|| Pain Of a Mother's Heart || *Chapter 3 Page18* New!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A tight hug to all those who have taken out time out of their busy schedules to have a look at this Thread, 🤗
I am posting my FF that is Pain of a Mother's Heart again due to some issue, all those who are interested in reading my FF, kindly PM me for the same.

As a new writer, I am putting in alot of effort in it, and all types of critiques are welcomed, I'll be more than happy to recieve critisism, Feel free to tell me! 😃

I know, its not the write time to post my FF due to all the re-run thing going on but please take 2 minutes to read this FF 😳

I am posting the Prologue and will continue posting the chapters as an when they're ready!

A very big big thanks to --Sarunholic-- (Sanchu Di) for encouraging me to write this again I love you for it! <333 🤗



(c) Plagiarising work NOT at all accepted
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Here you go,



PROLOGUE

She was standing by the railing of the balcony, it was raining heavily...there was water everywhere.
She liked being around nature specially when it rained unlike other times, she had a protruding little tummy with her.
She smiled. She loved the feeling of being a mother, having a small little life inside you. She caressed her tummy with utmost care, fondly rubbing her tummy letting the child know that she loved it alot.

As they say, the journey of a woman is complete when she experiences motherhood. 'So true' thought Khushi.

It was altogther a new feeling, like you are holding on to a life which is of your own. She just couldn't wait to hold her own child in her hands.
Touch it, pamper it, kiss it. Ah 'the wait is too long' thought Khushi.

'Arnavji is even more excited than me' thought Khushi as she giggled remembering how he was caring and pampering her when he got to know that she was pregnant with his child.
He wouldn't let her stand and neither would her let her walk, he'd always lift her up with utmost sensitivity and wouldn't even let her walk an inch.
She chuckled again remembering how Arnav used to stuff her mouth with extra food so that her stomach would store in some for the baby.

All this made her feel so special, she also recalled her annoying mood swings and stomach pains due to which, Arnav wouldn't sleep at all and would stay up all night
for her safety, making sure whether she needed anything or not.
She loved each and every moment she lived with Arnav, their serious conversations about the baby's education, their sweet little talks about the nights they spend together,
his teasing or rather the horrifying talks about the 'labour pains' and the delivery time which used to scare her, but when it was about the baby, she could bear any pain, any discomfort and any suffering as it was her and Arnav's symbol of love.

The noise of loud thunder filled the balcony, she panicked as she really feared lightning and thunder.
and what happened after that left Khushi petrified,

"AHHH" cried Khushi as she went rolling down the stairs as she had slipped due to the excessive noise of thunder.

And withing a span of 2 minutes it was all over. Their dreams were shattered, like pieces of a broken glass.

She had a miscarriage.

Note to all my readers---
All people who are interested in this one, please Buddy me for updates, It's difficult for me to PM everyone indivisually (especially who are not in my buddy list) so please :)






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IDatIF thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Countinue soon . Good start
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start dear..
Thanks for the pm..
Update next chapter soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res. for now!! 😳 Will be back soon 😃

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Unres. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Woww!! So Finally.. 🥳 U are Back with a Bang..!!! 🥳
Wat a Superb Start ⭐️
Beautifuly written 👏👏
The Title itself is so gripping
Totally loved the Prologue ❤️


Omg!! Poor Khushi 😭😭
Completely left shattered now.. 🥺
Losing a part of ur life..growing within u.. is indeed very painful
Living with that sorrow, the feeling of helpnesness, that unmeasurable
amount of pain is such a difficult phase in one's life 😔
The baby..whose future she must hv been weaving in her dreams every
night..has, in a fraction of a second, been taken away frm her..!!!
She has indeed lost a part of her life 🥺


But m sure her loving, caring nd the most perfect hubby ever..wud
defntly take her out of her sorrows 😃
Hope they start their life afresh, nd leave all their miseries behind..
Their loss, undoubtedly, has left their lives incomplete..but they
gotta stay together, being each other's support 😳



aww..the way u described Khushi remembering abt her past..the super
sweet memories, was beautiful ⭐️
Her cravings during pregnancy, her crazy antics, Arnav fulfilling her
each nd every wish, being super protective nd caring..
Everything u described so amazng..it seemed as if their entire
journey is running in front of my eyes!!

Such a beautiful nd a perfect portrayal of their emotions..
Ab aur kya kahun..tu to chhaaa gai yaar!! 👏

Cant wait anymore fr the nxt update
U left it at such a cliffhanger 😡
Ab na..u gotta update this soon..warna
Samjhiii ?? 😆😆

So..update asap.. 😳
nd thanxx a tonn fr the PM 🤗
Luv u loads ❤️


PS: super duper sorry fr unresng so late.. 😳
Hope i made up fr it by my comment above!! 😉
Edited by --Sarunholic-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prolgue . pls continue.
Edited by shaki27_hiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Prologue!!!
Jaldhi continue karo!!! :))
PM ke liye thxwa!!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my 😲
*maria already starts crying* 😭 Khushi had a miscarriage 😭 everything is broken 😭
oh Arnav will react? will he support her like he already did or yaa phir ghusse mein kuch galat karenge?
I know it's a sad FF but i can't wait to read the next chapter plz do continue😳 I CAN'T WAIT😃

add me as your new fans 😳😆
hugs 🤗
Maria
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amaizing 😊
superb😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls continue! and pm me!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MariaArHiholic

oh my 😲

*maria already starts crying* 😭 Khushi had a miscarriage 😭 everything is broken 😭
oh Arnav will react? will he support her like he already did or yaa phir ghusse mein kuch galat karenge?
I know it's a sad FF but i can't wait to read the next chapter plz do continue😳 I CAN'T WAIT😃

add me as your new fans 😳😆
hugs 🤗
Maria



*feels extremely embarrassed*
My first attempt and getting a fan is like Ouch 😳
Coming on how Arnav is gonna react, You gotta wait 😛
Thanks mate,
Will surely PM you

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