Rudra and shambhavi (A Moharika FF) update pg 145 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Pleasant music and beautiful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is amazing Jyoti. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update and also the music u have chosen for the situation. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very beautiful story 😊.
This story of yours has everything passion,romance and hatred.
With all these 3 elements that love story is full of life, and you encompassed each of these elements very beautifully.
Loved each and every update, each update has love at its zenith.They say, Pyaar Ki Parakashta in every update.
You are wonderful writer, Jyoti ⭐️.
Do continue and thanks for the PM 👏
Sorry my like button is not working so my this comment is for every update written by you
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Posted: 12 years ago

Next morning

Shambhavi wakes up and realized that she was sleeping resting her head on rudra's shoulder. She quickly gets up but rudra was still sleeping. For the first time shambhavi didn't feel odd and awkward she was watching rudra with a slight smile on her face. But then she controls herself.

Shambhavi: rudra, wake up

Rudra was still asleep

Shambhavi: rudra, wake up its morning.

Rudra was still asleep then shambhavi goes near him and touched his shoulder to wake him up.

Rudra: rudra, get up now, its morning

Rudra wakes up and opens his eyes. He quickly gets up.

Rudra: I am sorry, I was.

Shambhavi stopped him in the middle

Shambhavi: you don't need to say sorry. You were only sleeping.

Rudra: so now what?

Shambhavi: what? We have to continue our journey.

Rudra: it looks like you forgot that your two days are over and now it's my turn and my time.

Shambhavi: I remember very well and a deal is a deal. I will do what we have decided. I am ready to follow you.

Rudra: very well princess, now you will ask no questions. You will come with me wherever I'll take you.

Shambhavi (disappointment): alright, now can we go?

Rudra: sure why not? Follow me and one more thing we are not going in the same direction. We are going on the other side.

Shambhavi was stunned hearing this.

Shambhavi: but we have to reach my kuldevi's mandir. We'll be there any moment.

Rudra: yeah, I am hearing this for past two days. Why can't you just accept that you don't know a way to the mandir. Just because of you we get lost in this big forest.

Shambhavi (anger): don't blame me ok and by the way what makes you think that you'll find a way out of this forest. How can you be so sure?

Rudra: I am not, but I'll try my best to find a way out

Shambhavi: we'll see and if you fail then you what you have to do

Rudra: yes princess I know what I have to do. I will not show my face again and will not come after you.

Shambhavi: it's good that you remember now let's go and tell me in which direction we are going?

Rudra: we'll go west

Shambhavi: fine. Let's go

Rudra and shambhavi started their journey again in new direction. Though shmabhavi was not in the mood to go west but she'll have to follow what rudra said coz she was bound with the deal.

Vajramitra reaches to the place where shambhavi and rudra stayed at first night.

Baldev: it looks like they were here. And they light fire here. Look at the ashes

Vajramitra inspects the place and said

Vajramitra: it looks like we are close. Let's continue our journey to find them; They must have not gone too far.

Baldev: but maharaj there is one problem

Vajramitra: what is it?

Baldev:rain has erased prince and princess's footmarks. We can't follow them anymore and we don't know in which direction they went

Vajramitra becomes disappointed hearing this.

Vajramitra: now it will become very difficult to find them but I am gonna rest until I find my son. I'll look for him everywhere even if I have to search this whole forest.

Baldev: but maharaj, where do we go now?

Vajramitra: we'll go in west direction. Probably they have gone in the west. I know we are not sure but we have to take chance.

Baldev: alright maharaj we'll go in west direction.

Vajramitra and baldev went to west to find rudra and shambhavi.

Rudra and shambhavi were crossing a small river. They drink water and continue their journey. After walking for a while shambhavi saw that one of her anklet is missing. Shambhavi gets tensed.

Shambhavi: stop

Rudra: what happen?

Shambhavi: my anklet, it's missing I have to find it now

Rudra: let it go princess, it's just an anklet. You can have as many anklet as you want.

Shambhavi: no that anklet is very special for me. I can't lose it or else I will not able to forgive myself ever.

Rudra: what so special about an anklet?

Shambhavi: you won't understand, I am going to find it

Rudra: but where will you go you don't even know where you have dropped it

Shambhavi starts crying.

Shambhavi: I don't care I am going to find it.

Rudra: don't be stupid princess. This forest is very big and dense. You seriously think you can find a small anklet here.

Shambhavi: I don't wanna waste time.

Shambhavi went to find her missing anklet.

Rudra: this girl is so stubborn. It's no use to make her understand.

Rudra too goes behind her.

Rudra: wait princess, I'll help you to find your beloved anklet.

Shambhavi was searching for her anklet everywhere. But the forest was so dense that it was even impossible to find a small thing there. Shambhavi was crying a lot and cursing herself. Rudra was trying to make her understand. While Searching for the anklet they came back to the same river which they crossed before. Shambhavi was praying to maa kali to help her in finding that anklet. After searching for a while she find that anklet near the river. She was relieved seeing that anklet but as soon as she was going to take it she hurt her foot with a spiked stone and her foot started bleeding. She fell on the ground with pain. Rudra comes

Rudra: what happen princess? Let me see

Shambhavi: I am fine it's just a little scratch and nothing else.

Shambhavi was avoiding showing her foot to him but rudra saw her that she is hurt and she is in pain. He forcefully looks at her foot.

Rudra: you call it a scratch. Your foot is bleeding. Where were you looking?

Shambhavi doesn't say anything. Rudra take a small piece of cloth and tie it on her foot.

Rudra: you found your anklet. Now let's go. Can you walk?

Shambhavi: yes I can, let's go

Shambhavi gets up slowly and take a step but again sits down with pain. She wasn't able to walk. The cut was deep.

Rudra tries to make her walk but no use. After few attempts of walking finally rudra carries her in his arms.

Shambhavi: wait, what are you doing? Put me down now

Rudra: if I do so then we'll never be able to get out of this jungle

Shambhavi: I can walk. Put me down

Rudra gets a little angry.

Rudra : will you be quiet? I am not gonna listen to you anymore. You are following me, remember? This nature of yours in not gonna help ok. So you better keep quiet.

He scolded shambhavi. Shambhavi didn't say anything. It was the first time someone scolded her. Rudra was walking carrying an injured shambhavi in his arms. Shambhavi was looking at her lovingly. She too felt something for rudra. Suddenly rudra looked at her and she turned her face. Both were stealing glance. Rudra was walking for hours taking shambhavi he was exhausted and it was evening.

Shambhavi: we should find a place to stay at night. I know you are exhausted

Rudra: alright.

After searching for an hour they find old ruins of some temple.

Shambhavi: is it safe to go there?

Rudra: I don't know but we don't have any other option

Both went to that temple. It was very silent and it was very dark in there. That place was full of bats and other insects. Rudra brought some woods and light the fire.

Rudra: how is your foot?

Shambhavi: the pain is little less.

Rudra: have you ever seen this place?

Shambhavi: I don't know about this place. I only went to the mandir which my ancestors built and I have gone there before with my father.

Rudra becomes a little angry hearing vikramaditya's name.

Shambhavi: my father is a very nice person. He always thinks about others. He is very kindhearted too. He is a king but ne is not proud at all.

Rudra was listening to this and getting more furious. Shambhavi was appreciating her father more and more which was making rudra angrier. Finally rudra said

Rudra: stop, I can't take it anymore.

Shambhavi: what happen? What did I say?

Rudra: you are appreciating your father in front of the person whose mother was killed by your father.

Shambhavi becomes shocked and stunned hearing this

Shambhavi: what are you saying? My father can never do anything like this.

Rudra: yes he does. He is a killer. He killed my mother. And I will take revenge of my mother's death from your father.

Rudra told her everything and the purpose of kidnapping her. Shambhavi was hurt and sad hearing all this. She couldn't believe what she heard. She was highly upset and disappointed. Somewhere in her heart she started liking him but after hearing all this she was disappointed and sad.

Shambhavi: my father can never do anything like this. You are wrong and why would I trust you. You are no one for me.

Rudra too becomes a little hurt hearing this.

Shambhavi: I never even imagined that these are your true intentions otherwise I would have never made a deal with you. You call yourself a prince and a warrior and you are using a girl to take revenge. You should be ashamed of yourself.

Rudra becomes furious hearing this.

Rudra: yes I have done all this for revenge. But your father left no other option for me. But probably you are right I should have never used you for my revenge coz it has nothing to do with you. Your father snatches away my mother from me.

Shambhavi: enough, I will not hear a word against my father. I should have never trusted you. I am going and if you want to stop me forcefully you can do it.

Shambhavi and rudra gave each other stern and sad look. Shambhavi left from there. She was having difficulty in walking but still walking bearing the pain.

Rudra saw her going and turned towards other side. He didn't stop her but was sad because she left.

Shambhavi was in forest she was going and thinking about all the past incidents. She was crying and was having pain. Suddenly she heard some noise. Some men came from the bushes and encircled her. Shambhavi realize that one of them was the same person whom she and rudra defeated. He was the same tribes' man and now he comes with more men. Shambhavi didn't get scared although this time they were in large number. Some of them were with bow and arrow. A man attacked on shambhavi but shambhavi defends herself. But after that some more men attacked n her. She was trying to defend herself but due to her injured food she was unable to do so. After fighting for some time they caught her. One of them was about to touch her when someone came and stopped him by holding his hand. It was rudra.shambhavi was surprised seeing him.

Rudra: Don't you dare touch her.( i loved writing this line)

Rudra gave him a nice punch on his face. He started fighting with them all alone. He snatches away a sword from one of them and started fighting. Shambhavi too manages to snatch away a sword and starts fighting though she was injured. Rudra and shambhavi together fight with all of them and they were defeating them all. After defeating them all rudra looked at shambhavi and shambhavi has no expression on her face suddenly rudra saw that a man attacked with the arrow and shambhavi. he screams

Rudra: shambhavi.

He pushed her hard and she fell, he saved her but the arrow hits rudra. Shambhavi becomes stunned watching all this. She took the sword and killed that man. Rudra fell on the ground and shambhavi screams "Rudra".


Edited by jyoti07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update jyoti, ab aag dono taraf bharak gayi hain, par iske chakkar main bechaare rudra ko ghaayal hona pada.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tarakari

awesome update jyoti, ab aag dono taraf bharak gayi hain, par iske chakkar main bechaare rudra ko ghaayal hona pada.

ARIJIT AAGE AAGE DEKHO HOTA HAI KYA. ABHI CHINGARI BHADKEGI😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
both updates are just breathtaking , hehe i am feeling like watching movie , but rudra doesn't seem that evil to me , why u kee[p saying he is devil in disguise??
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Posted: 12 years ago
jhumt he was a devil but shambhavi changed him. because of her he changed a bit. he was mesmerized by her from the very first meeting. shambhavi has really something special. in those two days he changed completely otherwise his only motive was to take her to mahisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww the sad tune for such an intense update. Very good one Jyoti. 😊

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