Smitar's: Finding Khushi #12 Last Part Pg32 (11/7)

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Water

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

A lovely journey of Finding Khushi!

Thank you so much for a beautiful FF.

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anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Thank you for a wonderful story and journey.

Thanks doubly for the great news about the next story!!

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Smitaji dediya aapne hume jataka...
Finding Khushi hello hi se bye bye ho gayi..😭(abhi na jao chhod kar ki dil abhi bhara nahi...ye gaana sab se pehle mann mai aaya jaise padha LAST PART.)
phir maine update pe gaur pharmaaya,
har baar ki tarah iss baar bhi kaabile taarif hi hai iss mai koi shaq nahi..
saari chhoti chhoti baatein dono hi yoogal ke bich ki bahut hi sundarta se likhi hai aapne..mann umango se bhar utha...😃 👏

Kahani ka yeh safar toh khatam hua...ek pari katha hi hai, jisme kuchh asal zindagi ke rang bhi dikhe...kya khoob likhti hai aap...aur upar se sone pe suhaaga.Reshu ka priththakaran(interpritetion)..❤️👍🏼👏

aur hamaari Prem ki devi ne vaada kiya hai ek aur nazaraana paish karne wali hai,uss din ke intzaar mein hai..tab tak ke liye... Sayonara,aavjo,bye,phir milte hai..

Reshu thanks for the pm..
love you both..
take care of yourself..

Smitaji ek request hai an EPILOGUE please..main jaanti hoon yeh aap ki style nahi par phir bhi ..

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: smitar

Baiyyan dharo will find aplace in Loving Khushi. I promise.😃

And darl, suggest the food u want her to eat. She will eat it. I promise!😉

Smita

Thanks for that promise. Ok, will try not to give too much of a shock to her system. Won't ask for spicy food all of a sudden for jalebi rani. but can she at least eat fruit?

and no puri for breakfast specially if she is working. I don't know a single working girl who makes puris for breakfast and has aloo puri for breakfast and aloo puri for lunch.

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: segad

In the whole serial, all we saw her eat was aloo puri & jalebi. The one time she ate a carrot, she was whining!😆

I will make her take fruits in Loving Khushi!!!😉

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

The End of one more lovely and beautiful story. Perfect end which the story could have with both the couples in it.

Thnkq so much smita di for keeping us update with our ArShi all these months and months to come forward. :)

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naajuka

@naajuka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Lovely end. Feeling sad it ended ad happy with the end. Anyways keep me updated for the new work.

regards

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

what a wonderful sweet story this was. Thanks Smita! Looking forward to the next one.

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Minahil Nauman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Awww loved it and i am liking the schedule! Will Miss This One But As We Say All Good Things Come To An End! Thakkur Love U For This! :D 😉

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BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Cuming ji... 😳

Last part tha...

Anamika, dressed in an anarkali, walked into the kitchen of the cottage with Ganesh.

In between, Ganesh dropped kisses on Anamika's cheeks, hair, chin... in fact, any place he could get. Anamika giggled like a girl, feeling happier than she had ever been in her life.

"Maybe we shouldn't have any more children." Ganesh looked at her, his eyes serious.

Anamika nodded. She hugged Ganesh and whispered in his ear, "I would love to have your babies..."

🤣 Mera Monkey frnd is crazy..

Khushi inspected the kitchen, and selected ingredients for breakfast. Arnav was busy calling his home & talking to the Raizadas & the Guptas to make sure that their overnight absence had not caused an earthquake in Shantivan.

Earthquake of happiness.."Khushi" toh aaya gaya Shantivan me..

Arnav looked at the walls and the potted plants, searching for an answer. He could hear Scooby barking & Gaurav joking with NK in the background.

Arnav looked at the ceiling, his eyes wide. Khushi & he had just gotten married, not climbed the Everest! And they had arrived at the farmhouse late last night! Khushi & he had spent just one night apart from their families! What was the big fuss all about?

He could hear his family laughing like mad at having successfully pulled his leg.

Arnav walked into the kitchen from where the tantalising smell of food was wafting.

"I will help you, Khushi." Arnav offered, shocking himself. His acquaintance with the kitchen was slight, very slight.

She broke a piece of poori, dipped it into the sabzi, and took it to his mouth. Arnav was startled for a moment, but then, smiling, he parted his lips and ate from her hand.
They are adorable couple...

Khushi looked curiously at the paper and at the drawn look on his face.

She unfolded it. It was her Saasumma's letter to her. Her eyes moved slowly over the lines, tears filling them as she met the lady who had given birth to her Arnavji.

"Promise me that you will never leave me, Khushi. Tumhare bina..." Arnav gulped. "Tumhare bina main jee nahi paaoonga..."

Khushi hugged him thoroughly. "Then you will live a very, very long life with your Sanka Devi." she promised against his lips.

And they lived happily ever after..

Smita ji...you are a fairy tale writer..

I love your stories ji... 🤗

New story from Monday...

( its after 7 months tht i am looking forward to this Monday... ) 😃

Rashmi..its last part...so ur interpretation will be extra special...i knw... 😃 Waiting for your post..

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 12 years ago