Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED]

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aneed3

@aneed3

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

hey.. very nice update... loved krisha...

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

nice start👏

continue soon

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Awesome start
I thought only swayam loves sharon but lol even sharon loves him.
Their pov was nicely penned
Looking forward to next part
Update it soon
ps. update best journey too

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Mind blowing update...loved Krisha's bond...And now that Sharon is coming to Mumbai...Hope we get a lot of Swaron moments 😳 Update soon 😊

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Nice start
Love the update
Thnx for the pm
Do update soon

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Amazing start...👏

waiting for the next chapter...

continue soon...

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

krisha were the highlight forme---and i loved the convos smarty.

update soon

love---medha

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

Actually you remember in my other FF best journey you asked why did I have Taani and not Kriya... Well there I needed the family so Taani was the one present... But here either or them can be present in the story so I can actually say just for you here I included Kriya and not Taani 😆 😉

family main toh you could have also made kriya

i mean FF's are fiction koi bhi kisi ka bhi bhai/behen ban jata hain

i have read a lot of FF's with kriyam as sis-bro

so agli baar whenever you need family please make kriya the sister...