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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

reading ur two ff's already i had no doubt that you write amazingly great!

but this os: khushi's something her mother wud despise, s he wasn't wid her sister when it was her last mometns..

she's flawed, she slept around wid guys to crack deals!

but well all his darkness and Arnav fighting against it with her!

his love healing her wounds.. his love and evry bad thing wud change!

while love wud just be the same!😊

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

beautifully written...👏

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Premeer ki Chahat

@x.titli.x

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

this was so intense i could feel some tension through reading your OS gosh poor Khushi but Arnav's love was with her always...😳

I loved it and so beautifully written

if this is your first OS then aage kya hoga😳

DO WRITE MORE *dammit* 😃

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@Chocolate_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

congrats for your first os but i still have a doubt because it is so beautifully written in first go...excellent work yar
khushi sleeping around just for the deals and turns out to be a woman whom her mother and sister hates...
arnav was always there for her and she always forgot him
arnav healed her injured throat to injured soul made her proud of her...and she started taking his advice from simple matter to everything
superb ending four year they stayed together and he healed her and they are together for eternity
thanks for pm

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-MKM-

@-MKM-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome Os..
Beautiful...😊
Loved it..

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I am reading your FF, and I knew this would also be a great piece of work.
And when I read, I am speechless completely.
The power of writing is that you can make the reader feel the emotions of the characters of your story & you just did that!
I felt a lump in my throat while reading about khushi...
Everyone makes mistake in their life be it small or grave...
But the one who accepts you with all flaws you have is the one who loves you truly, madly & Deeply <3

You have written it flawlessly & & gracefully <3

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