SwaRon SS- Unchained Hearts|chapter four-Page 16|

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Mihika..🤗

Wow..what an outstanding concept!!!!😃

The story sounds interesting!!!😳

Loved the 'Khatta-meetha' fight between the two...

would love to read more...😳

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paro1311

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Siren Sharon is my fav avatar of Sharon.. so im reading this one.

Thanx for the PM nd im definitely looking forward to updates!

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

really good mihika, and me is a persistent reader for this one...coz i wait for it.

it was good to see the my -friend -the -enemy wala swaron.

and as usual your writing is beautiful

love--medha

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Trisha paul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice start...

pls update soon & do pm me...

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hey Mihi🤗

When u told me the concept ..i so knew its going to be interesting ...i love the way u write..clean...fuss-free...realistic...no cheesy stuff...i am a fan of ur writing style

Coming to the concept..its interesting and i can so see it on SWARON...different yet together...loved the 1st part...a cute SWARON fight can make anyone smile..

The arrogant DIVA..the irritating LOVER BOY(i know he dont love her right now)...what better then this...

"Rey this is a baddd idea." Swayam said stressing the word bad. "I am not gonna stay here with this girl."

"I have a name." Sharon said giving him a stern look.

"Whatever…. But the point is that I don't want to spend time with her."😆😆😆😆😆😆loved this convo

Would love to see how they fall for each other...loved the shareyam part...cute...rey as always a great frnd

Great start baby...continue soon...😳

Luv'
Deep

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow its so swaronlicious ss!!!! Its always a treat to watch nokjhok wala swaron!!! plz plz plz do continue asap!! waiting for the next chap...

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Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Woww Awesome start:-D:-D
Haha jus loved Swaron lol:-P...
Please continue:-)...

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prakriti mondal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

awesome start 😃
loved it..
believe me SwaRon were so damn entertaining 😆
please continue soon..
thank u for the PM 🤗

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Mihiks! 😳

You hardly re-continued of your SS and here you started another one? Have you taken a pill mistakenly called "Marium Madness', tell me? 🤣 Seriously! I love you if you have because i am excited to read your SS since i am not reading the other one, or rather i say which will have a tragic/heart wrenching ending as your title says, incomplete love.

So yeah, since the chapter was small so you deserve a few of abuses but i am zipped, because i am a good girl, alright? 😳

So coming to the SS and chapter, Er, title is giving me content and positive feeling, sure thing! I am definitely going for this SS and i hope this title won't cheat my conscience afterwards. Though chapter was fun actually for me to read, but i think there will be major emotional parts too in the SS and not only fun. The best thing which i felt was the characters you know, the Siren and Siren's double siren! Yes, i call this sort of Swayam with this double Siren name! 😳 I named him this after the scene in D3 in which Sharon rejected him when he told that he is a secret admirer and afterwards that scene he was boss, like if Sharon was sher then he was safa sher! I just love double siren Swayam a lot and of course the packaged treat of siren and double siren will be treat! 😎

I am very excited to read the leftover journey of their trip, it will be fun! I really want to read both of them taking sweet glances and as well as pulling each others hair and no one can write it better.

PS: Please it is my order then from now on don't ever forget to reserve for me on this SS! Make it a do or die situation and reserve all the time. I won't promise that the comments will be super long but you know when you know you are going to be first commenting then it makes you give good comment automatically. So, please! 😳

-Marium

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

wow wow wow...

What an amazing start 👏

I guess more than the romantic scene between Swayam and Sharon, we all prefer their baseless arguments and pointless fights... Because none of them gives up 😆

What I'm trying to say is, I loved the started and eagerly waiting to read more...

Continue soon and please do PM me 😉

Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago