loved ones..it is really painful..so Arjun is back and each one from Krishna to Arnav to KBV to Khushi to Suraj each one had something to say to Arjun, yes just for a second I felt bad for Arjun but then the very next second I felt Arjun deserves what he has got and 6 members of his family and one unborn child have paid for his sins and may be Arjun deserves this punishment of being left alone without a shoulder to cry on...on the other hand KBV being the true father figure to Arnav and others he has taken things into his hand and has vowed to set things right...Vijayendra and Sejal coming to convey their fake condolences..well I hate Vijayendra, Sejal and Viren...I felt so bad for Arnav when he said his hands are tied..I wish Arnav could have thrashed the life out of Vijayendra and Viren...KBV the pillar of strength for Arnav, Khushi, Krishna at the moment made Vijayendra realize what is coming his way..loved how KBV warned Vijayendra..a eye for eye, in my last comment I had mentioned that it should blood for blood and I'am glad KBV, Suraj, Arnav, Krishna are taking up their responsibility during this difficult phase of time.. Khushi and Lavanya need to be in a safe environment since they will be Vijayendra's next target...I'am sure now Arnav, KBV, Krishna, Suraj will protect Khushi, Lavanya with their lives in the line for the two of them...Khan and Malik proving their undying loyalty...now I want to see how Vijayendra and Viren escape the wrath of Arnav, KBV, Suraj, Krishna, Khan, Malik and may be even Arjun...Vijayendra and Viren are going down... they are done for..I'am waiting for the moment when Viren, Vijayendra would be skinned alive for their sins and I would say even that would be a very minimal price Vijayendra, Viren would pay for their sins...hmmm...In one of my earlier comments I had mentioned that Khushi would be the main target as Arnav and KBV's life is in Khushi...I'am sure Arnav, KBV will not let anything happen to Khushi...Arnav, Khushi, Krishna, KBV, Suraj, Khan, Malik all will strike back at Vijayendra and Viren and they will not know what hit them... I'am waiting for that...awesome update Kalyaani...really very well written..keep it up...please do continue soon...waiting for the next update very eagerly..😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 12 years ago

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

awesome

loved it

seriously

i just love ur ff

if i own a publication house

i would have asked u to print

and give me the first copy with an aotugraph

i may not have comented on ur each update or liked

but i and my god knows

how much i fell in love with it

after reading each update

the way u writes

its just awesome and too good

hats off to ur imagination and creativity

and lots of love

and keep writing

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myriads

@myriads

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

such an awesome update..Khushi was their target..

wonder how will Arnav & KBV react to this news

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khushiiXOXO

@khushiiXOXO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

d audacity of Virender to come off his fake condolences!!😲

Oh,hope he gets a fitting reply from Arnav,Suraj and KBV!

will we now see a New Arjun?if we do then it's so sad dat it took the death of his family to sober him up!

reading abt this political drama reminds me of Raajneeti,though both are different...

gripping story..nice one!

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rosaline

@rosalinesibs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

wonderful update...loved krishna 2 day...also all d men who r facing d situation boldly...i wish atleast noe arjun changes n will join his forces wid his bothers 2 take revenge from vijayendra n viren...n how dare dat slime vijayendra comes 2 deir house 2 fake his grief...love arnav's n KBV's reply 2 him...n dat dog is still after khushi...n still planning 2 kill her...i jus cant wait 2 read more...to see KBV's,Arnav's,Krishna's n Suraj's reply 2 both father n son duo...

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Gosh, the last two updates have left me emotionally exhausted - what devastation - I hope there is light at the end of the tunnel.

You are truly an accomplished writer!