ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#541

How do you do that?

Involve us in one story so much! ?

I must say, like all your other readers, that this update was brilliant!

Loved it!

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

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Skye.

@Skye.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Juhi im loving these double updates :)! Okay im commenting up until chapter 5!!! I totally loved the cave scene! Omg how could u not let them kiss! Just like in the show these two took there sweet time to make out!!! Lol!!! Cnt wait to read the next part xx

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libbyferns

@libbyferns

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

I absolutely loved the chapter. It was fabulous. Now awaiting eagerly for the past to unfold.

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Skye.

@Skye.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Omg that dreaded cliffhanger! Juhi chp 6 was amazinggg! What happened in the past??? I cnt wait to read the next part!!!!

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

okk so it was abt none other thn SMJ.. well i am glad he is out of the story now..😃 tht man can never really b wanted.. but i never thought he wud b out this soon..
Being a hopeless romantic i had thought he'd b trying to do something to khushi and asr will save him resulting some momentary rabba ves.. hehe told ya hopeless romantic..😳
and the way ASR unknwingly opened up to khushi..😊
elevator scene and ahan the pic enters the stry 😉along with khushi beginning to enter the kash mai tumse nafrat kar pati phase..
finally babua thnked khushi bitwa..😃
and he comes to shesshmahal in helicopter with his aviators... *thts my cue to swoon😳😳*
i was distracted as i mentioned earlier but the name sheeshmahal brought the prologue back and yes the hatred was back..😭
was it nani or anji who called out for chote? its just tht no matter how diff the stry is or how diff the characters r.. arnav without anji is just not normal..
so nothing cud happen between sheetal as i hoped and also kinda believed.. 😃
and next update will reveal the truth it seems..
God bless my nail as i am alrdy biting thm in excitement,,,😆

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#546

It was awsumm chap totally loved it

Wht happend in the past eagerly waiting to read

Thanks for pm

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

It's been a while since I read a fanfic but I couldn't stop myself from reading this piece of two lost souls. Hope you continue soon.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#548

Wow, what an explosive update on all fronts...

First Khushi's gut instinct about Shyam Jha, but of course he had to be bad, not just because he is Shyam Manohar Jha but because the way Khushi instinctively knew that the guy was no good...

Loved the way Arnav has been slowly falling for her all along... While I reading about his changing feelings I kept thinking about the prologue all along wondering what triggered him to do what he did...

I had been constantly dreading that prologue ever since I started reading this story but while reading it I have to honestly say it wasn't that bad... Because of the way you lead us to it... Arnav's feeling for Khushi really helped me in continuing to read this chapter... His hatred for her upon entering Sheesh Mahal almost seemed demonic... As if he had come under some spell so to speak... Was glad to read that it was purely revenge which spurred him to do what he did, not that I excuse him for that, especially after he invited Khushi as his "special" guest... That whole thing was so uncalled for... And justice was served when he kept thinking he was holding Khushi in his arms & that he realized that he still wanted her...

So what had she really done 10 years ago?? It seems to me that what Arnav knew was based on hearsay... Was it Anjali who called him as Chhotey?? Did Anjali have anything to do with plotting against Khushi???

Waiting for you to reveal more... Excellent story so far, you have us gripping to the edge of our seats... Please update soon...

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago