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Throughout the Ist, part of the chapter I was nervous cause, I know that the attraction Arnav has for Khushi and the cordial relation with Arnav which Khushi cherishes will turn to hatred since they share an ugly past. I know that the bubble will burst in any second. And it happened in the second part.
Thoughts of Arnav about Khushi , how the hatred slowly changed to attraction or some kind of unknown yet undeniable feeling ,how he consciously blocks the thoughts about the past in order to enjoy the present moments with Khushi and finally the minute he landed on the soil of Sheeshmahal how the past affected his present feeling to Khushi and how the attraction changed to hatred was portrayed so convincingly. Whatever the reason may be I didn't like the fact that he used Sheetal as an instrument to make Khushi suffer. You have mentioned how Arnav's action affected Khushi in detail in the prologue and in chapter 6,u gave the perspective of Arnav also. I assume that 10 years ago also they shared feeling for each other, which was not declared because of the incident happened in the past.
Eager to know what will happen next. I could assume the mystery hidden in ur previous FF after reading two or three parts, but I couldn't make any guess about the past hidden in this story. I really expect u will give us at least some serious clue in next chapter .
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