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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

yeah, we got a part hug... first one ever... and i loved the way they both cated for each other, him for her safety and her for his deal... both understanding the importance and depth of it... loved arnav when he said i would not hv let him hurt and khushi sais i know... how she urged him to go to get tge deal...

bad mr bruzzi... i dont like him that he doesnt call him mr raizada and now he deibed the offer too... but something tells me that this time khushi will help arnav get the deal... or am i wrong? well he cant just sink, he is ASR after all...

want to read more on arhi getting friendlier and emotionally attached now, and of course the attraction thats brewing...

ps- i loved the small details of the fight scene... u made the scene very real... cud feel all the anger, emotions and literally see the actions...

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

this was good! really good!

the rage, his possessiveness, his need to protect her, his intuition of her not being safe, his leaving behind mr. buzzini in the middle of the meet, every thing was awesome!

its just that it was really very disappointing that he did not get the deal...!

i hope khushi makes him realise the importance of colors in his life and thus help him out with his designs as well as in brightening up his life...😊

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Amazing update...
Loved it...
Feeling bad for arnav tht he cudnt crack d deal...:-(
Waiting eagarly for nxt part...

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sessy

@sessy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

just loved it.loved the interaction between them through eyes.thx for the update.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Loved it.. And yayyy, he came.. For her.. The caring Arnav... She was stopping him but he didnt want to let that moron go off.. I loved the lil scene in there.. She finding solace in his arms...

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Wonderful update... It had me blowing whistles for the first half... You had written the action sequence very well... Couldn't hold back my claps for Arnav... In Bollywood language, it was a full on paisa wasool update...

Sad that Arnav did not get this deal... Will Khushi interfere now? Poor guy... The empire he built is crumpling n his pride is at stake... Will his lady come to his rescue? Geared up for more n having a quick update was refreshing too... Thanks for taking time to write one admist your busy schedule...

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shubhi7

@shubhi7

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Amazing..loved it 👏 Khushi will support Arnav I know

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Loved how arnav safed her and beat that man blue n black!!
The part where khushi found solace in arnavz arms and arnav tried to calm her down was beautifully written!!

Uhhh ooo the deak is off,poor arnav worked soo hard fr it, but m sure there is better to look fwd to now that khushi will stand by him, though its jus the beginning

Lol aman is in such a position no one will ever wish upon its enemy!!

Jus hope things get btr between arshi n AR

Amazinggg update!!!

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

That reminded me of the Arnav from the Nainital scenes. I hope Khushi is able to get Mr Bruzzi back on their side. I know she will, somehow. I loved how you wrote Khushi's feelings. And I also love that you're updating so quickly now :)