Virika OS - The Day i found my True Love EndingPg5 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
a brilliant update...👏
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
absolutely superb totally loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Loved it a lot,
Awesome update,
Viren was rocking yaar,
Jeevika is cho chweet, loved them totally n completely,
The Way he proposed her was fab,
Their kiss was so passionate.
Loved it
N thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
speechless!!!
every word that you penned down was nothing but perfect!
It all fit so smoothly and perfectly...
Awesome job Navya and keep writing stories for us greedy readers ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awesome ,sweet update...
Just loved it...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Hey... awsm os...LOved the party...virikas confession... their romance... how viren gave jeev love bite...And the last lines were too good... loved it...Thanks fr th pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Superb story!
So damn amazing
really loved it
and the ending was just perfect! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Res

UNRES!
Stunning OS Navya..!!!
Loveeed it ❤️
the conduct left me speechless...
One of the Best OS's i read...the story was just flawless
the way the two met and Love dawned over...LOVE LOVEEE LOVEEED IT!
the secretly adoring of smiles..the hatred to love... left me stunned!
You should definitely write more and more...can't have enough of your work!

THANK YOU FOR THIS TREAT NAVYA 🤗

Love you ❤️
Edited by nimiksham - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Really sry navya for not commenting on the previous part...just read the two parts in a go nd trust me it was brilliant...!!!
Just a cute little perfect lovestort defining the true love...!!!
loved all the scenes from their meeting at party to their fight to frndship nd confession nd the romance too...!!!
just loved the story
finally jeevika got her true love...!!!
mindblowing...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
awesome update thanks for the pm

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