Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED]

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

amzing chappy dear
awesome
luvd it
do update soon

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vrushan11swaron

@vrushan11swaron

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

first chapter really gud..
update nxt part soon

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awesome chapi!!:D
Sharon coming to Mumbai!!:D
Update soon!!

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Hey..I guess I m a,lil late..lost the track of tym dis days..anywaysya...awsm chap yaar nice story like always but this one is wid a nice n different concept...jst awsm...and yaa will be waiting for d nxt chap...and I know its coming soon...every writer on if shud learn smthng from u...u give regular updated and dats so freakinn awsm..

Rohan :)

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Great start.
They are going to meet and they both still love each other😃
Feel sorry for Sid.
Both Swayam and Sharon's pain was very well portrayed. I guess Kria and Rey are going to play pivotal roles here.
Update soon like you always do.

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

just awesome..
totally loved it yaar..
swayam 3 years n still holding on to sharon only he can do that ❤️..
swayam is truly lover boy..love him so much😳
sharon now realise that was not just mere attraction but love..
she thinks he may be moved on😲
n bcoz she hurt him so much that he thinks she doesnot deserve him that's why marrying someone else[:O]
but now sharon is coming to mumbai for a month excited to read what happens next😃
swayam heard krisha convo wow..

thanks for the pm😊..
n update soon

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reet_26

@reet_26

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

wow new ff
Awesome concept
nice update

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Wow!!

Awesome concept, brilliant CS nd amazing start!!

Ty for PM nd do update soon:)

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

awesoms CS and the first chapter was amazing aswell..
loved the way you expressed Swayam and Sharon's feelings..
beautifully written 👏
damn excited to read further do update soon!!
thanks for the PM 🤗