ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed - Page 67

The author's paycheck is limited to leaving us at cliffs to hang..

Here I go catching up with chapter 5 n 6... Juhi I can't get enough off phangirling you... How do you do this... By the time I got to comment on two long parts of chapter 5, you gave us another two long updates with chapter 6... N you write so well that I am left dumb folded... Professionals should bend in before your writing...

The expedition ending was top notch... It was great fun reading and by the end of it I did take a long breath too... Thank you for bringing in this caving adventure... It surely was an added pleasure... How I wish I was brave enough to atleast think about going on one... For people like me who don't have the guts to venture out in such thrills in real life, your version was an alternate thrill...

The way you have built up the attraction that runs between Arnav n Khushi is so realistic... I am loving their chemistry... Very beautiful writing Juhi...

Was expecting Shyam to have a longer role but you knocked me out there with this surprising exit... That was totally a very welcomed unexpected turn off...

Felt as happy as Khushi when he told "I trust you"... The conversation that they had in the car was so emotionally pulling...

When everything fell in place why did Arnav have to prove that nothing was fine n he is still an jerk... God why did he invite her as his special guest when he knew that the past was still as fresh as it was 10 years back... Once a jerk always a jerk... Felt so sorry for Khushi... Now all the more intrigued to know what the mysterious past is all about...

Take your time Juhi... No hurries... We girls can always read the 6 chapters all over again till you give us the next update... Really I do read your work time again whenever I miss u or feel like phangirling you...

Shattered rocks!!!! Cheers!!!!

Originally posted by: LooneyLuna

The author's paycheck is limited to leaving us at cliffs to hang..

It does not include revealing the rasta to get off those cliffs ya?

That wonly Arnavji can show.

wow...good news... I am so much hooked on this that i keep re reading until next update. Thanks...

What an amazing cliff hanger !! I just love the way you write.

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

What the!🤣

Then hunt down Arnav...me thinks he's spelunking right now. Let's go and spelunk him

Originally posted by: LooneyLuna

Spelunk Him?!

No way...M tink he got enough of that after turning into speedy singh raizada with Sheetal ya?

Originally posted by: LooneyLuna

Spelunk Him?!

No way...M tink he got enough of that after turning into speedy singh raizada with Sheetal ya?

LMAO... Speedy Singh Raizada...!!!! Seriously...

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

Luna's on a roll...speedy singh raizada?😲😆

That was the demonic Arnav...we are supposed to spelunk the elevator rabba vey-er Arnav😳