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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 storyyy i am a new reader and i have to say this tht ur story is MINDBLASTINGG!!!

and congrats on being on the FANFIC OF THE MONTHHH!!!! 👏



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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz

gr8 storyyy i am a new reader and i have to say this tht ur story is MINDBLASTINGG!!!

and congrats on being on the FANFIC OF THE MONTHHH!!!! 👏

when?where



Saraa

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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry i was BUSYYYYYYYY 🥱 for longgg time so now i found time..i will do this alot now that im busy with school!

Recap:ips drunk now and she wear this BEAUTIFUL SUIT !!

and she comes in room and sings!!!

YEH MERA DIL!!!!

most of the spelling might be rong but i got it from some weroid ste

Yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana
Deewana deewana pyaar ka parwaana
Aata hai mujhko pyaar mein jal jaana
Mushkil hai pyaare tera bachke jaana
Yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana - 2
(Dil voh chaahe jisse, chaahe jisse usse paaye
Pyaar voh yaar ke jo naam pe hi mit jaaye) - 2
Jaan ke badle mein jaan loon nazraana
Yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana
Deewana deewana pyaar ka parwaana
(Pal pal ek halchal, dil mein ek toofaan hai
Aane ko hai voh manzil jiska mujhe armaan hai) - 2
Bhoolna na tujhe dil ka yeh takraana
Yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana
Deewana deewana pyaar ka parwaana
Aata hai mujhko pyaar mein jal jaana
Mushkil hai pyaare tera bachke jaana
Yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana - 2



then she pushes him on the bed angad is confused..whats rong with her..well good for me@@

and IMAGINE the rest



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start:

they wake up in the morning and kripa looks around and angad is not there...

kripa:ANGAD.....ANGAD.............

kripa thinks: what the hell happen last night(yawns)

angad comes out naughtly (strange eh? 😆 )

angad comes sits down beside kripa and goes closer to her

kripa: angad angad what the hell!!!

angad: tumhe kuch YAAD nahin hai kya?

kripa:no..why...what ...when ..wat the?

angad:oh oho longgggg story!

kripa: ok then

angad:yeah...you drank A LOT last night ...(coughs) A LOT!

kripa: wat...

angad:yeah.......but it was nice

kripa:angaddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

angad teases her and sings: yeh mera dil pyar ka deewna..

kripa: ANGADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

angad:hehehehe

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8 months later...

kripas tummy is bigger and there is only 1 month till the baby will be there at once!!!

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kripa is sitting in her home since she doesnt want to go to school in this condition.. angad was at home too!!:)

angad:kripa im gonna go to the mall to get something ..me should be back in about an hour!!ok!!

kripa:ye sure!!

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as you know the mom of angad does not care and the dad was gone to a trip for his work! so naina left kripa homw without telling her or angad....then she called someone..

naina: tum jaante ho ke main kya chaati hoon?

guy:yes maam

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naina left..

kripa was home alone

kripa heard someone come up the stairs..

kripa:mama ji?

kripa turned and a person came in and hit his hand on her tummy@@

kripa scremaed..:ANGADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

she fainted..

angad came home then and ran up to give kripa something and he found kripaz on the floor..

KRIPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


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he rushed to the hospital...

naina came in: kya hua beta?

angad:kripaaaa(tearss running down)

naina laughs

angad:kyaaa??

naina:maine yeh kiya

angad wanted to slap herr

naina: ab who gayi

angad:she wont

angad goes to this temple and prays there for 1 whole hour,,

he rushes back

doctor comes innnn

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THE END


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Posted: 18 years ago
i hoppe there baby n kripa is f9
gr8 part
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part..stupid naina...what kind of a mother is she 😡 ..hope kripa will be okay..cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: erier101

gr8 part..stupid naina...what kind of a mother is she 😡 ..hope kripa will be okay..cont soon 😊

a really bad one😡 i can't believe she was laughing and wasn't afraid to admit it....she just said and it sounded like she was soo proud of her self😡

i hope kripa gets better...varna angad isn't gonna spare naina, not that i think he will after what just happened

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwww that was so emotional...hope she n the baby is ok!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg naina shud die!!! but omg i feel sory 4 kripas baby aswel awww 😭
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
i feel like killing tht naina 😡 i hope kripa and d baby r fi9 😭 or angad will not spare tht naina 😡
cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
ReCaP:
e rushed to the hospital...

naina came in: kya hua beta?

angad:kripaaaa(tearss running down)

naina laughs

angad:kyaaa??

naina:maine yeh kiya

angad wanted to slap herr

naina: ab who gayi

angad:she wont

angad goes to this temple and prays there for 1 whole hour,,

he rushes back

doctor comes innnn

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Doctor said: kripa theek hai

angad tear that was about to roll down looked like it stopped..then he thought about their kid

angad"aur humara baacha

doctor: khush ho, baacha bhi theek hai au baache ko tum under milsakte ho

angads tear vanished and ran inside
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angad saw kripa laying down and sat beside her and kissed her forehead...L LOVE YOU KRIPA

kripa never woke up .. then he got up and went to the kid and he saw it and he wass soooo happy..

angad took her in his hands
angad:meri pyaari baachi

kripa said: meri bhi

angad quickly looked at kripa and a tear ran down both of their eyes..

angad put the kid in the carriage since he nurse said she needs to check up the baby for last time,,

so angad put her down and ran to kripa laing down..

she sat up and the hugged.

angad:itna khush hoon main aaj..socha tha tak nahin itni khshi miligi

kripa:haan angad...aur kaun hai yahhan

angad: naina baas

kripa: angad...naina kyon kahe rahe ro?

angad:kya tumhe paata hai ke us aadme ko kisne tumare pas ponchaya?

kripa:no

angad:naina ..aur ab mujhe uske saat koi RISTA NAHIN HAI

kripa is shoked
tears run down

kripa: im sorry angad..beacsue of me you hate your own mom

THE END


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