Virika OS - The Day i found my True Love EndingPg5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the os

It was phenomenal

Jeevika's a nerd again

But I have to say she's a really cute one

Loved Virika's conversation

Really wonder how their going to fall in love

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon

Sorry unreserving late
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Another great OS.
Reminded me of my favorite Married at 18!
Why is Jeevika always a nerd?😆
Anyways really want to read the next part continue soon! <3
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before reading your note in the end i though it was the end n i literally started cursing you to end like this 🤣. omg i totally loved the nerd😊 jeevika omg she refused so many propaosals😲 . i loved her friends n how they took her to the party😉 . viren vadhera the hotty its obv n jeevika the topper eager to read the last part 👏

thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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atleast m on the first page

ahhaaa
navya wid an OS
superb

intro was amazing
i kinda loved jeevika character
she is just so waow

i really thank liza and riya to make jeevs go to tht party

loved the virika first meeting
haha..
was seriously having fun reading it

"eventhough i always tried to be bold enough infront of others but inside i'm the biggest scary cat ever.. "
aww jeevs is too cute ..lol

waiting for the second part
and hellooo navya madam MA18 and FWP ???
its one week now
update soon
Edited by candyVirika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh superb just luvd it
plz add me in ur PM list
cont soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Navya excellent Start.. Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please PM me when you wrote it or any your new OS😳
Edited by -Deepali- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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navya...it's too gud !!
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Got me hooked navya!!
Can't wait to see what viren does!!

Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good OS..Loved it..😊
You are an awesome writer n especially the way u write these love-hate stories are a treat to read..
thanks for penning this down...Nicely described..felt like watching a movie..
Thanks for the PM..
cant wait for the next part...

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