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poor khushi.😭
feel bad 4 her.

very sad update :( :(
but u hav express every emotion beautifully in a fast paced update...
continue soon.

Originally posted by: riti4u

nice update dear...heart wrenching one...i felt though it was bit fast paced...but you managed to put arnav's emotions on loosing his child...out well...poor khushi is in denial. ..waiting to see what happens when she realises ...she hs lost her child..

keep it up...waitin fr next one..

continue soon...waiting for the next update

Wow nice prolouge continue soon cant wait to read more.

Just came across this,
Very very interesting.
Plx accept my buddy request. I would love to read more

I have left a comment on page 13 xx

Originally posted by: --Sarunholic--

Res 😉

~~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~~ Unres. ~~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~~

Yippee!!!! 🥳 So Happy to be the 1st one to comment 🥳

Dat was such an emotional update yaar 👏👏
Heart wrenchng indeed 🥺
Rula diya tune toh..
Totaly loved it.. ❤️
Wonderfuly written ⭐️

The loss of their baby has indeed left a deep scar in their lives 😔
Losing such an important part of their lives is so unfortunate..
The way Arnav vent out his shock, anger, helpnesnes..that frustatn on
nt being able to save his baby..was indeed painful 😭😭

aww.. Khushi, being the mother..wasnt even able to accept dat their
baby is no more..
Wat can be more painful fr a mother,than to lose their only child..who
was yet to be born 😒

Hope these two cope up..being each others' support systems..nd their
days of distress end up soon.. 😊
Hope they start afresh nw..with the immense love nd care, they hv fr each other

The way u portrayed their emotions..was extremely beautiful 👏👏
Kudos fr writing so superbly 👍🏼

Simply Brilliant ⭐️

Chal ab jaldi se 2nd chapter post kar de..
Hoping..ki nxt update mein, sab kuch happy happy ho jae!! 😃

Thnku so much fr the PM 🤗

Update soon...😳

WaiTiNG

loved it