Arranged Marriage (ArHi) Thread 9 (NEW THREAD Pg 1 - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago
u not a good writer 😡 one of the few very good writers on IF

thank u for the update

i enjoyed Arnav beating the man up

loved the intensity in this update, loved how their closeness was speaking more than what their mouths could have said

yes i am dying for them to kiss

loved how Arnav would not let go of the hug

Mr Bruz 😡

fab update keep the good work up xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
1. you are good writer krani so dont say like that

2. I love the pace of story

3. Studying as well as working is not easy so take care of you

4. All the best for your career
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaah they are going to kiss :) Thanks for clearing the queries. I did nt have any query though except the KISS one . I know they ll eventually fall in love, kiss and do the other things ;) also .

You are the best IF writer Krani

Thought of letting u know this, I can read all AM posts but room 420 with out signing in to IF .

~ Waiting for Arshi's first kiss in AM


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Posted: 12 years ago
dont worry we understand we will wait for u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
god i was inactive for 1 week n i missed 2 updates which was really beautiful. i loved it. you have written it so wonderfully, i liked the way you portrayed Khushis fear and Arnavs anger. it was so beautifully written. and yeah Mr.Bruzzi is a snob.
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Posted: 12 years ago
bingo krani!

even i have been a bit frustrated at times tht they've not even kissed each other... but i like the pace of this story!

u r right! from a person like arnav to expect warmth is difficult... so now his changeover must be confusing khushi!

even i want u to pick up the pace a bit so that i get to see a diff khushi now :))) but i leave that you...

im loving your work! keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
I realize that I never asked you any questions.
Pace was supposed to be slow from the beginning as you have mentioned a lot of times before too. And as far as much slower speed in the honeymoon phase I take it as the laying of foundation. Once the foundation is laid strongly, the building would be erected easily. (Please excuse my language here, in the office and was checking architecture & structure of a building or as my boss says marry the two😆)
This honeymoon phase which is still in progress has developed space for a lot of things. Both Arnav Khushi have come to a level of understanding, their comfort & discomfort both are increasing (discomfort with the proximity/sexual tension). Also trust is building up from both the sides. She knows he won't force her or hit her and he knows she is not a gold-digger.

Love will come slowly and without it story won't be completed.

And yeah now coming to the kiss I must say there were times when I just wondered if they would kiss specially after the opening quote in the last update. "Those sweet lips.." 😳 I thought may be they would. But after the update I understood the last line of the quote "Good things come to those who wait" 😛☺️

It's pretty much clear in last few updates that she knows that he is putting in efforts after their fight but she doesn't know if it's temporary or permanent.

I thought his sinking company was one of the reasons he married Khushi though he never wanted to marry her. I don't know if I'm right or not.

Lets not get to the irregular updates. 😆

And well as far as for you not answering my questions, I never ask them. 😃 But I know you read all of the comments and your once in a while scrap makes me smile. 😊




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Posted: 12 years ago
Isnt it time yet for ur weekly update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have been a silent reader n I must say u write exceptionally well n I absolutely loved how u took out time to answer the questions of the readers..
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Posted: 12 years ago
U are a very good writer... Please continue doing so. Appreciate your hard work and the time u spend to complete your writing. I will keep u in my prayers so that u get the strength to overcome all the hurdles u are facing in your personal life. Don't worry this phase of life will pass away making u a strong person. Good Luck and continue writing.


Love U
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