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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

res 😃
UNRES 😳

ohhh myyy gosh navya it was simply WOWWW 😳

i have no words to describe it 😊
FANTASTIC and MINDBLASTING update 👏

such a beautiful and lovelyyy ending dear 😳

ur stories r always treat to read !!
BRILLIANTLY written OS 👍🏼

i loved Viren's sudden confession and then jeevika's realisation 😳❤️
and their first kiss ☺️ hayeee and the sweet love bite by viren 🤢

plzzz dear keep writing such lovely stories !!
u r a great writer 👍🏼

Edited by -Latty- - 12 years ago

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Res *UnRes*

This was a great OS.

I loved it!

I'm glad to know about Viren. His character was amazing.

I previously though he would be rude.

The ending was perfect! <3

Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

res

unres

omg

navya!!!!!!!

another brilliant idea :)

i loved it

to the update now--

well its funny how she told off ppl 😆 too hilarious :)

then how she was soo bored

then decided to go to the terrace

and picked up an encyclopedia 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

then out of the blue when she just heard his voice :))

then when he was clearing the misunderstandings of him being a badboy

then gossipping like 2 gals jk jk 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣

then on to watching t+j in his room :) ❤️

then laughin and enjoying life 👍🏼

then him declaring his love for her :))

then her honesty of being unsure as to if it really was love or not

the proposal :))

the kiss

and at last...

she got the perfect bf yyayayaayayayaay

navya i really liked this os

brilliant idea

fantastic words and description

i could picture everything thats what made me love it even more :)

thanks for the pm as well

and continue writing such superb stories :)

~~deej~~ <3 ❤️

Edited by starstellie - 12 years ago

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

OMG wonderful and awesome OS..perfect and excellient

Edited by -Deepali- - 12 years ago

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome ending and a good OS..Loved it..😊

It was so sweet ...especially the way Viren confessed his love for Jeevika and the way eevika accepted n confessed her feelings..

It was cute and beautifully written..

Thanks for the PM..

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millee18

@millee18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

another grt update frm u...
but dont want to believe...tht it ends now...!!!
wanted more nd more of it!!!!
flawless work!!!!
i m just drooling away!!!

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

reallyyy amazinggg...i loveddd it...

ek choti si request...if u could make this story as SS or FF...i know it will be difficult for you...as u are busy with ur other ongoing stories...

but, seriouslyyy, this story was amazinglly superb...i would really love to read more on after their marriage, their frnds's reaction..etc etc,...

plsss navya jaan...

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Res

Unres

Loved the second part of the os

It was phenomenal

Aww poor Jeevika was getting bored

Lol she picked up a encyclopaedia

Out of nowhere there came Viren

Turns out Viren isn't a badboy

They were just going crazy and laughing

Aww you brought back memories Tom and Jerry

Bless Viren he didn't want to take his hand off Jeevika's hand

Loved the dialogues

Loved his proposal

Loved how you portrayed their emotions

Their kiss ❤️

Naughty Viren you want to give a love bite

Jeevika you can't do anything in the end he's Viren he will not listen to you

Finally Jeevika found the best boyfriend ever

Thanks for the pm

Please make more

Absolutely love your work

Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Edited by candyVirika - 02 July 2013 at 1:20pm on page 5

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

mind blowing

viren actually fall jeevs since a long time

finally he confessed it he proposed her n her kissed her to which she responded

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