Rudra and shambhavi (A Moharika FF) update pg 145

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PAYEL DEY

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

OMG😳😳😳😳😳😳...its a super romantic update...m in my dreamland now after reading it...n loved the music...

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Riti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

gr8 update jyoti 👏
UD soon

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Very well-written

So now there is fire on both sides. AMBULANCE is needed 😆.

Jokes apart, but I am really happy that they both are feeling for each other.

And love your selection of music, apt for the situation.

All the best for further update 👍🏼, and thanks for the PM 😊

Lastly, HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY, Jyoti.

Thanks for your help today, it helped a lot.

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Kavyyaa

@Kavyyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Loved the way Rudra came to help Shambhavi they are already in love and wow love the tune Jyo. 😛

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ShivsSudishna

@ShivsSudishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Such a heart touching & beautiful Update! Very well done! 👍🏼

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Annu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Shola Jo bhadke dil uskaa aur hamaraa tadpaye!!!...update ati sheeghre...!!,😊

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Romi

@romi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Ishq Ka Asar Hone laga hain...But feel Sad for Both of them Pain in the heart & also injured Physically...

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Romi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Jyothi Darling...I love ur story Rusham, Im a Person who admires art in any form & Nature. Itna pasand aaya mujhe aapki Yeh Kahani...Ki hum Sochte hain ki Jyothi..Kya likhenge nxt & the best part is the actors u have chosen blends with the story so well...Sirf ek request if u can put Some Hatke & wonderful one liner...which stays in our mind for long time & u have to Promise...Once Rusham is done you have to continue with Something new & would like to have Rusham Story in one page from start to end...As i said before I have become ur fan. Aajkal T.V main bhi itni achi writing nahi kar rahe Jitna humain tumaara pasand aaya hain...

Edited by romi21 - 12 years ago