Arranged Marriage (ArHi) Thread 9 (NEW THREAD Pg 1

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Arranged Marriage Thread 9


Thank you so much for letting this story reach Thread 9! Since this was my first FF on ArHi, I was really apprehensive about it, but thank you for enjoying the story so much, analysing the parts, the characters, etc. I have loved every comment I have read and hopefully I am able to do justice to the future storyline as well :)

I know my updates have gotten irregular, but that is due to the fact that it's my last year at University. Please bear with me, I will try to take the time out whenever possible.

This is a slow-paced story. So if you are not a fan of emotions being build up till breaking point, then i am sorry, this is exactly what this story is about :)

For the current readers: I really cannot thank you enough for reading this story and showering all kinds of encouragement and constructive criticism! I

For the silent readers: I understand that there are silent readers out there, and I know you are probably silent if you are starting to read my story and forming an opinion of it. However since this is thread 9, hopefully an opinion has been formed, hence would love to hear from you. Even the smallest words of acknowledgement are appreciated! :)

For the plagiarisers: I am tired of saying this, but I'll say it again: Don't plagiarise. You will be caught, and my anger won't be pretty.


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Finally, I really hope you enjoy this story, because I am enjoying writing it :)

~K
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Index




Thread 4

Thread 5 - Links for the parts on thread 5 are found on Thread 6

Thread 6

Thread 7

Thread 8

Part 46 - below.

Part 47

Part 48

A Q&A with readers (imp)

Part 49

Teaser for Part 50

Next thread---> Thread 10

Edited by Krani - 12 years ago
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Trailer:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOEtZdwuuSA[/YOUTUBE]


Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOEtZdwuuSA



Story So Far - I'll try to be as brief as possible.

Arnav and Khushi are arranged into a marriage, which is later revealed to be something that was being discussed by their grandparents for a long time. The reason for the marriage is still not revealed, but financial problems are hinted at.

Arnav and Khushi, unwillingly, become man and wife. Khushi waits for Arnav in the room, however he throws her out, too angered by the fact that he is not tied down with a middle-class girl, to care about anything else. Anjali warns him, and he relents and Khushi comes back into the room, but she sleeps on the couch. Their relationship starts on a horrible note with Arnav making sure Khushi is aware that he hates her, and that he knows she is after his money.
Khushi, at first, takes it silently, however then she starts to retaliate when she realises he is not going to respect her.
Nani, seeing that their relationship is not becoming better, as Arnav spends most of the day at the office and ignores Khushi when at home, gets Khushi to start working at AR, and informs them of their honeymoon
Arnav resents her for that and takes out his anger out on her. Khushi has a terribly time at the office, and she starts to believe that he is a horrible person.
Arnav meanwhile is shown to start to become physically attracted to Khushi, and this makes him even more angry as he wants to hate her, however he finds himself getting attracted to her.
Khushi finds his hot and cold behaviour odd, but doesn't say anything and starts to ignore him.

As their honeymoon approaches, Arnav starts needling her and trying to get her to have an outburst at him so he will have a reason to hate her more, however she leaves him dumbfounded every time as he never rises to the bait.
On their honeymoon in Australia, Arnav abandons her on their second day, and when he returns, he pretends not to care about her distraught state.

Khushi, having had enough, finally lets go of all the anger that has been bubbling inside of her. She screams, shoves and pushes him, calling him all kinds of names, because she is hurt and broken at what he has been doing to her.

Arnav realising that he has gone too far, apologises, and Khushi is momentarily taken aback.
Arnav is also surprised that he apologised, as he never apologises that easily.

Arnav tries rectifying the situation by getting Aman to buy her jewellery and leaving an impersonal note, thinking that she will be happy with the materialistic gift, however Khushi gives it back to him and asks him to earn her forgiveness.

Arnav is baffled, and tries to, however she keeps refuting him at every turn.
At first he convinces himself that he does not need her forgiveness, however as he sees her carefree self with NK, he realises that he wants her to be happy with him, and realises that he is desperate to have her forgiveness.
And in this realisation, he also realises that he likes Khushi Singh Raizada.

Arnav starts taking baby steps to gain her trust, however she is very wary of him, and this indifference and apprehension of her starts to eat him up on the inside. Every thing he does, every step he takes towards making their marriage and relationship better is futile.

One day, after Christmas, Khushi falls down from a stool while reaching for chocolate and Arnav catches her, and shouts at her in concern. Khushi screams back, not understanding his genuine concern, and Arnav snaps the control he had held over his anger, and lets her know that whether she likes it or not, he will try to make this relationship work.

Khushi and Arnav, after a series of step forwards, and step backs, finally take a step together in rectifying their marriage.

Meanwhile, Anjali is trying to save Arnav and Khushi's marriage, and the past is yet to be unfolded.
Edited by Krani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😉.
Oh poor Khushi! To much to handle in one night! She didn't know about that newspaper article. Why didn't Anjali let Aman handle the situation in time? How is this going to help Arnav and Khushis relationship? Its good that Khushi is ready to give in to make this relationship work. She feel sorry for Arnav, so does I! That poor guy have worked his ass of to get this reaction from that fellow?
This is a test for their marriage! In rich and poor, sick and health until death makes us part, right! That the promise they made to each other when they got married! Now is time to prove that to each other and keep that promise.
It was nice of Khushi take that step when she put her hands on Arnav to calm him down. It was small but big for their marriage. She is broken about the the article but she still was thinking about how hard Arnav have and still working for his business. Arnav is very calm in this situation, its says lots about him and how much he is ready to work for this marriage.
Who the hell was that guy in the last? Hope Arnav comes soon!

Congratulations for the new thread 😆
Edited by opsyellow - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread

waiting for the update

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread...
update is too beautifully written as always...
Arnav-Khushi relationship is moving
slowly forward...loved it...
I was at the edge of my sit through-out the whole convo...
feeling bad for Khushi...now wondering if Anjali's idea of "keeping things in media" was a wise one or not...
loved the update sooo much...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread. :)

After their fight, things has changed a bit between Arnav and khushi. There is an awkwardness, but not as much as before.
Loved it when Khushi worries for him, and make coffee for him. That was so sweet of her.

Just now Arnav and Khushi decided to step forward and give their marriage another chance.But sadly new storm arrived in their life.
I didn't expected that Khushi will come to know abt the article this soon. I felt so sad for her. when Mr. Bruzzi quoted few sentences abt what is media is talking abt her.

"It turns out Khushi Raizada, wife of business tycoon, Arnav Singh Raizada ensnared the businessman after sleeping with him and is now threatening him that she is pregnant with his child"
This sentence disgust me.
Media toh haath dho ke Mrs. Raizada ke peeche padi hai. :( Its high time Arnav should defend his wife.

"She suddenly craved the feel of her sister's arm around her, ands she craved for the comfort of her own home. How could they have printed such obscene stuff about her when she had done nothing wrong?
When everything they had reported was false?"

I almost had tears in my eyes. I hope Arnav console her. She needs comfort and at the moment only and Arnav can give her.

looks like Khushi is in trouble. should i be worried for her? nahh! Arnav is there to save her. ;)

Honestly speaking, don't be nervous because u had written the 46 chapter really well. Beautifully portrayed the characters. <3
Hope we get the next update soon. :D

Edited by _G1234_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
awaiting for next part , hope u post more than one.

***edit
the update was amazing
arnav is truely a business man , I don't understand y khushi is behaving like this. I do understand tht she is shattered by all the news that is being printed abt her but then she's not the only person suffering even arnav is facing much more than her.
hope khushi helps arnav come out of this business trouble.

I have always been telling this and even now your way of portraying the character is amazing.
Edited by tvmania - 12 years ago
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Congrats for new thread and update soon

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