SwaRon SS- Unchained Hearts|chapter four-Page 16|

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@Angel-luvs-s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Awesome update mihika... I like the love hate relationship that they share...loved it..continue soon 😊

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Omg Omg!!! Why the hell did u stop there????
Plz plz plz continue soon!!!

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

it was small, but i loved it mihi!!!

Baboon headed moron? 😲 poor swayam 😆 Loved their quarrels and swayam's knok-jhoks!!! 😳

Sharon has a crush on swayam? wow... im sure that crush is not at all gone dissolve!!!

update asap 😊

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

it was awesome ..read both parts now only..
like old days swaron fight..loved it alot..
shareyam lost their way n rey leave swaron alone 😃
they have to spent time with each other no way out hehe

sharon-am hungry..
swayam-"How is it possible? You have been eating
my head since forever."haha😆
loved this..
swaron had to share same room..
sharon clueless was fun to read 😃
sharon had crush on swayam since five years😲
she thinks its still on crush 😲
plz plz update soon ..
eagerly waiting:)
n plz pm me :)

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

They remind me of Mayank and Nupur, you're SwaRon, in a rather delightful way. Very simple and precise writing, I like the chapter. It's got the flow which encourages me to keep reading. Good work, woman. Thanks for the PM. (:

Kankshita

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Heena

@kamlesh32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Nice update...i like your style of writing!

Thanks for the pm and please update soon!

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

very nice update...

loved their nok jhoks...

update next part soon

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Awesome n interesting...👏 plzzz update ASAP...

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

nice update!!!👏

looking forward for the next chapter...

pls update soon..

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Un_reserved

Chapter-1

I was new reader of u'r works..But i really like u'r writing..The above SS and the concept is nice and interesting..I loved it..I liked the characters of SwaRon came for a educational trip..And divided in sub groups of 3 members with rey..Sharon hated swayam and internally liked him..Wow..!!

So if we talk about first update,I liked the tiffs between both of them..Very interesting and seriously i enjoyed..I liked the part of rey as a great friend..as a true integradient in SwaRon stories..Loved the dialouges of Shareyam..Awesome update..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago