(ak) Fell in love in school.PAGE 65.END - Page 24

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Posted: 18 years ago
well dont u hate urs?? lolzz.. well continue sooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
kripa deer dun feel bad NAINA ji deserves dys!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWSOME 👏 cool magnificient thanks for not creating any misunderstandings betwen ak just love it 👏 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww that was a nice prt..i m glad the baby is ok
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
and kripa don't feel bad naina deserves that.
cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap: kripa:haan angad...aur kaun hai yahhan

angad: naina baas

kripa: angad...naina kyon kahe rahe ro?

angad:kya tumhe paata hai ke us aadme ko kisne tumare pas ponchaya?

kripa:no

angad:naina ..aur ab mujhe uske saat koi RISTA NAHIN HAI

kripa is shoked
tears run down

kripa: im sorry angad..beacsue of me you hate your own mom


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Starts now:

angad: mujhe yeh samaj nahin aati ke tum kyon bad feel kar rahi ho?

kripa:voh..you hate your own mom

angad" if my own mom hates the person i love more than anyone then i hate them

kripa puts her hand on her mouth and cries

angad then grabs kripa and hugs her

still naina is angads mom and angad does have a tear running down when he hugs kripa.

angad thinks***maine kabhi socha tak nahin ke meri apni maa aase karegi...kis ko trust karoon is duniya mein

kripa thinks****angad ki maa assi hosakti hai maine socha tak nahin tha..wow is duniya mein kis ko trust karo

then angad and kripa say at the same time: I TRUST ONLY YOU

angad then they cry and hus again.

doctor then comes in and sees them hug: vaah kya baat hai , itne aache couple ho tum dono..baagvan ko million times pray karo ke tumara baacha theek hai..

angad and kripa let go of each other and angad gets up and says: haan doctor , you are right

docto: hum baby aur kripa ko yahan se nahin jaane denge..

angad":kyon

doctor: arter one week okay,, but MR.khaana you go home

angad"par

kripa:angad tum home jao , ok

angad:tum keti ho toh zooroo

angad: oh ****...humne aapne baby ko naam nahin diya

kripa: umm nahin ab hum baby ko naam denge party ke saath

angad: doctor can you take a picture of me and kripa nad baby

doctor:sure

angad then syas..

angad"ok, we will call, aalya, anita, manik, dadi, mere dosts aur mo..(then he stops ) i mean ye thats it

angad leaves the room

kripa is sad

***kripa htinks**kyon aasa hota hai god kyon

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angad goes home and takes all his clothes in a bagge and kripa and everything of his in 2 whole days..

naina then notices after 2 days that angad is planing to go somewhere..

naina comes in angad rooms by opening the door

angad looks at thte door

angad: aapko knock nahin karna aata kya?

naina:bete kahan jaraheho?

angad: shhhhhh, aap yahan se jaasakti hai kya?

naina: bete tum mujhe aap kyon kehraheho..how come not mom

angad:aap meri maa NAHIN HO

around naina's head goes**aap meri maa nahin ho, nahin ho ,nahin ho , nahin hoo*********

naina is shocked: angad , becasue of that KRIPA you aare leeft your rista from your own mom?

angad": how dare you call kripa THAT KRIPA, voh meri biwi hai, aur main kripa se pyar karta hoon aur kisi se nahin

naina gets more hate for kripa and burn up in side: par tum kahan jaarahe ho?

angad" maine ek home but karli ya hai, aur mera dost mujhe help karega if mujhe zaroorat ho

naina: KYAAAAAA

angad"haan , main, kripa aur humarra baby humara own house mein rahege

good bye


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angad then leaves**********88



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angad goes to his new home and looks around and just imagines all three of them living happy here..

then angad calls all the people he wants to invite and tells them to come what time and all..

angad was bored for the next 2 days he had to wait since 5 days past but 2 more days left!!

angad then goes to stores and buys decoraions..blue and white baloons..he puts a big picture of angad and kripa and their baby that the doctor toook that day!1

the house looks beautiful and then he notcind he worked 24 hours and now he sleeps the whole day for the last dy..

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its been 1 week and angad is sooooo happy to go to get kripa nad baby!!!!

angad goes to kripa and baby and takes them in car..

kripa notices angad is not driving how he always does..meaing he is not taking the same route to khanna house

kripa:angad hum kahan jarahe hai? are we not going home yet

angad"yes we are going home

kripa is confused

there angad stops infront of new house and he says: here our house if here

kripa: whatt

agad"kripa lets go in

angad takes thte baby and puts him in the new baby carraige for sleeping

kripa looks around and says: angad yeh humara ghar hai

angad: haan i moved out

kripa: oh ok

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THE END

comments please!!

sorry i was sick and i still am..i have a fever but i just cant get off IF 😊
Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part hope naina gets some brains now
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was realli gud.....get well soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part. hope naina doesnt screw it..

cotninue esoooooooonn and hope u feel better
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Posted: 18 years ago

Sorry guys. i have too much work and to much to study for tests, im sure you all forgot what happen so far. oh man


RECAP:
its been 1 week and angad is sooooo happy to go to get kripa nad baby!!!!

angad goes to kripa and baby and takes them in car..

kripa notices angad is not driving how he always does..meaing he is not taking the same route to khanna house

kripa:angad hum kahan jarahe hai? are we not going home yet

angad"yes we are going home

kripa is confused

there angad stops infront of new house and he says: here our house if here

kripa: whatt

agad"kripa lets go in

angad takes thte baby and puts him in the new baby carraige for sleeping

kripa looks around and says: angad yeh humara ghar hai

angad: haan i moved out

kripa: oh ok
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Kripa: kya mom...

angad:mom? you mean voh ..vohh..naina..

Kripa hold angads arm and sits on their bed togther.
kripa holding his arm: angad mujhe pata hai ke tum apni mom ko abhi asand nahin karte. par mujhe yehi bhi pata hai ke tum phir bhi apni maa ko nahin hate karte

angad:kripa. i do i hate her..she...she ...(crys) she hates you . i hate her.

kripa:angad but even if you still loved her i would dtill love you.

angad:maybe after long i will call her but i know i will never love her again. voh feeling mere aunder nahin hogi. kabhi nahin.

kripa:fine angad whatever you want.

angad:ekts enjoy humara baby pehle baar yahan aaya hai.
(**** guys i forgot was it a boy or a girl that they had ? i make it a boy)

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next day in the evening..close to party time!!!!!
👏 👏 👏

angad:kripa what will you wear

kripa:ummm...


angad goes throught her clothes and finds this beautiful pink sari!!!

angad:wear this.

kripa:aok sweet heart

angad:main kya penu?

kripa:uhhh...

kirpa finds a pink shirt with a brown suit top with brwn pants, so a suir boot

angad:vahh kya baat hai

they ready the baby too!!!!

party time!!

angad hires this guy to open doors to everyone till they come at the end.

first knock the guy opens to alliya.
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then anita and manik

then dadi

then the rest!!

dadi: bache ke maa baap kahan hai?????

guy: voh end mein aayege

everyone was their now.

then they played music and angad and kripa with baby came down the staris

everyone clapped 👏


dadi: hai mere bete or beti or baby!! naam kya hai

angad:abhi pata nahin

angad's friend comes to angad: so how was it having a kid?

angad: i dont get ur question. r u asking how it was having a kid or now how does it feel..i will answer both. IT WAS FUN AND SWEET 😳 😉 😆

friend:angad hahahahhahahaha

kripa friend noe comes

freind: how i it being a mother

before kripa answered

angad: im sure she had fun too

kripa hits angad

kripa:angaddd

friend:hahah

alliya then holds the mic: everyone now we will start with something..angad bhai yahan aao aur kripa bhi.

dadi has baby

angad: hello everyone. main i mean Humbahut khush hai ke aap sab yahan humari khushi aur par ki nashan ko mubarak karne aaye ho. ab hum baache ke naam decide karenge.


THE END

i dont know if its a boy or a girl. did i say before.. if you know say the answer if no then i will make it automatically a boy ok?

then i will post soon!! maybe tommorow!! im tired now
bye.good night.sleep night..enjoy reading!!

Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.
Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago

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