ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

awrsum update loved both wana go with flow but past hold them again cant wait to to know wat had happeb 10 yrs ago which has still have strong effect on both of them thx for pm

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penrith

@penrith

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

wow this is a spellbinding story.. can't wait for more

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Ouch that hurt!! For Khushi to have witnessed that firsthand was earth shattering indeed.

However you wrote the part very well! When I read the prologue a small part of me had hoped that Arnav was drunk and imagining Khushi , but obviously that was not the case. It was done out iof pure revenge and vindictiveness!

Looking forward to finding out what transpired between the two in the past!

Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

This story just gets better with every update..

Now we have heartbroken Khushi and a confused,agitated Arnav...I don't know with whom I should side unless I know about their past which you will reveal in the next few updates...But I would say that I did not like the way Arnav took his revenge..

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Keenara

@Keenara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Nice update...can't wait for the next one

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Chapter 5:

God! The language of silence managed to blow my mind off!!! I totally lovved it!!!

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Chapter 6:

So, Khushi turned out to be perfectly right about Shyaam after all. I loved the kind of camaraderie that was there between them until he landed in SM.

I guess he wanted Sheetal there to make Khushi feel jealous and spit out her feelings for him but he went too far?

Arrgh!!! Juhi!!! You left us hanging there??? So the past will be revealed in the next update, then?

Humse yeh kuchh dino ki doori kaise sahi jaayegi???

😆 You simply rock, yaar! Love ya!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

I loved the way you brought out the way they started to get along...slow and gradual...calling every night and just talking...it was like A fresh start...

And then Sheesh Mahal...so well written..could picture everything that happened...imagined how Arnav saw Khushi in Sheetal...he was so longing for Her...too good!

So tents about the next update...,waiting for the past to unfold...slowly...

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cool_zephyr

@cool_zephyr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#559

I couldn't even comment on 5th and you already updated 6th.
I just loved the 5th one starting from arnav helping khushi physically, mentaloy and emotionally and its so sweet of him to give away the bar inspite of being a diabetic. Wonder what happened in the past that they are now like this.
Will come back again once I read 6th one