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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav and Khushi were reeling under the after-effects of the lost deal and the media fiasco.

".. her thoughts still on Arnav and the deal he had lost."
Khushi should have been pondering about herself more. But she chose to think, worry and sympathise about Arnav and his sinking company. Clearly that shows how much thoughtful and empathetic she is, to have put aside her own problems and give importance to Arnav.

".. the lights flickering open as Khushi switched on more lights in the living room."
Arnav was sitting in the darkness/semi-darkness. Khushi switching on the lights in the living room, perhaps symbolically meant that only Khushi would light up Arnav's dull life and a life which had no happiness before Khushi came.

I felt that the flashback has two distinct significances-

1. It shows that Arnav has come a long way. It shows his humongous will power to succeed- from being a bankrupt to being a well-known, wealthy business isn't at all a cakewalk.
It shows that he also had seen his hard days. That just makes him so, so human.

2. His promise to himself about always taking care of Anjali was exactly similar to Khushi's father's promise. Both of them can connect to each other at these basic levels, irrespective of being rich or middle class.

Anjali was a Poojali at that time also, doing nothing constructive to salvage the situation. God helps those who helps themselves. But she conveniently forgets that every time.

It's wonderful to note that how just a same unpleasant childhood created and shaped up two starkly different personalities- Anjali and Arnav.

I loved the description of how a much younger Arnav running across a cobbled path, hurting his feet in the process, with just two bread pakoras. The description is so, so real that it leaves a dull, throbbing and disturbing pain in the heart, after reading it.

Khushi and Arnav both had a difficult childhood, struggling with financial problems. Khushi grew up in an environment where each member was connected with the other by a sublime bond of love, faith and warmth. She saw her parents working together towards the same goal. There was support from each and every member. But sadly, Arnav was deprived of such warmth. He had no parents to look up to for inspiration. And this is the exact reason why, inspite of being in the more or less same tough situation, they grew up to be two different individuals with diametrically opposite ideologies and sensibilities.

Khushi is one Hell of an intelligent woman. I was just amazed to read how she put her point across, so efficiently. She let him know about her childhood in a very crisp way- not a word more or not a word less. And it is so praiseworthy of her to pluck up enough courage to tell about herself and her trying to give moral support to Arnav.

I just loved the line-
" Arnav could feel the warmth of her hand on his shoulder through his shirt."
This warmth just goes beyond a mere physical feel of warmth- it was more like a salve for him in the turbulent times.
I also loved the scene where he listened to every word of Khushi with rapt attention and he found it impossible to get his attention diverted.

Neither Aman nor Shyam's calls got connected properly. I feel that somehow this situation hints at something- Arnav and Khushi are not getting any external help (in the form of Aman, Shyam or Mr. Bruzzi's deal) to salvage the situation. They only have themselves- the support they can give to each other. This is the perfect situation where both can understand each other, help each other out of this mess and finally love each other.
Arnav was going to throw the phone in anger but stopped when he heard Khushi's alarmed voice. She is just like a calming force for him.

Khushi tried to ignore her splitting headache. But perhaps it couldn't escape Arnav's eyes.

It is so, so amazing to read how Arnav kept a close watch on Khushi despite being on an important call with Shyam. His eyes followed Khushi, whether by directly looking at her or watching her through the reflection.

".. Arnav immediately turned around, his blood running cold.."

".. suddenly finding himself go breathless.."


These are the lines which perfectly show that Arnav cares about her. Other than feeling an attraction, he has already started to feel emotions that are deeper in intensity than attraction.

The scene of Khushi collapsing and Arnav coming to break her fall, Arnav going down with her to dilute the impact and Khushi just lying lifelessly in his arms while he cradled her head to his chest, is one of the most vividly described scenes.
The opening scenes showed how Khushi was concerned about Arnav more than herself. The closing scenes showed how Arnav left his call and rushed to Khushi.

They care more about the other than themselves.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for the late edit. I had been very upset because I got the first comment on the second page of the update! Thats the worst spot 😔 I wish it was several pages away. It was a near hit 😭


Meko first res chahiye ye time. Please...


We know our ArHi here currently lack love but I will hope they soon develop friendship and complete trust in each other, kyunki agar woh meri sab se achchi dost nahi hogi toh mein usse pyaar kaise kar sakta hu (something on these lines šŸ˜†)


Even after just encountering two back to back traumas in the form of media news against her calling her what not and the sexual harassment which she narrowly escaped, she only thinks about his worry and feels hurt that he didn't share it with her. But she should also realize that he hadn't shared anything with her till now, then why his worries?


A peek in to his past shows that he has worked hard to come out of the destitution and several rejections makes him feel that he might end up where he had started from


Although Arnav got to see happy and luxurious times, Khushi just got the former but not the latter. She never experienced that but Arnav had seen the extremes - too little and too much and it is a greater loss to come down from too much to too little especially when he has responsibility of another member on him - Khushi.


Khushi draws a comparison between her parents and him and her as a way to explain that he can share his problems with her like her father did with his mother and she is there for him, no matter what 😊


But, alas! He is reluctant to share! And just when he thought that Aman has called up, it is Shyam. I hope he will not reveal to Arnav about Anjali's hand in the mess! What do I see, Khushi is exhausted and has fainted and that Arnav continues to keep an eye on the boy helping Khushi even through the glass and the moment she falls, he is there to catch her - yeh hai mere true ArHi 😃 😳
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi was never the one to shy away from responsibility and now here also she has taken it upon herself to work for her marriage and play her part.

"Don't forget to be your wife's best friend as well as her husband. True friendship in marriage does away with all sorts of trouble."

In her own way she is telling him that communication and sharing will help them. She knows he's a tough one to crack.

As if his sinking business wasn't enough, now there is Khushi's sickness. Hoping it's just a case of exhaustion and nothing serious.
Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! its awesomee! khushi was trying to bring out his emotions!

oh what happened to khushi ?? :O

: ( bad phase of their life :)

beautifully writtenn! :) awesome ! :)


now waiting 4 ur next update :)


Edited by dharsh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...😊



Edited by divi153 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting.. ...
Loved the update
Finally their relationship is progressing
Thanks God kushi u made the move to talk to him
Friendship is the base of long lasting love
I hope arnav confides ol his turmoils to u
Omg what happened to kushi I hope she is alright
I knw our arnie will take care
Continue soon 😊
Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really appreciate the way u made khushi open up...she was wise enough not to start away questioning him, rather, she shared her lifes experience with him!
that was so considerate of her to ask him share his turmoil with him..!

and the flash from the past hurt me...
the way arnav was able to see his promise in what khushis babuji did made me happy! atleast he was paying attention...and i m glad he did not shoo khushi away, from him, from his thoughts, from his problems...

and what happened at the end reminded me of the mandir (teej sequence)! but this was far more realistic than khushi hanging just by the help of his arm, without collapsing ! wow! that s some talent...

and this is a teaser!
a cliffhanger!...well, not exactly...šŸ˜†

Edited by crazy-ash - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls wait ... a new stalker in the 'Q' šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved how you handled the aftermath of the most horrendous evening of their lives. Amongst all this chaos and destruction is the sowing of a vital seed of trust and faith and perhaps friendship and love.
Update asap.
Edited by siamesecat - 12 years ago

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